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The Ranger


I try to be a friend to everyone I meet

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Oh HOT DAMN! It's posted!!! This is the first thing I shall read when I get home this evening! This is gonna be GOOD!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Because I know the author writes nothing but AWESOMENESS, this story gets an immediate Fav and upvote!

3029436 Well, there's not much going on in this chapter.. I decided to wait with the more violent parts for the next chapter; didn't feel good to put it in so early, to be honest :twilightsheepish:

Still, I hope you'll like it :yay:

Cadance gets morning wood!!!
That's PRICELESS!!! I LOVE IT!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Excellent second chapter. Looking forward to more.

3034211 That pretty much sums up how it felt to write this chapter :fluttershysad: I didn't like it, but it had to be done for the sake of the story

3034221 Understandable. I do believe that this was the first time I have ever cried while reading a story, and now I have an unshakable urge to punch the crap out of something.

Judging by the story's description, I am sensing a beat-down of epic proportions on the horizon... and I am looking forward to it! :rainbowdetermined2:


Ahhhh.... I can see it now...:ajsmug:...




"MAY HELL HAVE MERCY UPON YOUR SOUL!!! BECAUSE I WON'T!!!!" :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

The Crow crossed with MLP?

You sir, win.

3034312 Really, I made you cry? Fuck, I'm honored, lol :twilightsheepish: In the words of Markiplier; "I feel like punching ten kittens in the face!". Maybe that could help you :pinkiecrazy:

And yes.. They will pay for what they did.. and it will be glorious.

3034556 Thank you, friend :twilightsmile: I hope you'll like the rest of the story

Holy hell... :rainbowderp:

You, good Sir, have my full attention.

3035711 Good, good.. :twilightsheepish: Reminds me of your first reaction to Patricidium, lol

This was a good chapter! Loved how the family died.

3047315 It's not the best story ever, but I hope you'll like the rest of it!

Damn... this was probably the last thing in the world I needed to read tonight, with how I am feeling right now.

Still, it was another excellently done chapter.

:pinkiegasp:

Sums up my reaction quite nicely, if I do say so myself.

Goddamn.
This is getting good, and we're only at the reanimation.
Question is, can you keep up the momentum going forward?
I can only hope the answer is yes.

MOTHER OF LUNA!!! :rainbowderp:
This just keeps getting better and better!!!

3063712 I seriously can't believe how much you people like this :twilightsheepish:

3063724 Believe it!

OMFG! Did I just say that? :twilightoops:

*kills self by throwing himself into a giant blender for uttering a "Naruto" line*

Hmmmnn.

All right, I'll be honest, I really love the Crow. I even managed to speak to James O'Barr a few times at a local convention, and got a copy of the original comic book with his signature on it. So I know a lot of the story, but it melts down to one, simple point.

It's about everything important to you being ripped away. It's about pain. A pain that no amount of vengeance could possibly ease. The narrative to the comic drips with this theme--it is clothed in it, drawing its depressing robes about its shoulders as it skulks by the readers.

What I'm trying to say is, I really hope we get a lot of that here. The Crow is never about happiness...

...just losing everything before embarking on a journey to hell.

3069347 Believe me; pain and sorrow are the main themes I work with whenever I write. Suffering is my essence, so to speak, And of course, there can be no torment without loss.

Cliffhangers...

Such an evil thing :twilightangry2:

3089053 Yes.. Nasty little fuckers, aren't they? :ajsmug:

Speaking of evil things, may I ask.. How's the English in this? Is it good, or do you think there's something I could change to make it better? I'm asking because English isn't my main language and.. because I'm bored :twilightsheepish:

3090278
As far as this chapter's concerned, I only see one mistake, but that's because I barely noticed it.

...he couldn’t shake the feel in the back of his head...

Should be "feeling."

The hook that this story has is digging deeper and deeper into me, and I can only crave more.

3091853 Thanks, I'll fix that right away :twilightsheepish:

Holy fucking shit.
Almost immediately after the reanimation, the shit hits the fan with a vengeance. That was a quick twist I didn't see coming.

