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When Twilight receives a sickness that causes her magical surges to spin out of control, she accidentally turns the rest of her friends into foals - including herself. Luckily, (or not so luckily), Pinkie Pie was out of the mix, but now she has to take care of the five out-of-control foals before they wreak havoc on the entire Sugarcube Corner. With the Cakes gone, Pinkie must take up her responsibility as the perfect foal-sitter. Will she come out victorious?

Or will the pressure overwhelm her when the hope of her friends ever turning back to normal is lost?

This story has a sequel!

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This looks pretty funny.

Will read later.

Hey there, another story I see? I'm going to read this later. I can't now, but later.

Okay Spike enough with the puns. :facehoof:

That being said the chaos unleashed in this fic would make Discord proud. :rainbowlaugh:

I have another idea for you next story: Potty-trained baby dragon.

Sequelllllllllll

:fluttercry: please:fluttercry:

2781785 I think you mean "How to Potty Train your Baby Dragon" :twilightsheepish:

That was hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie yelped, falling onto her back. “OW OW OW FILLY PARTS OW, DEAR CELESTIA.”

Oh god, poor Pinkie :fluttershysad:

Sequel! Sequel!

Also, congrats on the feature! :pinkiesmile:

2782028 Thank you so much :twilightsmile: I was so happy! I never expect my writing to get featured.

2781296 Thank you. I hope it does not disappoint :twilightsmile:

2782161 I'm very sure I will. No doubt.

Somehow, when I first commented on this, I knew it would be featured.

Somehow.

Basically a sequel in which Spike gets blasted and is regressed to a young dragon.

Or perhaps Pinkie Pie in some strange twist.

That was really funny xD

"Tonight, we dine in hell!" :pinkiecrazy:

that was f*cking amazing!

SEQUEL NAOW OR PREPARE TO HAVE YOUR SOUL TRAPPED FOREVER IN THE JUSTIN BEIBER MOVIE! :flutterrage:

2783347 OK OK I'LL WRITE IT I SWEAR JUST DON'T HURT MEEEEE :rainbowlaugh:

You know I thought the joke with the booze and ghosts was going to be in relation to the word spirits...

Cupcakes are apparently like spinach for Pinkie. I wonder if she keeps some in industrial cans for that purpose.

Also, a thousand Fluttershys demand a sequel:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

Are you going to disappoint?

Nice!:pinkiehappy:It was a interesting read..:rainbowderp:

2785069 Well, tons of people are asking for a sequel, so I don't think I have the heart to disappoint. :raritywink:

First of all, congrats on the success of your story.
Secondly: So many possibilities for a sequel!
You could have half of them turn into stallions? Or everyone turn into dragons (awkward for Spike or dream come true? (Especially if it's everyone BUT Rarity))

2785574 Thank you very much for congratulating me, and for the wonderful ideas of a sequel :twilightsmile: I may have to get started quicker than I thought.

Weird, I had a similar idea once, except it was the CMC and foal-aged Mane 6 doing the baby siting...babysitting the entire town of Ponyville.

I think Im going to start a very lame chant.

Body swap. Body swap. Body sw-

2788142 But how would that work? I could picture the CMC being somewhat helpful but how would the foal aged mane six be helpful?

2791442 Well they could still retain their skill (albeit a little watered down or rendered uncontrollable/reliable) Plus Twilight, Pinkie and Fluttershy have some experience with foals (and the former would be even more familiar sue so the possibly of raising Spike she she was a foal [having hatched Spike for a school entrance exam when she got her Cutie Mark.]) Though even if they still retain all their skills, it would still be a little difficult try to take care or a town full of babies.

2792016 Indeed, do you know how many diapers that would require? And don't me get started on bottles. :pinkiegasp:

2783279 I was just scrolling through the comments, trying to get to the bottom, quickly looking at all profile pictures, and yours was the only one that stood out to me.

2782156 SO HAPPY! If you get the reference I love you!

One demonstrative sneeze turns all of Ponyville into a foal free-for-all playground and Pinkie Pie has to pick up the pieces. Spike's turned back into an egg so word can't reach the Princesses for help. What do?

*Roll opening credits*

2798530 And you are now the most amazing person I've ever met. :pinkiehappy:

2798543 Oh shucks :rainbowkiss: You're too kind.

2800452 No, really. Not a lot of people really get NCS.

2802703 I thought I was about to die of laughter when I saw your profile picture. :rainbowlaugh:

BRUM BRUM BRUUUUMMM.

2803815 Yep. Its Scootaloo wearing a chicken costume.

2819385 Oh for a second I thought she was swallowing the chicken xD

Rainbow Dash elevated an eyebrow, her body slouched against the back of the chair. “Girl, you don’t just have a sickness,” she said. “You have a problem!”

If she had fingers, she'd be snapping them like some sassy teenager.

You know, reading this one now, the second one makes much more sense.

But really, each one could be read just as easy without the other.

That, in my view, takes skill.

Well done.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2848793 Thank you. I guess you are right, but it would be better to read this one first to know how a typical sneeze could turn ponies into something quite different. :derpytongue2:

Abba – what man flesh stations?

that sounds simultaneously extremely perverted and extremely horrifying

The cyan filly wasn’t flying, but she managed to buzz her wings hard enough to lift at least a few inches off the ground. But, even she knew her strength wouldn’t fail her yet.

I have to admit that I am curious about the brand of diaper being used here. Most human diapers would slide off with that much activity, let alone a full one.

And for her strapping down RD, I have to ask if that is some sick kind of Cupcakes reference. Is it? Or am I more tired than I should be?

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