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I saw the name of the female lead
I hope your genitals catch fire the next time you take a shit
A decently-written second-person clopfic with a female lead? Not enough of these around. Nicely done.
Okay the lead name is bad but hey no biggie, well written and good to see a female human lead. (Who's not a lesbian. lol)
951686 I didn't read a name for the female lead. What was it and why was it a bad thing?
951801 it's the first word in the synopsis...
Now that I've read it. Grammar errors exist, mostly missing commas. I wouldn't say they are rampant, but they aren't sparse either. The plot is a very standard clopfic plot that basically amounts to a dtf. So, if that sort of thing is what you've gone for, then you've done well.
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951827 That explains so much. Thanks for that...I probably should start reading that stuff instead of picking stories at random.
I just read the description and see the female lead's name is 'Femanon'.
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Like even Jane Doe is more original then that!
Shit name of lead
But a decent story
Yeah, the lead needs a better name. Hell, she could even be nameless. But still, not enough Human X Wonderbolt clop.
And on a sidenote, I imagined the Human woman to be wearing a modified Wonderbolts flight suit (albeit not as form fitting).
Is it weird that my mouth went super dry after I read this?
This...this was well worth the time of reading it. I truly honestly hope that more Human(x)Pony clopfics come out with a female lead. This was a pretty damn enjoyable story! Great work mate!
very hot .. good work
I don't think Femanon is a NAME, just a female anon. Either way, I love these. Though I prefer anon mare- for some reason.
A bit short and fast, maybe a little nondescript on the sensations, but pretty neat.
Ooh, don't see these every day. There's not enough F/F, M/M, and woman x stallion HiE clops.
951788>>951793 good point
Huh, I like the fact that this story is from a woman's POV. Original
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Dis is good
I liked a lot...and I am a guy/
to you
Okay femanon.......
It sounds like you tried to keep her anonymous but make her sound female.
But the cold hard truth is that name wasn't the greatest.
3/5 if there was a star rating
Human female with male stallion!? I'll definitly read this for now I'm off to bed xD
Not enough Female Human with Stallion fics floating around, so I may be biased because I'm happy I found one. I thought it was pretty good, FemAnon isn't that bad in my opinion because you only used it in the description, not in the actual story.
Very nice. I'd like to see more of this.
I only saw one typo
Moving up the quickly hardening shaft you eventually reach the head of his penis. You give it a tiny lick like a cat drinking mild from a bowl.
Some mild criticism:
There was not as much detail in the description of the sex and the description of the sex you did have was very cliche.
Her motivations for wanting to have sex with him could have been developed more. In fact I would have rather of read a love story leading up to the sex.
All this said I understand if you just wanted to write a quick and dirty clop fic so I will disregard the lack of describing her motivations more and the lack of any lead up to the sex but I simply think this story needs a lot more description of the sex and also you need to get rid of those over used themes like "the cum tasted sweet" If it did taste sweet then you could at least spice it up a bit and say something like "it was not quite bitter, it had a hint of apple to it or maybe it was just my imagination but either way I decided I liked it and that was unexpected as past experiences with tasting a mans cum where less then fun"
4 out of 10.
I like that this has a girl instead of a boy
good story man
Please do another one like this XD