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TheSillyAnon


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This is a shameless adaptation of a VERY NOTORIOUS anime

Hmm, love triangle. Drama. I hope there won't be any boats in the last chapter.

Sunny, days. That picture is gonna be ironic... isn't it? :twilightoops:

Dammit, knew I was thinking of the right anime... :ajbemused: Giving it a like to even it a bit, even though that anime sucked.

2589282 Silly eyeball. Where did you think the first chapter took place? :pinkiecrazy:

2592701 Appreciate the like. Though it won't be as out of hand like the anime. I intend it to be as much in depth plot and characterization as possible (hint hint). So yes there will be drama, but of what kind? :rainbowderp: That's why I'm doing this. This is my second story (my first, which is a train wreck:twilightblush:, is on hiatus untill the real-life traffic dies down). But this one will be updated every now-and-then

I'm impressed, never seen a Fluttershy/Soarin romance before, you have my attention though something seems wrong about this...off....who is HER? Hmmmm....something is wrong and I would love to be apart of it, not sure why it has so many dislikes, it's beautiful written, you done real well, I'm in:twilightsmile: Hoping this might have Spilight....hoping:yay:

No 'first' posts for anyone! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by funkyferret deleted May 27th, 2013

:rainbowderp: ... I was just kidding. Sorry about that. Didn't mean to spoil. Not sure if want though, that anime was emotionally scarring for me. I commend you for approaching such a delicate topic. Good luck with your writing. :rainbowdetermined2:

Other then the constant wall of text that keep appearing in which case I would honestly suggest an editor, I'm seriously very, very impressed. So in a sense this will be a Fluttershy/Rainbow Dash/Soarin love triangle eh? Or will more romance be involved? If then AWESOME! If not then I'm ready to read either way, shit, you know how to write some very serious detail, I'm not sure which anime this is based off of but it looks really good...I'm down. Is this in the future so they are older or...what?

The first part confused the buck out of me but I pressed on, don't have much choice in the matter:facehoof:

Love triangle? Dark tag? Very notorious anime...

:rainbowderp:

No...No. Not again. NOT AGAIN! DON'T LOOK IN THE BAG RAINBOW DASH, DON'T LOOK! AND FLUTTERSHY SHE...SHE...oh my.

Okay, freak out over. Now lets see how this rendition plays out.

Well that...wasn't actually so bad.

The premise and focus characters are established well enough. The creative liberties you've taken with the story are unexpected but are very much welcomed. If it was going to be the same exact word-for-word story, with the original characters just being swapped with ponies, then I would stop reading here. This is fortunately not the case, and it serves as a nice distraction from the inevitable events that are to come.

But they will come nonetheless. Ohoho, yes, they will come. :pinkiecrazy:

You think you could PM me the name of the anime?

I saw that anime about a month ago. It freaked me out to the point where I'm surprised I don't have nightmares. I'm not so sure if I want to read this now. :applejackunsure:

2708667 I understand what you're feeling. I also understand that the anime wasn't exactly award winning. And I'm completely content if you choose not to read anymore of the story. However, I would also like to remind you that this is an ADAPTATION, meaning it will NOT follow the anime note for note. I will place my own spins and twists while maintaining a parallel of the storyline. I'll personally message you some details later. But for now, I just want you to be aware that not everything is going to be completely linear.

This was also my first clop scene. Please be gentle sempai.:twilightsmile:

More!! MOAR!! :flutterrage:
Don't be a :trollestia: and abandon this.
I think I like SoarinShy shipping. :derpytongue2: Unusual, yes, but they make a cute couple, no?

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