Six months after the assassination on Cadence, Shining Armor and their newborn daugther, something is brought back to life, to once again walk the streets of the Crystal Empire, to take revenge upon those that killed everypony he loved.
Speaking of evil things, may I ask.. How's the English in this? Is it good, or do you think there's something I could change to make it better? I'm asking because English isn't my main language and.. because I'm bored
Cliffhangers...
Such an evil thing
3089053 Yes.. Nasty little fuckers, aren't they?
Speaking of evil things, may I ask.. How's the English in this? Is it good, or do you think there's something I could change to make it better? I'm asking because English isn't my main language and.. because I'm bored
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As far as this chapter's concerned, I only see one mistake, but that's because I barely noticed it.
Should be "feeling."
The hook that this story has is digging deeper and deeper into me, and I can only crave more.
3091853 Thanks, I'll fix that right away
Companion time now?