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carnivale


mostly insane.

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During a dark night, the night before the Summer Sun Celebration, a mysterious clan of magical earth ponies bring out a relic containing the spirit of their former leader, Nightmare Moon. They attempt to lift her spirit into the sky in efforts to conquer Celestia's Sun so night shall last forever, as they have tried years before - when the mistress of the night was finally defeated by six particular ponies whom bear the Elements of Harmony - and fail again.

When Rainbow Dash's nonchalant venture into the Everfree turns deadly a few days later, she becomes infected with a mysterious illness - only to later find out it's more than just mysterious. Could it be somehow connected to the invisible lives of the weird clan, and Nightmare Moon's deadly spirit? Has it overtaken her in a need of a new home, or is it ripping her soul to pieces in attempt to get out? Or is it really just an ordinary disease that threatens to end her life in one way or another?

Cover art by me.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 31 )

I wonder what caused all the thumbs down- it's not a bad story.

2426604 That's great! I'll try not to make it too long of a wait :twilightblush:

2441141 oh, haha, yeah. I drew it myself. :derpytongue2:

OMG IM GOING TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it so much I can't wait:fluttercry::rainbowlaugh: good chapter :twilightsheepish:

2483643 Aaaah~ thank you so much :pinkiehappy: You're too sweet!! :rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by Slate the Pegasus deleted Apr 26th, 2013
Comment posted by Slate the Pegasus deleted Apr 26th, 2013

Nothing better than to listen to a song by the Gorillaz to get inspired.

This chapter has definitely shown the reality in what Rainbow is going through.

Ahh too many big words ahh. Anywho another great chapter can't wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

BOOM SHAKALAKA!!! Nice chapter getting pretty intense there with the words but hey it gives this story it's flare.

2622529 Thank you! Heh, I have a thing for big words. Next chapter won't be so up-and-front with those. :twilightsheepish:

Haha only had to look up one word :rainbowlaugh:

I like it, okay I admit that I LOVED it. though, you could just make the thoughts on italic (as said on the guide by Ezn)

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