Humanized Ponies!5,597 stories ·3,468 members
Spike Fanfictions5,587 stories ·2,954 members
Spike's Harems488 stories ·1,587 members
High Quality Spike Shipping779 stories ·1,524 members
Spike Fans1,549 stories ·558 members
[HUMANIZED] As Spike grows older, he becomes increasingly confused and frustrated, unable to forget his past life. Perhaps his friends can help him find himself as friendship grows into something more...
First attempt at writing fiction. All constructive criticism is very welcomed, including insulting criticism.
Page generated in 0.108 seconds
Total duration
625 users online
977,116 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Needs to be cleaned up some, but this looks like the start of something interesting. If I weren't working on my own story, I would offer to proofread for you.
Lets see.
Spike been hit by door? Check.
Spike shipped with one or more of the CMC? Check.
Weird Applebloom accent? Check.
Describing the CMC as: quiet the threesome? Check.
They are ponies? Un-check.
Curse you humanised!
If it weren't for that I could support these ships, but not if it's cross species that involes humans.
Good day.
Pretty good start. Let's see where this is going.
DANG IT, SPIKE! LOOK WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU FORGET TO TURN OFF YOUR SWAG!
Seriously though, you might catch cooties. Nice work for a first story.
SHIP ALL THE CMC!
416430
4.bp.blogspot.com/--0G5MG7AZhg/TuSSOqz3ZHI/AAAAAAAACn0/ggNvlcY6BQI/s320/96348+-+artist+john_joseco+cane+hat+spike+swag.png
416301 Yeah, I kinda expected some of that from people who don't really like humanized lol. I actually prefer Spike romance fics to be humanized, because it doesn't give off that "taboo" dragon-on-pony feeling. However, I still wanted Spike to be different, so I gave him some dragon features instead of having the love interests be completely different in species. But the thing I'm most worried about is the fact that I'm writing completely OOC. And I'm glad you liked at least 4/5 things you listed, I'd say that's pretty good for my first try at writing a story :p
416283 Yeah, I kind of don't have time to proofread and stuff like that, I actually only had time to write this fic at about 1:00 AM to 3:00 AM last night, because I promised I'd finish by Friday so I could get it out of the way and get some schoolwork done over the week-end. Now I think I'll write the following chapters on week-ends where I'm not so tired or stressed. Finding someone to proofread it for me would be a huge help though.
416886
Really?
Pony X None pony isn't a taboo.
Human X None Human on the other hand...
416907 That's why I put taboo in quotation marks, because while not literally taboo, it does have something of that vibe to it, or at least I feel that way. It's like if it were gay marriage, because it's not a bad thing, but frowned upon by close-minded people. Then again, that's just my opinion and in canon Spike with another Pony probably isn't frowned upon at all. Also, Spike is still human, just with a few dragon characteristics, it would be like if someone with a deformity had a romantic relationship with someone who didn't have any deformities, and that's far from being of a different species. Anyway, I guess what I'm trying to get at is that regular spike is a dragon, and of a completely different species than any other character. While humanized, I still wanted to show that he's different from everyone else, but still the same species. I have no idea if what I just said made sense, but I hope you can figure out what I'm trying to say.
417152
I see...
From the Fic I thought he was still a dragon, heck I didn't realise they weren't ponies untill they started talking about hands.
417162 Yeah I should clarify on that more. I guess I just figured that people would take him for what he looks like the cover picture. However, I really wish that tail wasn't there. I feel that's a bit too... Dragon-ish? If that's a real word :p
P.S. You should probably read the tags before you start reading a story, then you would have at least known that the fic was humanized xD
417175
I am offened, I did read the tags.
Human tag doesn't mean humanized, it means it has humans in it.
Up untill the hands part, I was waiting for a human to appear.
417183 Oh, I see what you mean, sorry if I offended. I'll try to edit the fic so it's a bit more obvious that the fic is humanized. Probably not a good idea to have someone read the fic and then suddenly realize that their all human half way through lol.
417193
You could put it in authors notes at the top of the fic.
417199 Done, hopefully this will clear any confusion in the future. Also, I fixed the cover image a bit, that tail was bothering me a lot lol. Thanks for all your help friend!
This reminds me of Tenchi Muyo on so many levels. I found it very d'awwww and the love quadrilateral(not triangle b/c of Rarity, Scootaloo, Sweetie Bell and Applebloom) is interesting. This fic can benefit from multiple endings just because well...you kinda want everyone to win. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
chzbronies.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-the-side-effects-of-being-spike.jpg
gifs.gifbin.com/1237977458_thumbsup-terminator.gif
Peace Out
...Go on...
419727 Working on the second chapter as we speak. Hopefully I'll have it done by Monday. Glad you enjoyed it
417551 I actually think a love quadrilateral would have to be: boy1 likes girl1 who likes boy2 who likes girl2 who likes boy1. This is more of a harem xD
P.S. This fic is not going to have alternate endings, but I hope you enjoy the one I write.
