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TacticalRainboom
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TacticalRainboom
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Interesting ship. Well written
. You kept the characters believable.
take my thumb!
Oh boy Crack Shippings those are always interesting to read. Anyway I kinda liked it even if I hate Gilda.
Great story, but OW! A beak and talons in a pussy? I bet that blood isn't her period.
... now thats some other side of gilda... any change you would do more fluttershy or gilda shippings? that would be asome... peace out V-.-
Crack-ships and Fluttershy are both not really my deal, but stay tuned-- I've got more clop up my sleeve, and maybe I'll even write more just for you folks, since there seems to be an audience for it and all.
you know this could have been a really good chapter story, the plot is sound and the Dram would have be great.
the sex was unneeded In my good, but it was good to see a Gilda story again.
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Funny thing, I felt the same way about this when I wrote it. See, I went in knowing I wanted to write clop, but I didn't have a clear idea of exactly how i'd justify it. I started with Fluttershy wanting to cheer Gilda up, yes, but even from the start I was worried about why Fluttershy would be so okay with Gilda making sexual advances on her. Doesn't she realize that Gilda is just trying to use her to fill the hole left by Dash etc.
So you see where I went back and wrote in a little dialogue section where Fluttershy realizes it won't be such a bad thing to give Gilda what she wants. Had I really followed my heart I would have made this a little cleaner and a lot longer, but I've already explored what I wanted to about these two, and making an extended crack ship would have gotten tedious. Since this was popular though I'll probably write a GildaDash flashback chapter because I want to explore that idea too. Understand that GildaDash as written here is more than just a fic idea to me; it's FiM headcanon. I think it makes total sense and explains a lot about the episode!
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Well I still wish you fallowed your heart on the matter But this was still a good read, and I think you for it, if you ever do add more too it, [;ease le me know, I will read the Flash back on too when i find it, even tho you don't need it, you summed everything up here relay nicely
i dident think it could work but you showed me
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Very well written, and well characterized as well. Like Fox-Sama, I wish you'd followed your heart a bit more, but it's an excellent story regardless. Thanks for writing it!
Not bad, but the sex scene feels horribly out of place. Grafted on, almost.
Also, there's really no such thing as a "crack ship" when one of the characters involved has a whopping five or ten minutes of screentime. Gilda's inner thoughts, motivations, and drives are very much up to the audience's interpretation at this point in time. It's all about how you develop the character.
Couldn't clop to this if I wanted too
I as far too busy reading it
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As I mentioned, that's because it actually is.
Not to worry-- I'm going to write this idea again, but properly this time. It'll be about Dash and Gilda's time together in flight school. That fic won't have any clop in it unless I see an opportunity to use it for a "loledgy" moment.
Which wouldn't even slightly work, because nobody fucking blinks at lesbian ships. I should be happy about how progressive that is, but it totally neuters a potential idea. Oh well-- my headcanon says ponies (though not necessarily other manners of beings) take lesbianism in stride just like the fanbase does, anyway.
This has gotten a new surge of views lately. What's going on here?
Above-average clop. Kinda out of nowhere, and I like to think that Flutters isn't quite so fast. Still quite enjoyable.
If there's an issue, it's with the perspective. You have a 3rd-limited narrator and the general rule for those is that opinions and opinion-loaded words should match the viewpoint of the perspective character. So when you start to write sex and pretty much everything becomes a loaded term, you have to watch for things like
>Griffon-slime was smeared across her face.
Maybe Dash would be cool thinking like that but I don't see Fluttershy quite so easily grossed-out.
And if you want to make GilDash edgy in-universe, well, dude, they're two different species.
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Think of it as a Jinxieverse kind of thing if you gotta--the ponies are sexual beings and they don't have human inhibitions against showing it. While that doesn't justify the immediate, mutual, sexual attraction, combined with Gilda being forward it does justify them being ready to have some fun on the spot.
That aside, you're pretty much right. Fluttershy not being so quick to warm is a much more reasonable idea. But maybe this is a special case?
this was awsome! first time i've heard of Gildashy, but now i have a new favorite pairing!
this is awsome loved it!
432132 Could it be because it was posted in Equestria after dark? That´s how I found it!
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Nope, only just did that a few days ago. What I was talking about was many moons ago.
Finally, something with Gilda in it! And might I say, a very well portrayed Gilda at that!
I've always loved her character, and I think you captured her essence very, very well!
~Syn3rgy
Well done. Not enough Gilda (especially with clop) on this site in my opinon.
Crack ships are best when they are done honestly. And this is honesty, and it is beautiful.
I love it i love how you do the Gildashy so danm well
yay GildaShy :D one of my favourite ships!! :D
This was great. First Gilda shy I ever read and liked it
I was really impressed with the amount of detail you were able to get into your writing. And interestingly enough, this is one of very few ive read that didnt sound like it was written by a horny teenager. Not bad, hoping HOPING for a sequel
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Man, this story is like a year and a half old. Read my other clop, it's better. There's your "sequel."
2767301 ill delve right into that mah brotha..
4350548 holy crap thats a lot of errors
listen, this was written in mid s2, i wish people would read my more recent things, i dont know why they still find this one
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Well if it's the only one on the site, then maybe I'll write the pairing properly one of these times. I've moved far past the writing ability that I show here, but the principle--Fluttershy being the only one who actually understands what happened in that episode--has potential I think.
6546008 I agree with you totally and will go further to say that there are too few Gilda romance stories at all. I have read quite a few and the number of stories in that category I am willing to call 'good' can be counted on one hand with fingers left over. And most are only one shots too!
Also, Celestia/Gilda would be an odd pairing but my inner crack-shipper is telling me that it wants to see it despite my inner pessimist telling me it will never happen. I blame you.
I-just-I........
Wonderful little story here, really like the bittersweet ending.
This was a wonderful read. Any chance you’ll revisit this with a sequel?
This was very nice. One of the better Gilda fics I’ve read, smut or otherwise. The pairing was unexpected but really works well here. Would love if G made some return visits to Fluttershy in the future.