In this retelling of the classic "The Three Little Pigs", the Cutie Mark Crusaders are being terrorized by the pony with the most destructive butt in Equestria.
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...... Fuck it, I won't ask.
3126791 LOL
Actually, the truth is this whole thing started from a stray thought that went through my head: Derpy saying "I'll herp, and I'll derp..." Everything else just kind of snowballed from that one stray thought.
Funny how some of the best shit we write starts that way.
3126797 I know how that feels. In fact I'm writing a fanfic that got started like that.
We need more children's stories here. This is adorable
3126830 Thank you. *bows*
3126953
Translation: Derpy is being a complete jerk for no apparent reason?
Bee a utiful
This was very nice. I may just read this to my girls as a bed time story.
AMAZING.
Very nice!
3127148
That's all that needs to be said.
I don't have to ask. Awesome requires no explanation.
this is the funnest fan fic i ever read the little pigs is one of my favorite stories when i was 5 and this storie is really just cool
CAN'T
BREATH
HELP
That...was...PERFECT! Seriously, how did you managed to make everything rhyme?
I feel talent-less
Herp derp!
Loved it! Great story!
That was probably the funniest retelling of that story I've ever seen. Nice work!
oh man, that must have been so hard to get ryme. Lovely job!
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Am I the only one who feels bad for Derpy? She just wants somepony to give her mail to deliver...
Cute story. The houses that the CMC built were quite fitting to their characters, and the last one was comically overdone. Loved it!
Write on,
Legion
LOL that was brilliant!! It also reminded me of this:
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3272038 Yeah, that's kind of what inspired it. :)
3272811 :)
This is funny
Woah...my childhood just got 20% cooler.
This needs more views. Now.
There now needs to be one written a la "The Trial of the big bad wolf" you realize...*hint hint*
*Clap, clap, clap*
Good job!
...
I am Impressed.
Well done, good ser.
Wow, just wow.
I loved this story. This took so much imagination and time and effort and it turned out really well. Why doesn't it have more likes?
The rhyming was brilliant and it was a very creative way to tell the story. I haven't read the Three Little Pigs in years so I don't know if the original story rhymed, but if it didn't, I really liked that this story did. It just fit so well and the story flowed well and it worked well.
I felt kind of bad for Derpy at the end, but she'll bounce back. She always does.
Again, I loved this story. It was short and sweet and it was a lot of fun and I had fun reading it. I could tell that you had fun writing it and it helps your audience have fun too. Thank you for letting me read it and I hope to catch more of your stories in the future. Take care.
3708944 Glad you enjoyed it. This story was a lot of fun to write.
Did I neglect to mention how much I loved this?
4060265 Glad you liked it.
Very funny and clever, have a like.
Well, I'm asking...but I do not know what question I will ask...
You win this round Mothy.
By the way, funny story.
Very well then, I won't ask. I will make a statement, though.
First of all, let me just apologize for leaving this in my "read later" section, rather than reading it as soon as I saw it.
That first paragraph really hooked me right in, so congrats in that regard.
This was a wonderful retelling than has managed to put a smile on my face.
*Note to self: Keep an envelope nearby at all times, and when Derpy asks for mail, give her some mail!*
Anyway, I know this comment comes late, but thanks for writing!
...Well done.
I must say. I really enjoyed reading this.
This was very cute. But...
Why did I never read this before? This is stellar. You are dearly missed. D: