A What If story: what if Cadence and Shining Armor hadn't saved Canterlot from the changelings? What if the task had fallen to another princess instead?
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Wasn't expecting you to come up with a new story this quickly after putting "The Herd" on hiatus. And I must say, what a throughly exciting way to begin a new tale! If you keep up this level of professionalism and detail, I suspect a well deserved "Featured" for you in the future (which in turn will have MORE people checking out the awesomeness of "The Herd"). Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Edit: Also seems I am first to comment on this... huh, that's never happened lol. ACHIEVEMENTS EARNED: Top of the Pile; Cliched "First" Winner, Overdone Achievement Meme.
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Thank you for the kind words. I think I got this out fast simply by being excited to try something new. I'm going to do what I can to keep people from waiting too long between chapters. Hope you keep enjoying.
Woah! Wasn't expecting an update to this. But it's a pleasant surprise! That was a finely written fight sequence.
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Thank you. Yeah, I wasn't really expecting to update this myself, but the scene wrote itself in my head, so here it is.
I hope you plan on continuing this story!
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I do plan. Just know that this is on my B list of stories to focus on. It'll get done, just somewhat slower than the other stuff I'm writing.
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It's just that this is the best Luna vs. Changlings/ Saves the wedding story I have read.
There is another story much in the same vein as yours, but with Luna not as well thought out.