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That's certainly an interesting piece you've chosen as cover art. I'll read, but not now.
I expect big things from this, whoever you are.
i put this in the read later becasue it looks great and a love story where he have to pick auwsome!
I guess that I am, in fact, a wizard. I read that part four or five times then gave up. Makes a lot more sense now.
3198061 BOOOO!
Hmm? Rarity X Shining Armor?
You got me… I'll read a little later.
3199843 Sorry I had to delete the comments. You gave away the secrets. NOW YOU MUST DIE!!!
use this instead next time.
Really shining? you ran away from a hot Mare? Get back in there!, grow some back bone!!!
Damn dude, that nightmare was AWESOME. Congrats.
huh... could also label this chapter, "The Making of Sweetie Belle" if you're going that route.
Yay, new chapter! A biggie, too! :D
I originally wanted this to be like a two-to-three chapter story. But sadly this has become a flame that I could no longer control.
This may end up having more than 15 chapters and here's why:
I end up with more ideas as I go along, thus adding to the world that I've already had built. So now instead of being a short story with the usual clop, this has become one that has chapters of world building combined with story telling and add the +1500 words of clop that comes up every now and then and you get something like this clusterfuck of failed literature that ends up being more than 100,000 words.
Yeah, I might be stuck on this one for a while.
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Never fear, for I am here!
marefriend is the word here.
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how did you get that text effect?
3240907 whoops.
Corrected
3242172 what effect do you speak of?
I wanted to try some word-play in this chapter, being that I never tried it before. Hope you don't mind the length.
This fic seems to be updating at a nice pace. I'm not sure Twi would call him a pervert, but who knows? She might in this story.
hehehe... I like this story!
Oh my goodgollygoshness YES! Here, take all my YES!! and go have a nice supper. You bucking earned it with that cover pic alone!
On a side note, Down boner! Down. Bad. Fine, go up.
My brain is now officially kinda full of fuck. I'm not sure if that is a good thing or not. So, in this case, my reaction is equal to Shiny's:"....WHAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!"
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Nobody can help the writer's drive... It is like a strange sort of healthy drug. We will see, my fellow author... Wee shall see~
Interesting, however I noticed quite a bit of misspelling and jumping between past-tense and presant-tense. Keep it one of the other.
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I agree.
That. Line................………………………………
What kind of man asks a boy he just met to sleep with his wife...?
Lol, hormones... So important and yet so evil.
That music box is going to haunt me, isn't it?
how did you do the Demonic voice?!?!?!
that was awesome!
*Four Kleenex later...*
Ever. So. Much. Of. A Boss.
Eh heh, Hoo.
Lol.... xD
Twilight and her partially photographic memory~
Wait for it...
That was a weird switch in moods from the earlier chapters. I'm not so sure I approve of the switch, but we'll see where it goes.
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You'll learn why in the next chapter. (which is what I'm writing right now.)
You switched tenses several times throughout the chapter. Choosing one and sticking to it would make it a lot easier on your readers^^
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This is what happens when I leave for a weekend and come back with broken thought patterns. Plus I'm not too well of an author just yet. I'm working to improve so bear with me for a bit. 
I can only get better from here on, right?
The pains of not knowing what to look for in prereading my friend.
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damn
I loved Rarity's reaction after having been given the "Talk." Also: "...The Aristocrats?"
I had fun.
*After reading this*
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I would say, "It's not gay if it's in a 3 way."........but this is just gay.
Not complaining mind you, just.....unexpected
Now if you'll excuse me......
*Prerecorded voice* "You did not just read a chapter where Rarity's father fucked another stallion while his wife watched. The chapter existed without that. You will continue to love and read this fan fic always....."
YAY MOAR
Hooray, it was what I was hoping for! That is, that they were just extra-kinky. Thought the story was going in a WEIRD direction. But nope! Just kinky :D
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Then I'd suggest that you'd skip the next chapter because it will only get even more kinky from here.
I kinda wanted to step outside of my comfort zone and challenge myself to do a bisexual scene (so technically no it's not gay). So yeah, there will be a lot of kink in this story. So in all I guess that I could just give off a warning before the chapter starts.
SPOILER ALERT:
Also the next chapter will be shorter than usual due to the fact that it will be a continuation of where I've left off.
Remember when I said that this chapter would be shorter then usual?
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I lied.
Yeah... To write this chapter... Sure...
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the occasional jerk cums as a reward
Seriously. I wanted to get some information on the stuff that I write about. So I try to find what can really get someone's rocks off and in what combination. Personally, I'm blind to sexuality whenever it comes to porn. And don't you think the best way of writing a clopfic is with a raging hard-on?
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Touche...
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I leave for basic tomorrow so I expect to see much progress when I return! A quick note of review, you really seem to be getting a little off topic. This little diversion from Rarity and Shining is... Faptastic, okay, but right now this story feels a lot more centered around Pearl and her relationship with Magnus. Nothing wrong for now, I suppose, but the story does seem to be losing focus on the main two characters, who were what drew myself into the story and I believe, if the picture and story description give anything, the main focus of the story. This little episode between Rarity's parents was... Fun, and all, but just... Make sure you don't go off too far on a tangent. You had a good idea with Rarity and Shining Armor. I want to see more of that idea :P
3474827 there's a reason I managed to get a little faptastic here. You'll see why in the latter chapters of ACT 1.