Gilda was humiliated, depressed, she lost her home and she had nobody to go to. That is until Fluttershy found her moping in the streets of Cloudsdale. (Cancelled, I have absolutely no desire to come back to this. There is way to much I have to do IRL and I want to focus on another story.)
This is... surprisingly good, despite its grammatical errors.
4205733 Thank you, my grammar was never that good, always just "acceptable."
4205754 You're most welcome, and it's okay
Can't wait for more
not bad