Rarity has an untold history of her foalhood crush.
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Remember when I said that this chapter would be shorter then usual?
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I lied.
Yeah... To write this chapter... Sure...
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Seriously. I wanted to get some information on the stuff that I write about. So I try to find what can really get someone's rocks off and in what combination. Personally, I'm blind to sexuality whenever it comes to porn. And don't you think the best way of writing a clopfic is with a raging hard-on? the occasional jerk cums as a reward
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Touche...
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I leave for basic tomorrow so I expect to see much progress when I return! A quick note of review, you really seem to be getting a little off topic. This little diversion from Rarity and Shining is... Faptastic, okay, but right now this story feels a lot more centered around Pearl and her relationship with Magnus. Nothing wrong for now, I suppose, but the story does seem to be losing focus on the main two characters, who were what drew myself into the story and I believe, if the picture and story description give anything, the main focus of the story. This little episode between Rarity's parents was... Fun, and all, but just... Make sure you don't go off too far on a tangent. You had a good idea with Rarity and Shining Armor. I want to see more of that idea :P
3474827 there's a reason I managed to get a little faptastic here. You'll see why in the latter chapters of ACT 1.
The only thing I know for sure is that the plot has officially disappeared.
I swear, if when this scene is over Pearl and Magnum don't at the very least go "oh God, we forgot about Rarity, WE ARE THE WORST PARENTS OF ALL TIME" there's a good chance I'm going to have to ragequit this story...