I wish people would at least comment as to why they disliked when they do. It might help me write a little better in the future.
Hi Author, I was just sayin that uhm... I think you should ship uhm maybe
and ya know, 
if you don't mind. If your too busy I understand, uhm... 
Just scrollin down reading comments when BOOM!
MONDAY!?!
THAT WOULD BE FANTASTICAL!
423454 Yeah, it's good that my family isn't really religious when it comes to Easter, but we still hide eggs for my little brothers and sisters. Unfortunately I was sick all yesterday and I just started getting better right now, so I'll try to crank out as many words as I can right now.
P.S. Ship ALL of the CMCs!
Found this pic, and deemed it necessary to post.
fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/096/5/8/spike_the_pimp_by_mick_f18-d4v79mn.jpg
Next chapter on Monday? Awesome sauce.
Sorry to say that I won't be able to finish the second chapter by today, being sick really doesn't put you in the mood to write lol. And schoolwork doesn't help either. I'll be sure to write a crap ton during April Break for the people who like this fic though, hopefully that will be enough to make it up to y'all for this blunder of mine. Sorry again, really wish I could've given it to you guys today.
Love the story! It is completely awesome and well written! The humanizatio,n is in my opinion a fantastic new way to tell these stories... Also i hope you get well soon!
I SAY!
images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw958_small.jpg
So here you go...
images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2075-tumblr_lr4navPRO31qffws7o1_400.gif
434479 You have no idea how much that means to me coming from the author of my favorite humanized fic ever.
So here you go...
media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m26dc5dgA51r1crym.gif
Hey, sorry for such a long delay, I got into an accident and have been in the hospital for a while now. Chapter 2 should be up as soon as I get off my lazy bedridden ass :p
Take your time bro, it will be worth the wait I'm sure.
Well after a couple surgeries and a lot of medication, I'm finally out of the hospital. I'll be updating a lot more now, unless Murphy puts me in the hospital again
oooh hope you're alright.
"vampire books" Mother of Celestia
Well before I get started on the third chapter I want to edit the second one. I'm really disappointed at how the Rarity scene turned out and I might do a complete overhaul on that part. That's the only part I think I'll change though.
Are you going to make like four separate endings for each girl?
Take a page from my book and go with the Harem ending
I look forward to seeing how this plays out
This is starting to flesh out into a very interesting and intimate story. I really like how this is a kind of coming of age story and how Spike is really learning about himself. However, the Rarity situation didn't even cross my mind (to be honest, i really think that just complicates matters) and i would have thought that each girl would be highly secretive of kissing Spike. I will admit that this moves the plot along much faster, so props go to you.
When I read this I can't help but be reminded of chapter 3 of the the story Twilight's Treatment cause all three end up kissing him there too('cept it was on the cheek). But...... that's just me
Not sure how you would feel,but....
cupoffun.net/wp-content/uploads/2011/07/Mario.jpg
this is 100% Mario Approved :D
685295 Well that was kind of the point of the Rarity situation, to complicate things more
And idk what to say about them being secretive. I guess in my mind it was because Apple Bloom thought she was the only one who kissed him, and she really thought the others would let her because she didn't know they kissed him too. And then Sweetie and Scootaloo spoke up because they obviously had problems with her dating Spike.
And also, I was trying really hard to make the plot move faster without people realizing it, this is because I already have an idea for another fic that I really want to write. But I also don't want to be writing 2 fics at a time. This story is going to either have one long 3rd chapter and end it there, or be 4 chapters long with 3 and 4 being about average length.
739420 The thing is, i'm not quite sure how this will turn out. The only possible way Spike could possibly have a happy ending in this is if one of the four ladies showed them how much she cared for him (no, not with sex), and then somehow made the other three OK with it. I would normally suggest bringing a fifth female character into the mix and have Spike run off with her, but this story is way too deep and complex for that to happen.
Listen to me ramble on. It's a great fic, and I'm eager to see where it goes
742476 Don't worry, you won't be seeing any sex coming from me. And I did ponder shortly on bringing Twilight in, but I think her role as a supportive big sister character works better with this story, even if she only plays a miniscule part.
Oh godness, i remember this story, and i'm happy to see you are doing better!
Congratulations on getting out of hospital, we should make a party!
Wow. It's hurt! (In Spike and You, hein?)
Well, I'm glad you are feeling better and that this is continuing.
I like'd that Spike had a trigger for his action, not simple depression.
You missed capitalizing Spike once.
417175
Who's Spike ship with ?
2115751
You'll just have to wait and see
2115814
So the CMC just kissed Spike eh ? I can't wait for it...
An update.
2115707
Thanks for pointing that out, fixed.
Liking the tension of the story plz update