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Silvernis · 33k words · 74 1 · 4.3k views

Jun

10th

2014

Scraps #5 · 1:07pm Jun 10th, 2014

Once upon a time, I attempted to write outside my comfort zone:

Twilight wasn’t laughing. She wasn’t smiling. She didn’t look like she was even maybe-kinda-sorta thinking about smiling, and definitely not about laughing. Her pretty purple eyes were squinty and not-sparkly, and her soft, soft lips were squished into a grumpy line. No smiles there, no siree. Actually, if anything . . . Twilight looked mad. At her.

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Daring Cammie Do

Daring Cammie Do #32 · Oct 19th, 2015 · · ·

So, I have a quick question. Do you have any intentions of continuing "Fifty Shades of Twidash," or is it dead and you just haven't gotten around to saying so? It hasn't been updated in about 2 years so I was just wondering.

ObabScribbler

ObabScribbler #31 · Apr 3rd, 2014 · · ·

*sneaksneaksneaksneak*

http://interfics.proboards.com/post/779/thread

KitsuneRisu

KitsuneRisu #30 · Feb 22nd, 2014 · · ·

Sometimes all we need is a bit of attention and care to make things shine.

Your attention to Tarnish sure made me beam the whole day.

Thank you for the favourite, and I hope I can entertain you again in the future.

Erol carstein

Erol carstein #29 · Jan 23rd, 2014 · · ·

Hey there! Thanks for Favouriting Terminal World! If there's anything you'd like to point out about the story, be sure to leave me some constructive criticism, I feed on it!