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Human, 2nd person. After a day in town you make your way back home and come across a reluctant Hobo Pony. After pleading with her she agrees to let you take her in from the cold for a night. You try your best to give her everything that the street lacks in your eternal goal to leave the world a little happier.

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Comments ( 22 )

d'awww so adorable :twilightsmile:
be awesome if you make another one :3

This story really remind me of someone in the pass, even though is bit short, but sure is a good one. Thank you sir for this awesome story. You are Awsome!

Aw man!:pinkiehappy: This deserves a sequel. :pinkiehappy: Awesome job :twilightsmile:

The fact that this is 2nd person is a tragedy. It's so well written but...GAH 2nd person :fluttercry:.

No natural fire burns with the hatred I have for 2nd person stories. That said, this is still getting a thumbs up because it is THAT GOOD.:moustache:

Just:fluttercry:


Sequel,please.

:fluttercry:*sniff*
*slow clap*

Sequel plz!

This was really nice and I'm with everyone else in the sequel thing, you should really consider it.

Thanks for all the comments everyone! I would be willing to do a sequel in the future, but I've got at least two other stories I need to get through before that'd be a possibility.

I requested this, but I didn't get a chance to give you feedback when you posted the pastebin link in the general.
Thanks a lot for writing this, it's great!
I wish to bathe, feed, and snuggle Hobo Pone.

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I'll wait patiently for this. Dusty so needs a happy ending :fluttershysad:

Huh thought this was a one shot but glad that you proved me wrong and that there seems like more is coming.
Anyways Great story once again.

....First

I was about to go to sleep when i notice this, this was great thanks and keep the good work.:ajsmug:

Man... I just watched the last episode of House and felt a bitter sweet saddness from it, now I read what seems to be an epilogue to one of my favorite one shots.
:raritydespair:ALL THESE FEELS!!:fluttercry:

Kinda wished we could know what was in her bindle.

*Edit*: 3 posts into that tumbler and I am LOLing
I really liked the fic, but the part of me that is persistantly in the gutter wants to know if there will be future hobo on human action.

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While I've never particularly cared for clop, the author is able to elicit crazy powerful emotions in such a small amount of text. I'd love to see more interaction between Dusty and the Human if nothing more because god damn it makes me sad/happy :fluttershysad:

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Admitedly I like clop for the post coital feel or the hilarity that comes up during it (ex: someone walks in on the act an freaks out which freaks out the other two). The porno part of it is just a minor plus.

I would like to second your motion Shira for more Dusty.
Seeing Dusty acclimate to a stable living condition and maybe dealing with those who recognize her as a hobo would be great material to cover.
Dusty and the Human go camping maybe? To see Dusty's old skills (or lack of them) shine.

*scrolls up and sees author's comment* Yay! Sequel in the pipes!

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I think this *IS* the sequel. If there are additional plans for one, they haven't spoken on them yet.

Even just a simple slice of life with Dusty. Heck all of the awkwardness of introducing his 'marefriend' to everyone in town. Trying to get her used to living in a stable environment. There's lots that could be done still, but it wouldn't be necessary per se. I wouldn't exactly complain if the author decided to explore Dusty more. She's quickly becoming my fav OC pony despite how little there is on her.

so....bucking....adorable...manly tears where shedded....*squee*

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*looks at time stamp for sequel promise* Whoops!:twilightsheepish:
I would like to start a motion for a sequel then. Anyone want to second the motion?

Yes this is the sequel mentioned above. No, I do not have any further plans for this story or characters. Sorry to crush any dreams.

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