3112513 Oh, believe me, there will be many more twists to come :trollestia:

3112534
I can only hope so. So far, the only disappointing thing about this story is how little attention it's gotten.
If it weren't for the fact that there are like, fifty other ongoing stories in my favorites, I'd give this one my complete attention. As it stands, though, you only get 98%.

3112549 Well, I'm really picking apart my brain to make this as unpredictable as I can.

It's pretty much the same with all of my stories; they either get very little attention, or just negative. I Chalk that up to the fact that I write a lot of horror and some subjects that people find disgusting and apauling. Not to mention that my "main" arc of stories is HiE.. people tend to hate that no matter what it is.

Still, I'm happy as long as even one person likes what I write :twilightsmile:

You are certainly getting the Crow and MLP universes mixed rather well :pinkiehappy:

“We shouldn’t just leave him here, Twi.” The stallion said to the owner of the third voice,

I read that... and my brain broke.

This was me for about ten minutes after.
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3116449 Well then.. I say, let your brain stay broken for a while; everything will not be fine... :pinkiecrazy:

3116856 Damn you... you're just making me want MOAR!!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

GET WRITING! NAO! :flutterrage:

lol

Has anyone told you yet that this story is FUCKING AWESOME btw? :pinkiehappy:

3116866 I'm trying to release a chapter every 3-4 days. Just try to function without a proper working brain for a few more days and you'll be fine. Or you might have to see a doctor.. :trollestia:

People like it, yeah, but I don't think anyone has used those words to describe it yet :twilightsheepish: To be honest, I'm surprised, really.. Seeing how bad Ashfall has been recieved, I thought this would get hated even more, since this one's probably even more violent and depressing than that one.. And I don't even spend nearly as much time writing the chapters here; for Ashfall I spend weeks :rainbowderp:

3117016 Speaking of doctors... I have an eye appointment tomorrow... YAY for new glasses soon!!! :yay:

I think I will talk about the possibility of laser eye surgery

3131303 And I think this was the worst chapter I've ever written :twilightsheepish:

OH HELL YEAH!!!!
Best thing to EVER happen to Flash :pinkiecrazy:

3131604 I take it you're not a fan of him? :rainbowlaugh:

And Shining is far from done with him.. :pinkiecrazy:

3131621 It disgusts me that Knighty gave him a character tag, even though he is from Equestria Girls...

Yet, there is STILL no Apple Family tag :twilightangry2:

Oh... You gonna force him to watch Barney and Friends?

3131634 There's a character tag of him? Huh, I had no idea.. :rainbowderp:

If only it was that simple.. Let's just say there will be pain.. If you liked this little chapter, I'm sure you'll be most pleased with what's to come :twilightsheepish:

3131669 DAMN YOU! Quit teasing me and get to writing! NAO!!! :flutterrage:

3131692 Can't help it; I love that someone wants to read more :twilightsheepish:

He's getting more Eric like :pinkiehappy: just needs some of that dry sarcastic stuff he says in the comic and he'll be spot on

3131755 Yeah, his sanity has officially begun to fade :twilightsheepish: But keep in mind; he's not Eric, he's Shining - completely different :twilightsmile:

I wanted to see Shining to go all Adam Chaplin. If you don't know what's that, check out the trailer for it.

3131764
Obviously :raritywink:, but one thing I noticed will a few of the Protagonists in the Crow universe is they all have different levels of sarcasm going on, usually before they kill someone they're after, but there's still that tragic underlay there. The other thing I noticed is that they also seem to snap out of the 'insanity' phase when they realize why they have been brought back. Sorry for going on, I'm a huge Crow fan :raritywink:.
Is Shining going to don the make-up to hide the scars (even though he has a white coat...:twilightsheepish:)?

All I'm thinking about is: what the hay is Twilight doing with the murderer of her brother? Is she under mind control? Does she not know who Flash is and what he did? Is Flash even the one who killed Shining?

I went back to read the second chapter and the only one who was described with detail was the green stallion who killed Skyla. Did I miss something? Wouldn't be the first time :facehoof:

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