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Iron Hooves


Iron Hooves here! I'm an artist / writer. http://ironhooves.deviantart.com/ I get easily distracted by shiny objects.

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Trixie and Gilda fight together against the world and created the bonds of friendship and much more based on it. This is a story of never judging a book by its cover.

These are wanted posters from things that unintentionally go wrong during the course of the story/comic. Both characters are misunderstood and are the most underrated characters from the shows.

SFG rating of somewhere between [Romantic] & [ Saucy ]

All art shown throughout the story is drawn by Iron Hooves.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 63 )

Nice drawing. Also good story, keep it up

Interesting idea, as I always felt that that maybe the two negative personalities could form something postive in an interesting friendship.:scootangel:

Very good for a first timer, heck very good altogether. One negative thing I caught out of that was: smiled through its grin. That seems a bit redundant don't you think? Aside from that, very good showing as opposed to telling, solid action, and you ended it on a point of intrigue. You'll go far on this site sir. I an just tell. Keep it up, I await more of this story.

Even if I don't consider what I know about this story that other reader's don't, this is really nice. There aren't very many pieces of literature that can maintain its intensity/drama while I'm speed-reading it to go do some daily tasks. :pinkiecrazy:

This is going better than my first story already, so I've got high hopes for you. :rainbowkiss: Expect some edition from me in your inbox before sometime tomorrow, or maybe even tonight. (Don't get your hopes up, this is one of those rare days where I leave the 30 foot radius of my laptop for more than twenty minutes.) :trollestia:

Oh! I love the antennae aspect you added to the timber wolf. They're more like ears/horns in the episode, but I like this much better.

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If this goes where I think it will go, I will swear all loyalty to this fic. If this becomes the rare and beautiful and elusive Gildixie, I will sing your praises to all who will listen.

Take my Favorite, and an upthumb. And my loyal praise.

"right click and open into a new tab" - You could just middle click (or ctrl + click)
You don't need "&feature=related" on the YouTube link
399666 a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/w/awwyeahplz.png DO WANT! :pinkiehappy:

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Hehe. To what are you referring? Not that I don't appreciate the vote of confidence bu I am curious.

401602 "the rare and beautiful and elusive Gildixie" poni.0au.de/images/characters/gilda.png :trixieshiftleft:
Also, you said "bu"

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Indeed. It is a much-desired pairing. It is why I have made two stories about it so far. I hope others take up the torch.

Yes, I did. On my phone FiMFiction is very slow, typing even more so. It has led to some typos.

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Thank you for much for the feedback and the vote of confidence. I was looking at that line too and I couldn't think of anything better at the time, but I just fixed it. I'll try and get the next chapter out soon. :twilightsmile:

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You'll just have to wait and find out what I have in store....It'll be a :twistnerd:!

Hehe. Moving, emotional, beautiful. Good times. I look forward to more.

IS this a BUDDY STORYLINE? :pinkiegasp:

I love a buddy movie storyline. :rainbowlaugh:

This is going to be good....:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Gilda was a cop that was 3 days from retirement....but somepony wanted her dead. They took her family from her....now she wants revenge.

Trixie was her partner in training and was caught along for the ride. Now this rookie is getting real world experience as the two go head to head with the mob.

The Great and Powerful Trixie and Gilda star in: A Griffin Too Far
Rated PG-13

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My reaction to this buddy cop story I just made up.

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Are you going off of any other stories for their characterizations or personal lives/pasts/social standings? There have been a lot of fascinating things on that front.

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Honestly, I have not read any Gilda or Trixie (except one with Trixie/Twilight....I forgot what it was called, it was a while ago) fanfics at all. It all started with the idea that both characters had complicated pasts that created the facades that they wore in their dedicated episodes. In each one, both Gilda and Trixie have moments where their facades break and show who they really are: scared, alone and trying to prove to the world that rejected them time and time again that they are strong, despite the fact that they aren't as much as they make themselves out to be.

