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TheSillyAnon


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I like it. Simple and to the point. Wish it could be longer and maybe explore a bit more of his emotions(Anon, not Pin... Er, Bubble?). Also, I'm not a fan of the whole "Anon" thing. Just seems stupid to me. Using it in a second person fic is no different than using a name, so what's the point? If you want the character to be truly faceless and nameless, have the others use pet names or nick names. Otherwise, it's not "me," it's Anon.

Bah, that's a general criticism, nothing specifically against yours. This was good. :ajsmug:

This is new.

Hm, R63 Pinkie as a bottom. Never seen that before but I'm not saying that I dislike the idea!
The story was well written and gave back a more... friendly side of Pinkie.
A side that lost in the last seasons of the show.
But anyway. The clop part could have used a little more polishing and the whole story was very quickly happening.
Or it might have been just me nearly falling asleep. Half past 3 in the morning. Gosh darn it.

-Zeph

I need to read this, Aaah!

Before I read this... Who done it? If it was Molly, wait a couple days. If discord, either kick his furry ass or ask him to do the same to Anon.

But as soon as you see her, you suddenly realize the reason is she has balls.

Misread this at first. :pinkiegasp:
Cute story, I like it. :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for using my picture.

Be sure to give artist credit!

4345129 Thanks for the critique. I'm new to writing human x pony. I figured something to break my usual writing between two ponies should work. But I guess now that I've broken my dry spell, I can go on ahead and learn to clean up. I guess I'm doing good not to have a editor. :twilightblush:

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Bu...fu...ga...ah...asas...asdfsdbfdsAGSDHGADSJDASFH!!! BRAEBURNED!? THE SEMPAI NOTICED ME!?!?!?!? AT FREAKING ONCE I WILL GIVE CREDIT!!!

This...
This was...

THIS WAS EXCELLENT! MWAHAHAHA!!!

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Hm, if you say so!
I noticed no problems in grammar or typos, so that seems fine, but on ideas....
Well, your choice!
I know I would ask for at least opinions of others before submitting a chapter.

-Zeph

Well... this will and should be featured. Mostly because of the material, even if It;s not my cup of tea.

Hey! My why boner's back! This was an awesome story. You definitely got a fave and thumb up from me.

Read this entirely for Braeburned's Bubble Berry pick.
Love the look of Braeburned's Bubble Berry.

I really like it! I thought it was sweet.

FOUND ONE:
The sounds of moans and of wet flesh slapping against one another filled the room as Pinkie tried his best to push himself against you, giving you as much of her as you want.

Very... VERY nice story.

4352964 Thanks. Fixed now. I guess I'm not that great at self-editing

4353151 Meh. Some things slip. Wasn't something that is easily found.

Found something you may want to edit.

It also marks the eleventh month since your arrival to Equestria, an even that Pinkie always seems to plan some sort of party reminding you of how much time has passed since you mysteriously wandered here.

I think that should be "event".

4354126 done. I really need to hire an editor.

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Cleverly disguised futa is still futa.

She was supposed to be here at around seven, but even as the clock struck fourteen till,

For me, it would make more sense if you said something like; "Until the clock struck quarter to"

Overall it's a decent story :yay:

4357058 Futa? This is R63, not futa.

4357158 The time was already a quarter till. I just said that to give a sense of time passing as the situation went along. Nothing too bad, is it? :pinkiecrazy:

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I suppose it makes more sense how I told you, but it's just a pet peeve more than anything

Comment posted by Vlad deleted May 10th, 2014

Okay...I've been comfortably heterosexual for twenty-one years. I didn't realize exactly what this was until halfway through.

The strange thing is I kept reading after the realization.

The REALLY strange thing is...that was REALLY hot.

...Sexual-identity crisis later, right now I've got a boner to take care of.

I don't know if I should be happy or sad that I consider this fic pretty vanilla.Internet 1 me 0

You know it's rather hard to find quality male on male fics round here that aren't soarin, brae or mac. Superb authoring here, really hope you do something like this again in the future. ( because I'm sick like that )

Ok. I'm straight as an arrow and even I thought this was hot. Great story keep up the great work! :)

TheSillyAnon: turning straight people gay/bisexual since 2014

Take my fav and like you beautiful person.

Erotic as fuck 10/10 !! :twilightsmile:

PRONOUNS!!! *shakes fist*

why must you combine things I like with pet peeves

why

:unsuresweetie:

Yes Pinkie, I still love you... But we might have to change your name to Bubble Berry. XD

4365164 I know what you mean bro I didn't realise it was M/M till like halfway and I kept on reading and reading and enjoy the hell out of this.........I question my sexuality now :3.

I really don't anything to add. This happened. This happened and we all have to move on with our lives.

Can't stop pressing the like button, can't stop reading over and over again, can't stop myself from adding to favorites. Write more like this with the other mane six! Please I BEG of you!

Awesome. Now we just need a second chapter. "Turnabout is fair play", if you take my meaning. :raritywink:

This was beautiful and hilarious omf

5534164 yes oh my gods yes

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See? The big guy gets it! It's simply a proper appreciation of the finer points of man-on-temporary-stallion-mare lovin'.

6642007 THIS MAKE ME FEEL HAPPY

I was straight.....now I think I might be bi.:rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh:

She, now a he, was already dealing with enough problems of being a stallion. And now that her final source of comfort was against the change, he felt alone.

should that be "his"?

"Pinkie... I..." That look was impossible to say no to. "No I don't love you."

END

Huh... that was kinda weird.

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