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DARKPHANTOM13


A phantom of shadows and darkness that wander this site in search of Spike fanfics. May the darkness be with you.

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Twilight's parents divorced seven years ago when she was ten. She went to live with her mother while her eight year old adoptive brother went to live with their father. Now that she's seventeen and moved to Ponyville Spike is moving from Manhattan to live with her and their mother. Looks like Pinkie is going to make a new friend, maybe more than a friend.

A.U./Modern/PinkieSpike

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 215 )

Awesome start. You better not forget this story and never update :twilightangry2:

Why is your short and long description the same? Your short description is cut short. The long one has absolutely nothing to do with PinkieXSpike, in fact: It sounds like a really weird TwiSpike. Why isn't there an AU tag? 'Cause, judging how close Twilight's parents were at her coronation, I don't think their divorced.

3647793 It is just the set up. I'm not going to explain everything in one go. When I do shipping for long story I take my time. Though thanks for the tags. I forgot about them.

you have my attention and that's not an easy thing to get from please do go on ill be waiting

You have my attention:ajsmug:, but the Description is kinda a bit misleading there that has nothing to do with Pinkie x Spike. But, I digress.

What an amazing beginning :pinkiehappy: I sure can't wait to see what else you got in store

Max

You had my interest, now you got my attention :twilightsmile:

Well, this should be good

3647973>>3647983>>3647994>>3648059>>3648710>>3648966>>3649231>>3649300>>3649748 I'm glad that you all like it. This story was in a long list of story ideas. After seeing a lot of success of Human Spike school stories such as Hail Mary and Freshmen Blues I decided to give it a shot.

3647766 I'm not going to abandon a story but I've quite a few stories either out or in the making. So the updates will vary.

3649899 Hopefully either this month or the next. Though I'm writing a special surprise for everyone for Christmas.

3649951 cool but i have just one more question are you a fan of panty and stocking cause the picture your using fr the story is designed just like they are

3649963 I know of it and yeah I notice the art style is the same as the show. It was the best human PinkieSpike pic I could find.

3650027 cool it's an interesting show to say the least huh

3650044 With the most 'WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPEN?!!:derpyderp1::rainbowderp::pinkiecrazy::rainbowhuh::twilightoops:' ever with a much needed second season. Hopefully with a kickass Brief.:rainbowdetermined2::moustache:

3650077 yeah they do need a kick ass brief you know in japan it's a kids show no kidding

You're going to be living with them because I want to stay safe.

Either the dad's a jerk or there's a missing "you" in there.

Apart from a few grammar errors, this is a really nice story.

Good start up. Liked and faved for now. I'm sure you'll make it worth the fave. :twilightsmile:
Some minor errors, but overall nice. :raritywink:

Dragon:moustache:

Though I'm not intimately familiar with it, this setup seems a bit like the Fresh Prince of Bel-Air. Interesting enough premise though. :twilightsmile:

Gratz for the feature. Nice story.

3651342 I got featured?!:pinkiegasp:
*checks homepage*
God dammit I missed it!:twilightangry2:

Anyway thanks.:pinkiehappy:

3651719 :eeyup:

You remember the Speed demon ghost?
He was my favorite ghost on the show. :yay:

3652267 i like the episode where they have to go down into the toilets and fight the demon sisters

Why would spike, twilight's charge from celestia herself, be seperated from her when her parents got a divorce? How could they possibly have a friendship after seven years of being spaced so far from each other. What could possibly lead them to move in together in a random town like ponyville? Because if it is by the princess' order then why did they not just move into the castle after the divorce?
This is the kinda of stuff I think about when people use established characters in weird settings.

3652368 Don't you see the AU tag? This is a modern setting. No princesses, no magic. In this universe Spike is adopted Shining and Twilight's parents.:ajbemused:

This sounds awesome man I hope you update soon

Looks promising. I'll be watching out for this one.

I love your cover art!

3652267 and i can tell from your avatar your a fan of the doctor are you not

Interesting. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes and I'm trying to wrap my head around how he could send twenty bullies (some with bats and knives) to the hospital along with him, unless he's as bad ass as Bruce Lee of something. I'll fave this so I can follow it for now. Also, would that make Shining Armor a police chief or commissioner? :unsuresweetie:

3655517 he's great crazy but great

3656168 my favorite were ten and eleven

Very nice so far. I will stick around to see where this goes, so best of luck to you.

An entire chapter explaining a character, his backstory and his problems.


"RUN FOR THE HILLS. ITS THE LAVENDER UNICORN SYNDROME!"

Diston Q. Anarchy

DAT NAME DOE.

He starts going on and on about jelly, different flavors, how it's made, and its history.

This almost makes up for the generic backstory and grammar mistakes. Almost. :twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

3668612 Wow, you're the first person to actually catch that.:rainbowderp:

There are a few mistakes here and there but over all it's a nice first chapter. Can't wait to read the rest of it.:pinkiehappy:

Also DAT COVER ART /)*3*(\

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