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Plot Thickens


I can't believe this name wasn't taken.

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Spike is no stranger to getting roped into things, being helpful is practically his second nature. Sometimes though, it can be a little too much even for him.
Thankfully, he has somewhere to go when things get out of control.

Rated T for a few instances of cursing.

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Comments ( 31 )

This here was my little experiment in converting a greentext into a proper short story. Hope you enjoyed it!

It works. Kinda want to see more of just the two dudes hanging out and being bros.

This was a lovely read — short, sweet, and a good lesson taught by the end. If there’s any more where that came from, I’d love to see it!

Such a shame. If Rarity were the one doing the makeup, Spike wouldn't have to run, and he'd get to be gorgeous. But as it is, fleeing in terror is definitely the wisest course.

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I kinda agree. the chemistry between spike and anon here is so wholesome that I want some kinda plot and/or drabble series! 😊

Glad you liked it guys. Not sure about making more of this, but I won't completely rule out the possibility, maybe I'll think of something good to continue this in the future.

Chocolate toppings on pizza, hm? Could work, depending on what other stuff was there. Not with tomato sauce, but check it, if you baked it at a lower temperature and you put on sweetened condensed milk, shaved chocolate and flattened caramel discs, and then added lime zest after it came out....

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You had me at sweetened condensed milk.

Dan

Nice. Sequel with Anon and his little buddy Button Mash?

Dan

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For all the shit the French put Vietnam though, Vietnamese Coffee is a godsend.

Oh hey I was just reading the green version in the thread. Story and conversion alike are both bretty gud.

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Of course I did, it's sweetened condensed milk.

Your have to be a Venusian to not like sweetened condensed milk. Even Martians like sweetened condensed milk.

I normally don't like greentexts, but this was actually adorable and well written! This Anon and Spike have a great bromance and I would love to read more! Well done!

This was just really nice to read. Much wow

This was an absolute treat to read! The dynamic between the two was wonderful and what a lovely personality to bounce off of Spike's!

Oh Twilight, I may have accidentally corrupted your stepbrother.

Wait, no, let me rephrase that~

To late, a thousand fimfiction writers have already begun.

I did enjoy it quite a lot! I hope you'll do more in the future :twilightsmile:

Sweet little story for my fave purple dragon, loved how Anon went to bat for him regarding *that* request & pulled the ultimate reverse UNO card on Rares! :moustache::rainbowlaugh:

Anon is such a bro.

The best part about being the Cool Uncle/Aunt is being able to load up kids on sugar and roughhousing, then send them back to their parents like wind-up time-bombs.

This is awesome! Are you going to write more stories of Anon being a big bro to Spike? Maybe more of Anon calling other creatures out on their bs?

this honestly seems like the beginning to a longer piece, but I like it all the same

"Yeah, you know, agree to have his makeup-covered face to be plastered all over some renegade print fashion rag that is gonna be distributed all over town?"

Cartoon creators in shambles. Consistent morals? In my story?!

Aww... shame it's already over I was already getting attached and all. Loved it all the way through, thanks for sharing!

Good to read.
It worked well.
:ajsmug:

This was a very enjoyable read. It turned out really well.
I think you did a great job.

Hah! Lovely little story, and nice to see Spike have a bro to hang out with. Any chance we'll see more of the two?

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Well, like I said before, it's possible, but it'll probably take some time for me to get some good ideas, plus there is a longfic in the works that's gonna eat up a lot of my time. In other words, it may not come too soon, but since this one was so well received, I'll at least try to come up with a decent continuation at some point.

11532340 As a recently turned uncle guy here… I’m absolutely not planning to do just that…

The fashionista could only look at Anon helplessly as she was practically being dragged away by the three little bundles of enthusiasm.

I love Rarity and I wouldn't say this to her face. I would however whisper it in her ear. Karma.

Congrats on making one of the sweetest Spike stories I've seen in a long time.

If this ever becomes a series, let me know.

Very nice, story!
Thank you!

This was really sweet. Most Anon fics, the man himself doesn't really interact with Spike, or he's presented as a nuisance. It's great to see a fic that has them with a nice big bro-little bro relationship (one that Twilight doesn't quite approve of, from the sounds of it). It's a shame this is just a one-shot, I'd love to see more of this, and I'm sure I'm not alone in that regard.

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