Do rainbows really exist? Are they a definite reality of the world around us? Or are they merely a beautiful artifact of the sky that somehow is an illusion to the onlooker?
Or do they exist for the purpose of existing?
Even in a world where death seems impenetrable, there is always the unexpected.
'Her stomach flipping around in her stomach'?
Is Rainbow Dash a freakish mutant?
Another great story! Calling it now, you get featured again. One slight thing...
Heheh, I don't think that's quite what you meant to say ...... okay I can't hold it anymore
2789105 It's kind of like a metaphor? I'm sorry.
why? Why did she die? What happened? Oh god the feels!
2794204 While I was writing this, I didn't really think about the cause of death. All I was thinking was... Rainbow Dash has died. But then, after I wrote about her windows being taped/boarded, I was starting to think it was murder.
Please no.
I didn't even think about that while I was writing.2794324
Well it's up to our imagination then. I hope to see more from you.
The ending's a little open and the events prior are also a mystery, it's a nice story but I'm not sure if this is suitable as a one-shot. Great job with what you've got currently though! I myself enjoyed it~
2795638 Thank you very much for your feedback
2794394 Thank you!
Sweet Celestia. This was cute but I feel sad. Rainbow is DEAD!
KEEP CALM AND SHOP PINKIEDASH!!!
Not a fan of pinkiedash but this fic was really enjoyable, even if it was sad
This was such a good story! Very sad but good! I am in tears right now
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It's a myth that if you (Or somepony else) doesn't believe you are dead that you forget your dead yourself and if reconciled that you go to heaven....