When the Pirate Queen of the Griffonian Sea's daughter is kidnapped, it is up to the Pirate Queen Greda herself, and her crew of trusted friends to rescue her. Will she be able to find her precious Gilda in time, or will her Equestrian captors do away with her before Greda can bring her home?
Follow Pirate Queen Greda and her closest crew, Gareach, Ghayroth, Ghaimor, and Guis, as they cross the world in search of the lost daughter... and face all the dangers of the deep along the way.
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** This story was written when I was 15, and the quality and content reflect that. Please be aware that my position on topics contained within may have changed in the time between publishing and now, and I apologize for any offensive material that I may have condoned in my younger years. Additionally, this story was written as my part in a shared griffon setting with my abuser; as such, if I ever rewrite it to continue it, the story will likely be much different.**
Griffons and pirates?
Yes please.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Not bad.
I'd say that there was too much telling of what was happening in this chapter. I feel like you could've cut away some of the poorly worded parts as well as the incessant descriptions with a bit of editing. However, you said you had to hit 5,000 words, so whatever.
Anyway, liking and faving.
Awesome first chapter! Keep up the great work, Icey Wicey!
3107580
Promoting another's griffon pirates on a pirate griffon story is considered rather rude.
3107580 Dude, you don't promote one story on another. That's basically insulting the author. You may as well say "Yeah, this story is good, but THIS one is better."
Totally dickish, imo.
Plus, I've read the story you linked. Brony goes to Equestria and becomes a griffon. I'd rather not read something like that.
3107670 Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuh..... right, sorry, didn't think about it.
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3107693
If you wish. Just a notice for the future is all.
3107702 DUDE THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!
I can't wait to see use all the weapon partid use like the known snake bomb that is know to make man go over board to get away from the shitty ass small!
I hope that you won't be giving all of your griffin characters names that start with 'G'. As it is, the sea of 'G' knocks me out of the story.
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Well, you've met all the characters!
I think...
Of all the incomplete stories I've read on here, I can't think of any that I want to see completed more than this. Everything from the initial concept on down is fantastic. I really hope that some day you come back to it.