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Back in mah day, we had to earn our Cutie Marks our own selves! But now Applebloom and her friends gone and dun institutionalized it or sum'thin, ah dun know, but it just ain't the same sum'how. But shoot, ah guess if it works...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 29 )

Really cute , I loved the interaction between the family; quick question tough ¿Are all the shorts in the same continuity?, because i id love to see Spike children with different characters.
that being said, Thanks for the story and take care.

Well ain't this adorable :twilightsmile:

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Quick answer: yes
And glad you enjoyed it.

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:yay: Well that was the idea, so I'm glad to hear you think so.

will there be more??
cuz i want
MOAR

Spike is 10 years younger than Rarity, and just because you age them both up, that fact won't change. It's kinda creepy. But, I enjoyed it, and I hope more is coming! :raritywink:

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Most certainly

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Got to respectfully disagree with the creepy aspect. My dad just so happens to be 10 years older than my mom, so I can't say the idea phases me in the slightest. Glad you enjoyed it though, and more shall indeed be coming.

i loved this first chapter, so happy that Spike and Rarity are a couple. i also hope that if you ever do a SilverSpoon chapter, that she is has become a nice pony and is friends with the CMC and not with DT

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Glad you enjoyed it. Can't say I've had any ideas for SS as of yet though.

Hm, I guess she's a real Firebelle.

Can't believe this doesn't have more likes or views, it's very adorable piece of work.

She's so cute and fierce! Rarity attitude with Spike's sense of humor and sarcasm, all of the win!

I've already fallen in love with Fire Ruby. All of my squee. I love forward to seeing how you go about this story in future chapters. :raritywink:

Even if It's only meant to be a collection of short stories, I think it would be interesting to end with a first day of camp sort of thing. If I properly gather where all these short stories are going. Though with only one chapter it's hard to say and certainly enjoy the story so far. Will look forward to seeing where you take it. :eeyup:

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My father was 11 years older then my mother LOL

This story is adorably awesome. Continue it for the greater good!

Please put more stories Ruby Fire with the other characters from the show. She is so cute! Please her relationship knowing the other characters of the way they changed over the years as she will be known by readers is so fantastic.:moustache::raritywink::moustache::raritywink::moustache::raritywink:

i love how you write all the characters so well. good work

Funny and heartwarming. Its lovely to see the Mane 6 being a family.

Who is the father through?

It lives and it's glorious. And here I thought this would be forever an one-shot. :twilightsmile:

:yay:

Having a little trouble figuring out Pinkie's spouse. Aw, whatever.

You know what, that's the best explanation for a name I've ever heard:rainbowlaugh:. So Pinkie Pie :pinkiehappy:, and so Twilight:facehoof:.

If they're getting into all this sort of trouble already, I can't even imagine what the crusading will be like.

Some horrible part of me was instantly thinking that Pi was conceived in an orgy.

That said, I love how you characterize the brutal, innocent honesty of children. Start to finish you've had me laughing as the new characters were introduced though now I've gotten this very annoyed kink in my neck that happens whenever I don't get answers: why was Marble crying?

TELL US DAMN YOU.

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That horrible part of you isn't quite right, though its not quite wrong either...
Glad to hear you've been enjoying it, and don't worry, you'll get your answer in the next chapter or two.

3502634 I figured that the 'wildest party she ever threw' thing was refering to Cheese Sandwich

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Not a bad guess, though I wrote that well before the Cheese episode ever came out, so not exactly.

2338886 Old comment I know but let me just point out that it is in fact no way creepy whatsoever. Yes it would be creepy if they were in their younger years but a decade-long age gap is quite common and my dad happens to be 10 years older than my mom.

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