Wake up. See this. What do? - Part 2: Raise the Flag (comment driven story)

by RazortheAwesome

Meanwhile....

-Meanwhile, somewhere outside this story-

*RazortheAwesome and DaedaltheusXIV sit on a couch enjoying some Killians Irish Red and look at a screen that shows all the comments that have popped up since Razor announced his return.*

DaedaltheusXIV: So.....

RazortheAwesome: Yeah....

D: These are the people who are directing your story...

R: Eeyup (takes another drink)

*Looks through them and sees Grey Rebl, Registered Anonymous, Gordon Freebrony, BRP, and Swimming Dalek all testing their sanity*

D: This is going to be way too easy (takes a drink).

R: So say you man... so say you... (takes a drink)

*Silence regins for a few moments*

D: You know that putting in this scene is going to raise so many questions right?

R: We're best friends in real life man. Let them think what they will.

Author's Note:

P.S. This scene more or less actually did happen.

Comments

[Broniesrponies2]

When you are perfectly sane in this world, testing your sanity is the best way to ensure that you are. If one does not test and simply assumes that he is sane, regard them warily. Also, the random firing of neurons to spark different ideas is one of the things that makes humanity great. It is truly essential to allow any idea room for a short length of time to allow these ideas to either be realized or to be banished forever.

[Grey Rebl]

Oh you~ And to think I started it.

[Malaggar00]

I'm pretty sure RA started it

[Registered Anonymous]

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R.A.: *sees you mention his name in the comments that ISN'T part of the story* .......I FEEL SO IMPORTANT RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!! *fireworks start exploding behind him*

*after a moment or two R.A. calms down somewhat*

R.A.: Actually I didn't start this chapter thing... but I'll FINISH it! *an evil gleam appears in his eye* No just kidding on that last part, but since you are the first person to say my name outside of the story I'll give you a free batch of my special secret brand of cookie dough! *punches through the internet and through the screen of your computer giving you the cookie dough in a bag on your table*

*real life me walks in* Uh R.A. what are you doing?

R.A.: ...Nothing.

*raises finger as if to say something, but shakes head dismissing it and walking away*

R.A.: *turns back to you giving dual thumbs ups*

[Malaggar00]

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*walks over to desk to see a bag of cookies which emits a heavenly glow. Takes one and bites into it. Eyes widen to tire size.*
the cookies are so perfect!!!!

Thanks so much for the feedback, it means so much to me that you responded to my comment, I enjoy what you guys do in the side story and hope you continue the amusing plot line just make sure you don't break the fourth wall anymore or Pinkie'll...

"You called?"

Wha pinkie?! How are you here?!

"Oh silly if any one says my name then I can appear right next to them."

How?

"*giggles* it a secret."

Did you use your pinkie sense

"No you silly filly you that my pinkie sense doesn't work like that."

Look can you just go

"Why*looks at screen and at R.A.'s comment* ohhh well just as long as he doesn't break the fourth wall again he'll be fine."

Now will you go?

"Okie dokie lokie" * bounces off*

*heavy sigh* well any way thanks for the cookies and feed back *dual thumbs up* but yea keep up the awesome work and writing of your side of the side story also have this *emails completed twin linked heavy caliber cookie miniguns, an explosive cookie mix recipe and a bro fist with materials required to make cookies* have fun... just don't destroy the universe, or at least this one cause this one has all the awesome.
(The 100% of awesome in the universe is contributed evenly throughout the entirety of razor the awesome, R.A., S.D, G.F., G.R., B.R.P., And DaedaltheusXIV)

Keep up the good work guys!

Though seriously don't break the fourth wall or she'll..

"Hi did I interrupt something"

PINKIE!!!!!!!!!!!

"Oops sorry*bounces off*

*very heavy sigh*
Though still keep up the good work and non fourth wall breaking, if you want to break a wall build a room and demolish it and you'll feel better