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This story is a sequel to Spike: Lord of Disharmony and Chaos


Discord retired, yes, he retired from being the lord of chaos; and now Spike is his replacement.
With fresh new ideas and all the energy of youth, Spike is ready to make the life of the Mane 6 impossible; along with his loyal partners: the CMC

As all my other works, this is a translation. You can find the original in spanish here

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Comments ( 542 )

That was funny. I can't wait to for the next installment.

LET THE EPIC TROLLING COMMENCE

Are Babs and Rumble going to be agents of chaos?!?!

That was funny. But there is no such thing as the Hour of truth. Maybe right time, instead.

The craziest plans come into act.... Good job. I'll be watching

that grammar...

and apparently you forgot a little something, because you went from Twi being distracted by the CMC (and none of the others located) to them all right next to Spike when Celestia showed up...

A blue Pegasus called Black Swordsman and his wife, a white unicorn called Lighting Flash. Those are the nicknames of the SAO series!!

5785434 Is a reference to a previus fic, Pony Art Online; where Asuna and Kirito became the captains of the Moon Guard. Kirito as leader of air force and Asuna leader of the unicorn division

Loving the series so far, keep up the good work!

Very good chapter with spike and sweetie, one more thing

THE REFERENCE!!!!!!!!!
SAO is one of my favorite anime and I applaud you on that reference.
Have a pinkie:pinkiehappy:

That was a fun and entertaining read. :moustache:
I love all the stupid ways spike can mess with people. I also love how Spike and CMC are the perfect children's show bad guys, they love what they do and their goals are simple and they don't go past a predetermined limit.
Also the way he can really mess with Twilight's OCD and other character flaws. The fact Spike can do something really really small to one of the characters and through character actions and the laws of nature get everything blown out of proportion.
Reminds me of the old kids show Pete and Pete (shows my age) and for a prank they decide to move their neighbors house 3 inches to the left which caused their neighbor to go insane because they kept hitting the door frame, falling off chairs and when they reached for the door nobs they would be always 3 inches off.... sorry for the rambling.
Anyway great job, looking forward for more and the direction of the story.

This story has made me laugh i can't wait for the next chapter.

Pranks huh? Think you can take a few?

6260252 Of course, I'm always open to suggestions

Please update quicker because I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. Have a mustaucheee.:moustache:

I wonder if that's going to be a recurring joke.

Spike and the CMC as companions. Just the way it should be. :)

Baby come back!! You need to finish this STORY!! Baby come back!!

Have a moustache :moustache:

Hey bud!

If you want to translate it for me, I can do the editing. I can tell you're not very good at English. (No offense)

6604101 I know, I do this as an exercise to improve. Anyway thank you for your offer, please help me :derpytongue2:

I spent the entire chapter trying to figure out who would be the next one to join the Chaos. I forgot about Rumble.

6199736 Agreed on that. This took place right after the fanfic with the chapter called "Three Years Later" for the PAO(Pony Art Online) fanfic written by the same user with this fanfic.

ONWARDS TO EPIC GLORY! this was hilarious! also, I get the reference.

Real One: So, in this scenario Derpy is best Pegasus?

lol... I was honestly kinda expecting something along the lines of the Dark Knight quote: "Let me get this straight. You think that your client, one of the wealthiest, most powerful men in the world, is secretly a vigilante who spends his nights beating criminals to a pulp with his bare hands; and your plan is to blackmail this person?"

But I guess that wouldn't have helped to turn him to their side

6730798 It was a typo, fixed it already

Have one of Spike's pranks that everypony can only say the full truth. It'll be a blast.

Real One: Oh, putting the most hated character as one of the most strategic pieces, simply clever, Spike, buddy, it's better you work hard now, Boss won't like you being defeated by a brat like that!

I knew Spit Fire was a bitch, Fancy's a surprise though. I hope Soarin leaves the wonderbolts they can be dicks. Also if I where the kids I'd just say that they asked Spike for it and he was still their friend. AFinally with all the power Spike know has he could go to dragon and force the info about dragons go of them.

Maybe he should bring his little friend.

Spike, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo together they are the League of Chaos.

Sweetie wants to be Spike's main mare.

League of Chaos, assembled!!!!

Being the God of Chaos that Spike is, does that make him all-seeing and all-knowing too?

Also with the duplicities, the Agent of Chaos' secret identities would not only keep them safe but throw them off too.

I have one suggestion.

6759460 Well, no, Spike isn't all-knowing; he's a God but a minor one like the princesses. And go ahead, most of my ideas come from suggestions

6760094 Remember Pee Wee?

6760313 Never seen that show, sorry

6760364 The baby phoenix not the show.

6760389 Ah, yeah; the one Spike saved to become an scrambled egg

6760420 Yeah him he'll need his best buddy and fly spy.

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