Scootaloo and her mother are going to be hanging out with one another.
I'm a recently returned writer and plan to release alot of stories again.
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In your author's note can you change Sango-Blazer Skies to Sango_4000. Just to let you know, sorry.
4695292 I'm on my phone it won't let me change it so tommarow I will pramis
4695315 Okay
Seems promising, but you put "Scootaloo" down too many times. Just use pronouns like "She" sometimes.
Be wary of making Scoot's mom a Mary-Sue. She seems to be getting dangerously close at this point.
Actually, while I'm at it, want an Editor? I'm not sure if Sango is editing for you or just helping you write, which is why I ask.
4695672 I don't mind getting another editor, do you edit? What did you mean by Mary sue?
4695687 Yeah, haven't done any noteworthy stuff though.
Wait a minute, someone just accepted my offer to edit for them?
Never mind. How will it work? Private Message? E-Mail? What?
4695771 well when I wake up tommarow I'll send you a link to gdocks so you can fix the stuff in this story
4695672 yeah, am with her on this. some parts of the conversations felt a little... Unnatural.
this is good, I agree Scootaloo is no orphan
4695672 Are you talking about me?