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i shall read this. and engoooorge myself on it with great intent!!!!!!!
i await more,,,,,
this can only go horribly, horribly wrong
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I think you mean "horribly, horribly right".
3185073 either one
its the same outcome
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Pic unrelated. or is it?
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3185230 nope i cant see the relation
Seems interesting, but there is very little description on the characters.
What does the main character look like? What about Harshwhinny? You gave no description of them, or any other character for that matter.
Also, how exactly do the ponies look. You say that they are anthro, but that is not enough. Especially for those that think anthro is humanized.
Do they have fur, pony faces, unguligrade legs with hooves?
Also, will this be a real romance, or just this guy having random sex?
3187611 When it comes to the romance tag, it's going to be a little of both. There are going to be serious relationships in the story, but for the most part it is going to be sex ed.
as for the appearance, I just figured anthro was suitable for furry, but I'll clarify for the people that don't know what it truly means.
as for discriptions for the characters, I will change the story a tad bit and add discriptions, but I has assumed anthro would have been enough, but with that in mind. I just figured people would picture them as a bipedal pony as themselves from the show.
I got myself into a heap o crap
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Hmmm. If that is the case I don't think the romance tag sgould be used. Sex does not equal romance, and that is what the main focus is.
Like I said, some think that anthro means humanized, and umamimi.
Also, as a writer you can't just assume the reader will know what you are talking about. You have to give us descriptions.
3193856 I know, but with it being fanfiction, the descriptions can go only so far, and you have to use your imagination from what they look like from the show. You are right however, I shouldn't of assumed, and added description to the story. I didn't even set the basis of what anthro meant for this story.
I'm glad you pointed it out, and I'm fairly sure it is fixed. As for the romance tag, I'll speak with the creator and see if we should remove it. There are going to be actual romances in the story, but it's just going to come later.
thngs can only go downhill from now on
I await, and I shall.
i like where this is going
3185190 why outcome? Why not income?
3224365 because door, thats why
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3224486 That's adorable.
3227423 i know, wait till you see the fences
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This looks to be interesting. I'll keep an eye on it.
3227617 Hey man, that's just offensive.
3232334 sorry man that was out of line
if anything, have a shelf
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3232361 Woah, I might have to book ya for that.
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3232361 you should be ashamed of yourshelf
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i dont know how this began...
3236823 lmao the magical world of randomness
3237022 cant live with it, cant live without it
3237072 ¡Bienviendo a la Red mi amigo! Donde personas extrañas son reyes.
3240590 google translate it is
3240590 thank you!
though i dont know what you mean by "red"
3240917 La Red is Spanish for The Internet.
3259518 ohh thats cool
Sounds cool so far can't wait to see what happens next
please continue i would love to see how this turns out
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Nice continuation to this. Eager to see where this goes.
Nice update, a bit filler-y but to be expected for the second chapter. Hope to see the next update soon.
Glad to see this finally has more content. Can't wait to see what else you guys do with it.
Hm. First you stated that stallions average around 5 feet, but then the only two stallions present are taller than the main character. Either he's really small or those two are an anomaly...
3878592 maybe they are
Nice to see that this story hasn't been scrapped, really enjoyed the first chapter when this was first released and really hoped it was going to be continued. Do you have an idea on the time frame of when the next and future chapters might be released?
That was awesome I loved it so far and can't wait to see what happens next this looks like it is going to be awesome.
Some of your word choices are a bit odd, but overall this is a very enjoyable, very light, read. Have an upvote.
3879069 This is actually the story I'm working on after 'Ever Growing Friendship' It is my main focus, and I write on this so I don't bore with 'Ever Growing Friendship' before it's finished. As for when I'll finish the next chapter, I'm not entirely sure. I went without internet for a long time and i'm catching up on alot of stuff.
3879528 that's what I'm hoping for
3878592 your avatar doesn't get any less disturbing any time i see it.
3881291
Why thank you!
I strive to have the creepiest avatar possible!
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3882067 pfft, she knew what it meant all along