HERPADERP!!!

Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves

I damn near died when I read that; keep up the good work, mate.

I love how you characterized Clover and Platinum in this story. They're clearly villains, but they're villains that I can't help but love. It's Handsome Jack (Borderlands 2) all over again.

Awesome!! And Sherlock Hooves!

(Greetings,” said Cross-Eyes McStupidhat, “The name’s Hooves. Detective Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves.” He gestured to the second pony, who tipped his equally silly billycock hat in response. “This is my associate, Doctor Elementary Watson. He and I would like to ask you two some questions.”)

I see what you did there!

so, derpy is related to equestria's most talented detective?

I'm done. Stop been so entertaining, I can't handle it anymore, seriously Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves are you trying to make us die laughing?

Yeaaah!

Y'know, I think that message on friendship is freaking awesome, t'is. And the Herpaderp--Er, Derpy reference, well, that just makes it even better. J'adore!

Wow...Derpy has some interesting ancestors, would almost be funny if she'd had ancestors tripping up Platinum and Clover the whole time.

Of course, as I understand, this is the story of both Clover and Platinum getting caught, so it would have to be the greatest detective...

...And it also involves how their plans got messed up, so somehow, Derpy would be involved

HOT DAYUM

Princess Platinum and Clover The Clever are best evil duo.

Of course it would take Sherlock Hooves to beat Cover the Clever, he must have figured out the whole soul gem thing and tried to destroy Cover, except we know know he failed. Clover wins, YAY!

I guess my theory about Platinum caring on some level was wrong, such a shame, I mean I never much liked her, but still. I also thought that Clover was a good pony really, acting as Platinums concience, but I guess I wrong about that too.

I love amoral protagonists. It makes me wonder about her speech on immortality though. I know it's been said, but it's true, it would take Sherlock Hooves to beat Clover the Clever. I can't wait to see the game of mental cat and mouse they're gonna be playing.

Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves... I'm out

2658306 deadpool too?

2658306 I support this comment

“I’ve designed this mansion

That shouldn't be "I've"

just died, and need to look

There should be an "I" somewhere here

bite my fisted hoof

How, exactly, does one make a fist with hooves?

I’ve ever seen in life.

The usual phrase is "in my life"

I wonder is it perhaps Derpy's father/grandfather or is it derpy and doctor doing some tardis shenanigans?

The doctor would fit perfectly as Watson, he loves asking questions with obvious answers.

Ok a wild guess here: Sherlock some time will have a daughter (or grand daughter or even great grand... Screw it you get the idea) then this filly will grow up and become the mare that marries THE Doctor and give birth to his daughter. Therefor that make Sherlock and the Doctor related (by law). Sooooo... I guessing that a certain Time Lord might make an appear once to say hi or he IS Watson in disguise; because why not. However the likely hood of either of those things happening is extremely low so in other words I just wasted your time telling you something you already know!
But seriously keep up the good work. Also I'm excited for the next chapter.

2664002 All fixed. Well, Except the fisted-hoof-thing. That's actually canon.
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The world's greatest detective an ancestor of best pony? Yes. All of my yes. I eagerly look forward to this battle of wits.

2665650 ... Huh... Please tell me you made it "I just died, and need to look"

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I wonder if there'll be a chapter were Platinum will talk about Clover and her own foals

It's every bit as beautiful as I imagined.

Why do I get the feeling that this will eventually lead to Platinum and Clover possessing Filthy Rich and Diamond Tiara?

YES .... just .... YES ..... ALL of my YES!

That is the best Sherlock ponification ever.

Cross-Eyes McStupidhat is best pony

Wow just sitting here reading this at work and desperately yrying now to bust out laughing in well done!

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embracing the corpse until blood and pus leaked out of it

I laughed so loud right now.

She sounded like a dying walrus faking an orgasam

And now I brought loughing out loud to a whole new level.

The name’s Hooves. Detective Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves.” He gestured to the second pony, who tipped his equally silly billycock hat in response. “This is my associate, Doctor Elementary Watson.[\quote]
The Rainbow Parakeet approves
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If I wasn't already married, I would propose to you. I love your stories!

Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves

Omg, I just fell out of the chair. This chapter was amazing

Sherlock look's like their busted. I love this twist.

“The name’s Hooves. Detective Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves.”

First reaction:

Second reaction:

Oooo, they're screwed

“The name’s Hooves. Detective Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves.”

So this is going to be that kind of story?

*sigh* Alright, show me what you've got.

im not sure if there fine because the name is herpaderp
or doomed because his name is sherlock homes

2702691 I want the fedora you have as a profile-picture.

How did Clover know that Plat called Reel Life "Filth"?
Also, I'm no expert, but I'm pretty sure you spelled "orgasm" wrong.
Anyway, you earned a like and fave because of Mr. Herpaderp. Have a mustache

I started seriously freaking out when I saw this was cancelled, so I decided to check on Dusk Shine.........
Quite honestly, I was completely crushed.
Goodbye my absolute favorite story since I joined this site.
I'm gonna go now and sit silently for a while.

Pity. I liked this story.

THIS GOT CANCELLED TOO?
What a shame, it was awesome. Spoilers for what could have happened next?

*gigantic gasp* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-

*3 hours later*

-oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo-

"SHUT UP!"

“Greetings,” said Cross-Eyes McStupidhat, “The name’s Hooves. Detective Sherlock Herpaderp Hooves.” He gestured to the second pony, who tipped his equally silly billycock hat in response. “This is my associate, Doctor Elementary Watson. He and I would like to ask you two some questions.”

Hoo boy.