Rarity has an untold history of her foalhood crush.
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3239587 I will say this to myself now... In hindsight, I never thought that this would end up being over four times as much as I had originally perceived it to be.
400 THOUSAND FING WORDS AND COUNTING!!!
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...It's over... It's finally over.
Oooh, estrus will come in to save the day!
I love you, you incorrigible little fuck
Well... What can Shining even do at this point? He pretty much did the mattress mambo with both mares but felt more alive with Rarity. OH the scandals! And... honestly I thought this was going to be one of those "in-secret" relationships but the ending pretty much blew that idea up.
As much as I know you're trying to align with the canon and throwing in some extra things to keep it interesting. Maybe it's time for the story to go down its own route and do its own canon. Don't get me wrong I like Cadence but in this story she just feels like filler while reeving up for the main attraction of Shining and Rarity.
All I know now. If news gets out, the media will have a field day with it. Ponies calling Shining an idiot to try and null his marriage to a princess, call Rarity a home wrecking slut and maybe ruin her business, both families at war with each other... and yet I can predict someone in the next set of comments is going to suggest a threesome to make everything better.
next chapter...
I predict that Estrus will save shiny, both will forgive him, and he may even get into a polygamy case
I've been thinking the next chapter involves estrus too. Twilight did say some early cases were reported. If Cadance's estrus cycle hit early she would've rushed home as soon as possible. Giving Shining some angry sex mixed in with the betrayal anger.
Unless Cadance just somehow found out about Rarity in Ponyville. In which case I bet Twilight and Velvet are right behind her. If this is the end of Shining/Cadance, then it would be fitting for Velvet to be there.
i hope that the next chapter is finished soon.
So what's going on, any idea why the next chapter taking so long? Feels like an eternity and going waiting for it
SHIT! This took waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy longer than I had hoped. And it's way longer than anything I may have written in terms of this story. BEHEMOTH CHAPTER COMING YOUR WAY!!!
Your body better be ready.
BEST FUCKING CHAPTER EVER!!!!!