i shall read this. and engoooorge myself on it with great intent!!!!!!!

i await more,,,,,

this can only go horribly, horribly wrong

3185062
I think you mean "horribly, horribly right".

3185073 either one its the same outcome
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3185190
Pic unrelated. or is it?
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3185230 nope i cant see the relation

Seems interesting, but there is very little description on the characters.
What does the main character look like? What about Harshwhinny? You gave no description of them, or any other character for that matter.
Also, how exactly do the ponies look. You say that they are anthro, but that is not enough. Especially for those that think anthro is humanized.
Do they have fur, pony faces, unguligrade legs with hooves?

Also, will this be a real romance, or just this guy having random sex?

3187611 When it comes to the romance tag, it's going to be a little of both. There are going to be serious relationships in the story, but for the most part it is going to be sex ed.

as for the appearance, I just figured anthro was suitable for furry, but I'll clarify for the people that don't know what it truly means.

as for discriptions for the characters, I will change the story a tad bit and add discriptions, but I has assumed anthro would have been enough, but with that in mind. I just figured people would picture them as a bipedal pony as themselves from the show.

I got myself into a heap o crap

3189441
Hmmm. If that is the case I don't think the romance tag sgould be used. Sex does not equal romance, and that is what the main focus is.

Like I said, some think that anthro means humanized, and umamimi.

Also, as a writer you can't just assume the reader will know what you are talking about. You have to give us descriptions.

3193856 I know, but with it being fanfiction, the descriptions can go only so far, and you have to use your imagination from what they look like from the show. You are right however, I shouldn't of assumed, and added description to the story. I didn't even set the basis of what anthro meant for this story.

I'm glad you pointed it out, and I'm fairly sure it is fixed. As for the romance tag, I'll speak with the creator and see if we should remove it. There are going to be actual romances in the story, but it's just going to come later.

thngs can only go downhill from now on

I await, and I shall.

i like where this is going

3185190 why outcome? Why not income?

3224365 because door, thats why
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3224486 That's adorable.

3227423 i know, wait till you see the fences
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This looks to be interesting. I'll keep an eye on it.

3227617 Hey man, that's just offensive.

3232334 sorry man that was out of line if anything, have a shelf
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3232361 Woah, I might have to book ya for that.

3234276

3232361 you should be ashamed of yourshelf

3236744 i dont know how this began...

3236823 lmao the magical world of randomness

3237022 cant live with it, cant live without it

3237072 ¡Bienviendo a la Red mi amigo! Donde personas extrañas son reyes.

3240590 google translate it is

3240590 thank you! though i dont know what you mean by "red"

3240917 La Red is Spanish for The Internet.

3259518 ohh thats cool

Sounds cool so far can't wait to see what happens next

please continue i would love to see how this turns out

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