Hunter lives a normal life, until a completely abnormal unicorn appears on his doorstep. As Hunter gets taken to his favorite world, he finds that getting everything he ever wanted, doesn't mean that life doesn't come with its' share of problems. He has obtained great power, but with it comes even greater responsibility. Hunter's feats begin to attract quite the crowd, both good and bad. As the darkness threatens to overtake Equestria, will Hunter be up to the task of helping defend his new home?
Chapters (29)
Really great story, not alot of pony stories can have a good human crossover. Congratulations too you for making it work. The story is really solid ( minus some puke) and seems like this would be a natural reaction for a brony. Please keep this story flowing, and I hope it gets more attention. Because this story is really good.
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Thanks so much that means a lot!
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Brownie points. All of my brownie points.
Mighty impressed at your speed of writing. Speed and quality are amazing things to have as a writer. Now about the story, it's great. Your humor is great, and your attention to detail is great. The way your teaching Twilight is very good ( hope you teach her about the fandom) and I find gluton Twilight to be adorable. Also some conflict that you shouldn't forget is that Hunter's mother is still in the house. Could add some interesting conflict.
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In the part when Hunter leads Twi to the restroom, it says that Hunter's mother isn't in the house. Or did you mean that she still lives there and could come home any moment? Don't you worry, I'll be working that angle soon enough
2345224 I'm going to say yes.
Probaly the besr opening sentence, ever.
Very good as expected. The only problem I found was when Trixie is talking about her her bear, you refer to her as Twixie. It sounds adorable
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Maybe that should be the bears name?
I think I found out how you can type so many chapters in only a few days. Your Twilight Sparkle in disguise, aren't you.
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You're*
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Gun's in Equestria, seems like a future problem.
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In the wrong hands maybe. I actually don't know where I'm going with that.
Should turn out interesting.
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Yes Now it's my time to shine. and my cameo is done, ah 
. well there is always later. By the way the cutie mar is a fireball with a swirl in it. Amazing chapter, maybe it's the nostalgia I'm feeling, but it was really good. Micheal as a dragon was definetley different from most Oc's, so you will have that going for you. you had a few grammar mistakes "and hot chocolate are delicious, should be is. and "video games are lots of fun" seems to be a bit awkward. Keep it up dude.
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Well I always go through and proofread every chapter the day after I post them, I usually just scramble it to get the thing out there and then I can go in and fix them up.
I think your cutie mark looks like a really cool rock that looks to be on fire. But Fireballs are awesome too.
Glad you enjoyed it.
No comments? that's not a good thing. this is a good fic, it deserves more comments. ill keep reading now, don't disappoint.
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I'll try my best!
where do I go to favorite this? I only really ever read fics on here.
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The little star on the right of my stories' name.
Thanks!
nvm my previous question, I found the fave button
omg Trixie learning about halo 4! Awesome!
star trek reference well placed.
hey if your not too busy, could you make a fic about my oc, a white Pegasus with a dark red mane, fairly muscular wearing ponified roman armor? his personality is a somewhat more serious version of RD's.
oh, and he comes from the changeling lands, fighting them to keep them at bay. he finally makes it out of the area and runs into rarity while she is visiting family.
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I would not mind making a story about your OC but I would urge you to write it yourself.
I would rather discuss ideas and have you write it, than take the idea and write it myself.
But that sounds cool I might if you really want me to.
k good idea, but can you proofread for me?
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I would be happy to proofread, and then proofread again, and so on.
I get excited about helping people sometimes.
That was one hell of a party
I LOVE THIS STORY
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Thank you so much!
Good story is good
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By the way, I am finding WAY too many similarities between your character and me.
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I believe that this is because many bronies are a lot alike.
Yay!!!
Races!!! And you didn't capitalize Ponyville in the first sentence.
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Fixed!
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Not just personality wise, I also have long blond hair (not as long tho), I am just a couple of inches taller, I go on walks to think, sneak out at night, m mom is a nurse, and I live on the coast (except I live on the east coast), and have had two girlfriends one in middle school and one in high school. Tell me that isn't weird.
Although my eyes are a light blue, not a deep green.
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Oh god, that's weird!
That or we keep our respective coasts awesome.
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I prefer to find the happy medium of weird and awesome
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That gif made my day.
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Then this will make your life
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There are no words. Only happiness and contentment.
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I thought the same thing.
There is also one for Pinkie Pie (no surprise there) and of all pony's
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YEEAAAAHHH!!!!!
Permission to write the sequel?
Pegasiters in my version
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I have plans for a pegasister to show up later in this story.
I can't stop you from making your own pegasister in Equestria story though.
*pegasisters
Access granted, i suppose?
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Well yeah, but you should keep away from the ideas in this story as much as you can.
If you want to crossover and have your characters run into my characters. That, would be awesome.
YES! My beging: Vinyl scratch appears in my shower