Some how dozens upon dozens of humans have somehow mysteriously appeared in Equestria, and you being one of said humans. Upon studying your culture, Celestia sees a fatal flaw in Equestria's and tends to fix it by creating a new campus to teach
Hm. First you stated that stallions average around 5 feet, but then the only two stallions present are taller than the main character. Either he's really small or those two are an anomaly...
Nice to see that this story hasn't been scrapped, really enjoyed the first chapter when this was first released and really hoped it was going to be continued. Do you have an idea on the time frame of when the next and future chapters might be released?
3879069 This is actually the story I'm working on after 'Ever Growing Friendship' It is my main focus, and I write on this so I don't bore with 'Ever Growing Friendship' before it's finished. As for when I'll finish the next chapter, I'm not entirely sure. I went without internet for a long time and i'm catching up on alot of stuff.
"I wanted to favorite this a second time because of how good it is, and got bummed when I couldn't. Then I saw I hadn't followed you, yet, and decided to do so."
Huh. I'm pleased to see this story is looking really good Also, I saw those references. Now the question remains: will our hero wear a long tie or a bowtie?
Derpy's reaction to the class felt forced. You've made it out as if everyone has put sex on the same level as demonic rituals. Felt like you put too much detail in his new home. We don't need every detail of every furniture, we can make a few things up for ourselves. Everything else though was alright. Apart from that guard, the one who threatened to crush the guy's skull. Seems to me a guy like that would get fired on the spot for threatening someone with murder for simply not responding in a few moments.
Just a heads up, I'm pretty sure the class Herbology isn't something she made up, and has been used as the name for that kind of class for stories before her's, though I give you big kudos for liking her stories enough to give her the credit for the name. Also will have to agree with the guy below : ---> 4282192 His/her opinion of this chapter are pretty similar to my own, you seem to put a tad bit too much detail into things that don't need it and will just add a drag to the story
Nice continuation to this. Eager to see where this goes.
Nice update, a bit filler-y but to be expected for the second chapter. Hope to see the next update soon.
Glad to see this finally has more content. Can't wait to see what else you guys do with it.
Hm. First you stated that stallions average around 5 feet, but then the only two stallions present are taller than the main character. Either he's really small or those two are an anomaly...
3878592 maybe they are
Nice to see that this story hasn't been scrapped, really enjoyed the first chapter when this was first released and really hoped it was going to be continued. Do you have an idea on the time frame of when the next and future chapters might be released?
That was awesome I loved it so far and can't wait to see what happens next this looks like it is going to be awesome.
Some of your word choices are a bit odd, but overall this is a very enjoyable, very light, read. Have an upvote.
3879069 This is actually the story I'm working on after 'Ever Growing Friendship' It is my main focus, and I write on this so I don't bore with 'Ever Growing Friendship' before it's finished. As for when I'll finish the next chapter, I'm not entirely sure. I went without internet for a long time and i'm catching up on alot of stuff.
3879528 that's what I'm hoping for
3878592 your avatar doesn't get any less disturbing any time i see it.
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Why thank you!
I strive to have the creepiest avatar possible!
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3882067 pfft, she knew what it meant all along
Another good chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
"I wanted to favorite this a second time because of how good it is, and got bummed when I couldn't. Then I saw I hadn't followed you, yet, and decided to do so."
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Huh. I'm pleased to see this story is looking really good
Also, I saw those references. Now the question remains: will our hero wear a long tie or a bowtie?
I am happy this was updated finally and cant wait for the next one. also this chapter was very good
Crap i finished it well I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter f@$# my life
Wow, this is really well written! I can't wait for more!
Derpy's reaction to the class felt forced. You've made it out as if everyone has put sex on the same level as demonic rituals. Felt like you put too much detail in his new home. We don't need every detail of every furniture, we can make a few things up for ourselves.
Everything else though was alright. Apart from that guard, the one who threatened to crush the guy's skull. Seems to me a guy like that would get fired on the spot for threatening someone with murder for simply not responding in a few moments.
If only anon was like the substitute off of key & peele.
That would be something
have a fav & like
4597639 i like the name Nemo for more serious stories
NEXT CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER. i love this story i can't wait to see where you go with this good luck my friend
Just a heads up, I'm pretty sure the class Herbology isn't something she made up, and has been used as the name for that kind of class for stories before her's, though I give you big kudos for liking her stories enough to give her the credit for the name.
Also will have to agree with the guy below :
---> 4282192
His/her opinion of this chapter are pretty similar to my own, you seem to put a tad bit too much detail into things that don't need it and will just add a drag to the story