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When Twilight accidentally finds the mirror pool, she just has to see if it works, a bizarre team of alternate versions of Twilight invade Equestria.

(This fic assumes that the events of "Too Many Pinkie Pies" never occurred).

Please comment and evaluate.

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“Not one word. Your clone has been under my roof.” Zecora said, raising her hoof, “This time you’ll just have to talk to the hoof.”

B-B-B-B-B-BURNED!!!

“My little ponies! I used to wonder what fools mortals be! My little ponies! Until you all shared your secrets with me!” she sang, “Magic cupcakes! Thrills and chills! I’ll take over Ponyville! Do you know you’re all my very worst friends?

Oh dear...
The show would be very different if this was the actual intro

“I guess we just might be able to sell this junk after all.” Flim concluded, “Care to join me in a musical number?”
“Would I ever!” Evil Twilight exclaimed.

and

I’m Flim! And I’m an evil clone of Twilight!
Traveling drug dealers nonpareil!

Oh dear, again.

Everypony breaking the fourth-wall :rainbowlaugh:

“Do you know who I am, Spike?” Evil Twilight said, “Do you have any idea who you’re talking to right now? Back where I come from, if I stop baking, an economy the size of Canterlot goes down the drain. Somepony opens her door late at night and gets bucked, and you think that of me? I am the one who bucks!”

Breaking Bad reference. :pinkiehappy:

4628035 Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :pinkiesmile:

4628112 Heisenberg is best pony. :moustache:

I can't stop laughing:rainbowlaugh:

(This fic assumes that the events of "Too Many Pinkie Pies" never occurred).

Then you should add an Alternate Universe Tag.

Seems overseeing, I'll read it when I get the chance.

“Fanfiction is an inferior form of literature in which so-called fans of an already existing work write stories based around those characters and settings. Fanfiction is generally poorly written and composed by people too unimaginative to come up with their own ideas.”

Me: Well............. Screw you too, Evil Twilight.

4628286

She's not called Evil Twilight for nothing. :scootangel:

So Evil Twilight's selling Breaking Bad cupcakes?

4628320 Yeah, they're supposed to be a stand-in for meth. :trollestia:

This Fan fiction...
though I have not read it all..
IS COMPLETELY HILARIOUS.
:rainbowkiss:
It's really has a lot of potential!

4659408 Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :ajsmug:

Mad

So this is gonna be bad... for Twilight :trollestia:

Mad

So.... Evil Twilight everybody :rainbowlaugh:

Mad

First...AGAIN! :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Mad

First.... THREE TIMES!!!! :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

“I guess this means we’re gonna get...heartburn!” Pinkie commented before putting on a pair of sunglasses.
“YEAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!” sung another disembodied voice.

“Now why didn’t I think of that?” Pinkie wondered, “Oh yeah, I was too busy being...punny!”
“YEAAAAAHHHH!!!!!” the disembodied voice repeated.

Silver Quill references, SERIOUSLY?!?!?!?! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Zecora smacked her own forehead with her hoof

FACC HOOF PARTY!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::facehoof:

No. I can't do this any more







:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This story badly needs a few more "Random" tags. :derpyderp1: One simply isn't enough.
And maybe an M rating for "Mindfuck" :pinkiecrazy:
I gave it thumbs up, but srsly, WTF did I just read?

Well that was an unsatisfying conclusion with a ton of waffling on the clones' lives being worth anything. It seriously felt as if Celestia only cared about clones dying if they were killed by a magic beam instead of a chant.

Also, unless I missed something somewhere, this is in no way deserving of the sex tag (nor adventure).

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