HHHNNNNGG.

I don't know quite what you set out to do, but boy, you certaintly accomplished one helluva clop

Also, all three princessess?
Swaaaag

Now I'm wondering about Twi...

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She'll get her moment. There's only one pairing left that isn't straight up incest, so you can probably figure it out.

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Twilight on Cadance?

For some reason I have a feeling the Cadence switch places with celestia

Honestly? I kinda feel sorry for Shining here. I mean... okay, divine threesome? Should be cool, and hot as Hell (the clop was nice, BTW).

But being forced to cheat on his wife of a matter of *weeks*, and basically raped by said goddesses? That's a little less cool. I mean... I'm all for it if everybody involved is consenting and happy about it, but this has got to be bucking with poor Shining's mind right about now.

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Yeah I feel bad for Shining just because he pretty much got raped. I just hope him and Candace can work everything out.

Abuse of power and rape. Not to mention that this is infidelity. Tag your shit properly. Rape deserves a dark tag, no matter how pretty you try to make it.

63 all of them...

ALL OF THEM

Well I enjoyed this fic but somehow I feel that Celestia got more fun than Luna....

Celestia:
traced her hoof up and down Shining chest.
first one to give him blowjob
kissed and shared pre-cum with sister
SM licked Celestia pussy when she positioned above his face while Luna give him weaker blowjob
first one to fuck him in reverse cowgirl position
Celestia pissed when she climax?
Celestia let CM fuck her in the ass (she if first again surprise?)

Luna:
traced her hoof up and down Shining chest when Celestia was giving him blowjob
she sits on SA when Celestia was giving him blowjob
kissed and shared pre-cum with sister
second one that gave him blowjob but she wasn’t able to take all his dick (SM enjoyed it since it remind him how Cadence do this the same) while SM licked Tia pussy
she kissed CM + she masturbate when Celestia had sex with Shining
after Celestia climaxed she mounted SM but in normal cowgirl position
when SM fucked her sister in the ass Luna just watched and comment whole situation
SM came on Luna face since she ordered him to do this

1000 of waiting for sex and being princess of the night ... well I was hoping that she will be the one who will lead everything and start something but she just let Celestia get everything .... I'm disappointed Luna

i read up to the point that celestia said "death penalty", she was joking i think but its just wrong, the first page we had this romantic, first time between lovers and the second page he has to cheat to keep his job, its near rape to be honest, total abuse of power as well..sorry, lost my interest, bye~

I absolutely loved it, in more terminologies than one

Use of styles was spot-on, and the dialogue was very believable.

I think you did better than me by a few points

Thumbs+fav

I feel less guilty about reading this.

Boy, Cadence is going to be pissed if she ever finds out! Though I'm not sure whom more at...

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Agreed.

I mean, authority aside, Shining just had an affair with his wife, and with the reigning sisters to boot. That's just... just...

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