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Phil the Time Wizard


I'm Phil and I like ponies. Canterlot.com is the best pony site ever. You should totally check it out. Bye. :)

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An unknown creature has caused the already chaotic Everfree Forest to become even more hostile. Fluttershy and Twilight Sparkle are there to help set things right, but so is Gilda after having been chased there by some guards while up to no good. Gilda still bubbles with resentment over the loss of Dash's friendship, while Fluttershy can't forget how the griffon treated her and her friends. However, after Fluttershy unwittingly saves Gilda's life, maybe all these ill feelings will being to transform into something else. That is, if they can survive the horrors of the the Everfree long enough.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

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Heh. Glad you found it amusing so far. I've had a fair amount of practice writing Gilda in RPs, but it's good to hear you say I'm writing her well here.

Thanks a lot for reading! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Really? That many mistakes, huh? I may have to give it another read through then. :applejackunsure:

The Zecora lines weren't actually all that hard for me. That was actually kind of fun for me. Almost wanted to have her tag along just so I could write more rhymes. :raritywink:

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Alright. I think I'll give it a look over now then. Thanks for the heads up. :twilightsmile:

And yeah. Just might try writing something Zecora-centric at some point. She's such a fun, interesting character in my opinion. I'd love to do something with her.

This is an interesting idea. I hope to see it continue.

Yo have my attention my did sir/madam and looking forward to see where you will take this

its around now that one declares a story is dead, correct?

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