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MOAR! NAAAO!
"I think we need to have a talk with the captain"
Oh my.
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This be awesome.
Very well done! All I can recommend is varying in the word you use to describe things. I especially noticed you almost exclusively using the word "sherbet" to refer to her hair color. Other than that, you are an excellent writer, and I can't wait to see more from you!
"Tell. Us. EVERYTHING!" (LOL)
YEAH BRING ON SOME MORE!!!!!!!!
at first i was like
and than i was like
Just to remind you: Cadence is Celestia and Luna's niece. Please don't do anything stupid.
I enjoyed this very much, I...I don't know what else to say.
HHHNNNNGG.
I don't know quite what you set out to do, but boy, you certaintly accomplished one helluva clop
Also, all three princessess?
Swaaaag
Now I'm wondering about Twi...
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She'll get her moment. There's only one pairing left that isn't straight up incest, so you can probably figure it out.
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Twilight on Cadance?
For some reason I have a feeling the Cadence switch places with celestia
Honestly? I kinda feel sorry for Shining here. I mean... okay, divine threesome? Should be cool, and hot as Hell (the clop was nice, BTW).
But being forced to cheat on his wife of a matter of *weeks*, and basically raped by said goddesses? That's a little less cool.
I mean... I'm all for it if everybody involved is consenting and happy about it, but this has got to be bucking with poor Shining's mind right about now.
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+1
Yeah I feel bad for Shining just because he pretty much got raped. I just hope him and Candace can work everything out.
Abuse of power and rape. Not to mention that this is infidelity. Tag your shit properly. Rape deserves a dark tag, no matter how pretty you try to make it.
63 all of them...
ALL OF THEM
Well I enjoyed this fic but somehow I feel that Celestia got more fun than Luna....
Celestia:
traced her hoof up and down Shining chest.
first one to give him blowjob
kissed and shared pre-cum with sister
SM licked Celestia pussy when she positioned above his face while Luna give him weaker blowjob
first one to fuck him in reverse cowgirl position
Celestia pissed when she climax?
Celestia let CM fuck her in the ass (she if first again surprise?)
Luna:
traced her hoof up and down Shining chest when Celestia was giving him blowjob
she sits on SA when Celestia was giving him blowjob
kissed and shared pre-cum with sister
second one that gave him blowjob but she wasn’t able to take all his dick (SM enjoyed it since it remind him how Cadence do this the same) while SM licked Tia pussy
she kissed CM + she masturbate when Celestia had sex with Shining
after Celestia climaxed she mounted SM but in normal cowgirl position
when SM fucked her sister in the ass Luna just watched and comment whole situation
SM came on Luna face since she ordered him to do this
1000 of waiting for sex and being princess of the night ... well I was hoping that she will be the one who will lead everything and start something but she just let Celestia get everything .... I'm disappointed Luna
i read up to the point that celestia said "death penalty", she was joking i think but its just wrong, the first page we had this romantic, first time between lovers and the second page he has to cheat to keep his job, its near rape to be honest, total abuse of power as well..sorry, lost my interest, bye~
I absolutely loved it, in more terminologies than one
Use of styles was spot-on, and the dialogue was very believable.
I think you did better than me by a few points
Thumbs+fav
"I think we need to have a talk with the captain."
Me: Oh Shit.
This is a great series.
Any plans to work twilight's parents in somehow? 
You've already done the rest of the family. Popular fannon names for the parents, which I've used in my own works, are Orion, the father and Dazzle the mother. I'm excited to see where this goes.
whats up with the dark tag???? i don't think any of this is dark. or r ya plaining some thing for the future?
I'm waiting for what I hope will be a Twi x Celestia x Luna sometime in the future.
765166 I'm pretty sure it's the Luna x Celestia x Shining Armor borderline rape
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Chapter 2 was a little rapey. That counts as dark in my book.
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but i my self wouldn't call it rape.... but thats my option..
i guess it was border line
GET KINKY!!!!!!!
Yeah, chapter 2 ended up a little rapey. If I could go back and tweak it a little I probably would, but whatever.
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Perhaps this is a foolish question, but why can't you? It's quite simple to edit chapters, you just push the little button up in the top left corner that says "Edit" then you change it as you see fit
.....
I feel like an intruder spying on a special, private moment. I know this is fictional, but I feel guilty for reading this, and not amused-guilty.
I didn't finish it, but from what I did read, I must say it was well done.
I feel less guilty about reading this.
Boy, Cadence is going to be pissed if she ever finds out! Though I'm not sure whom more at...
two of same gender?
to each their own, but that's not my cup of green tea. *Tips hat and whirls cane between fingers*
Good show, but I'm out. *Exits and trips on carelessly-left banana peel*
728565 Is that actually going to happen?
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I don't really want to change things after they've been published. Just feels like it sets a bad precedent for myself to pull something after it's out (with a few extreme exceptions). Would probably just make me lazier with a "I can fix it later" attitude. People reading these stories shouldn't be beta testers, they're full customers. Even if they don't pay, they spend their own time on something I made, it'd would be wrong of me to expect them to do my job for me.
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Check out chapter 3.
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Agreed.
I mean, authority aside, Shining just had an affair with his wife, and with the reigning sisters to boot. That's just... just...
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Oh no... even the wife... This marriage is not gonna last...
768055 Forcing someone into sex, under threat of death? What, might I ask, is your definition of rape?
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Random question that this made me think of;
Have you (or anypony else) ever given thought to Luna/Celestia's parents? I think it's a subject with some potential.
( I used it, and it's really something, I've found, that you can mold to fit however you need. )
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Very respectable.
I thought it was great
please make more
i don't get people who w8 til marriage to do it because there coud be so much problem like he coud be quick on the draw or have a small dick so its weird to me but then agian i live in iceland so this sort of thing is not commen for were i am from
but great story i like the details
Very nice so far. How long til Cadence finds out Shining boned Celestia and Luna and Shining finds out Cadence did it with Twilight? Any chance of Shining getting a five-some with Celestia,Luna,Cadence and Twilight at some point later on?