I had a Bonnie & Clyde-ish story in my head that I made for them with little small ideas of what they could do in towns as they traveled (mainly get into trouble, but not intentionally...most of the time...) I had a general idea about it, but never a hard copy of it until I sat and drew out a comic that's half way through the story that got a lot of good reviews on DA. I'll PM it to you, I don't want to spoil it on the main story page.

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Best cliche Storyline of a buddy movie EVER!!! :pinkiehappy:

Very nice, good way to use new characters in older settings. So have a yay for the story :yay::moustache:.

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Thank you! I'm going to be using a lot more of side characters from the series as the story goes on and give them all some more in-depth back stories. I'm glad that you like it so far! :moustache:

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You have glorious taste in music my friend. That link alone is worth all my favorites.
Might I also suggest a song suitable for this chapter by The National
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Ahh, the slowly budding romance. It is glorious. I can't wait until you describe their first kiss. It should be as rapturious as the fireworks.

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You have no idea.... :pinkiehappy: It may or may not involve peanut butter and pine cones....
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Thank you! My friend introduced me to The National after Portal 2, and I've been really getting into them. :moustache: A lot of their music has a lonely, haunting tone to it that just helped with the setting. I'm always looking for new music to add to it, I'm looking into Explosions in the Sky, Mono, This Will Destroy You, and Tor Linløkken from The Longest Journey/Dreamfall OST. The OST download link is here.

Check out the links and let me know if you have any music that might work for the story, or just sounds good in general, I always need good music to listen to. fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/121/b/3/custom_vinly_scratch_folder_icon_by_blues27xx-d4y6emg.png Vinyl doesn't think I have enough....

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And that's just the kiss. Griffins have rigid beaks, tongues, and FINGERS. It's more than tribbing and dildoes.

Found this by way of the flash animation. Tracking.

1060785 moar
for the love of god MOAR...
well.... ahem
that is all
BYE

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Yeee! I'm glad to see people from DA checking out the story! Thanks! :twilightsmile:

It's rough, very, very rough, but I like it so far.

You have perch as parch, every single time. Drove me nuts.

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Fixed it. Thank you for pointing that out, I wish I had pre-readers for this....
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You have rapped when you want wrapped.

While this chapter still needs a little work, it is much more refined than the previous one; good job on the growth. Everything works, and barring a few typos, quite clean. I'd suggest, if you can find the time, to go back and clean up the first two chapters.

I must say, I do enjoy the pictures.

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My free time is very sporadic, so I won't have the fastest turn-around, but I can pre-read for you if you'd like.

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Fixed.
Thank you, once I started to figure out where I wanted to go with the story, it started to flow easier. I'm going to go and try and fix the previous chapters too. I'm glad that you like the art for the story too! Going from art to writing is something kinda new for me. :twilightsheepish:

That'd be awesome if you could help me out. It wouldn't be out for a while, I start full time classes and work again next week.... Thank you again!

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You are quite welcome. Just hit me up whenever you get back to writing.

This is a fantastic story, at first I really thought it was going to flop, but 'm glad that I was wrong I love how this is turning out!

I loved the part with Fleur I was rolling

This story is great, the flow of the story, its just wow.!

instant; she. Dump the semicolon.

I found a few other grammatical errors but I lost them.

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Thanks! :twilightblush:

Yeah, the first two chapters are the weakest....When I first started out, I just had an idea that they both had similar personalities and both were kicked out of Ponyville one episode after the other. Then I drew a comic with them playing off of each other and it worked out well. Now that I know what I want them to do, it's a lot easier to write!

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Fixed! Thanks again, and if you see more, please let me know. I really do need to go back and fix the first two chapters.... :twilightoops:

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There is a 'need' that needs to be 'needs' in the first half, but I can't give you more context than that.

Nothing like sex-based trauma to bring two broken young ladies together in love and adoration :scootangel:

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