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Story teller at heart. I like to examine the unusual. I spend too much time being 'reasonable'. I write to play, and hope others enjoy the results.
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Seriously weird, and the "old man" has rapidly moved into my "hate him now, and beat the morning rush" category.
So, robo-zoo/robo-harem, eh? What a bastard. Folks will be lining up to take turns spitting on his grave.
Nice first chapter, and hope to see more soon. So far, I've enjoyed every story you've written on this site (albeit slightly confused by them at times), and find myself impatiently waiting for more.
Sincerely,
Ed Becerra
. . . If he wasn't dead already, and his nephew didn't get to him first, I woulda tossed him into an infinite cycle of death.
That old fucker was something else. I'm almost impressed.
almost.
It's too overwhelmed by HOLY FUCKING SHIT WHAT A GIANT DOUCHEBAG
I'm glad you all hate his guts. It'll make the transition of the ponies to a new place far more satisfying.
You are crossing MLP:FiM with Bolo? That is... unexpected and kind of awesome. Great now people will know where I took the name Concordiat from for the Equestriani nation.
I have no idea what's going on. Actually, no. I know what's going on in a vague sort of way (crazy sadist makes ponies, alicorns and human-type alicorns[?] to torture for fun and profit) but I have no idea why it's happening.
I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just ... confused as to where this is going, to be honest.
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Well, it's the Bolo Universe, so there's going to be a battle involving giant tanks. It's MLP so there's going to be lessons about friendship, self-discovery and love, how the gentler emotions have power.
There are two Celestias, and two Lunas, so somebody is going to get their ass kicked. And with Pinkie Pie around there's going to be some weirdness.
I detect quite a few errors in the latest chapter, mayhaps you should look for a proofreader in 'The Proofreader's Group'? (I would offer, but I know nothing of Bolo and already have too many commitments.
Cool story bro! MOAR!
This chapter felt like it didn't have a sense of place. You're just sorta shuffling from setting to setting and introducing new characters so quickly I can't quite figure out who's doing what. I can make an educated guess that the asshole died without creating an overriding will that distributed his assets so his family is by and large quibbling over his assets and that some of the family shared his disgusting sexual appetites and the only way the ponies will live well is to move out to this frontier (which I assume is the outside or darn near close to outside of the jurisdiction of the reigning government.
2337740 more?
I was wondering if you had any plans to finish this story?
4897087 5394040 Yes, but the muse for this deserted me. I have an outline and 80% written, but not the end.
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Maybe a Paneuropean Huscarl (Mk. V rip off) rolls over the hill flanked by some Heavies, GEV, and a swarm of Light GEV? Everybody throwing tac nukes, of course.
Sorry. I pulled out OGRE (Designer's edition) and have OGRE on the brain.
Well, this story is tactical grade weird; nonetheless, i am intrigued.
I hope to see this continued someday.
So wonderfully creepy! I half thought this was going to be the Mane Six as Main Battle Tanks, this is much better.
Dwarf Cadance... oh god my sides.
8200725 Glad your enjoying it.
8200750 Will pony Cadence try to grow a beard?
8196174 Wish granted.
Undead fic! Drive a stake through its paragraphs!
8205432 Awesome.
Hopefully Granny Smith didn't just destroy something important; though i suspect the others are not going to be too happy regardless, if and when they figure out what she did.
Also, given that Discord actually existed in this story, i have to wonder if Chrysalis is also kicking about somewhere; though if she is, and can still shapechange, she may well be hiding among the ponyville residents. Probably trying to keep a low profile, and reeling from recent revelations as much as anyone else.
Not one I thought you'd come back
to but none the less I'm glad that it continues
. I've enjoyed the bolo verse so far from a couple different storys
IIITTTTT LIIIVVEEESSS
Quite surprised at seeing this return from the great beyond. I'm also quite happy to see that your alive as well Dan_s Comments.
I enjoyed the scene with Pinkie playing a six-dimensional representation of Tic-Tac-Toe with Ernie. I was happy that it was Spike was the one in control of the tank and not Discord.
One of the previous commenters had said something about Chrysalis being about, So, I'm curious if Tirek or Sombra exist in your universe as well.
Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter when it arrives.
Glad that a story interesting as this one was revived, I hope you still continue making it
Decided to come back to this to see if it had been updated. Seeing as it hasn't, I shall continue to wait for when this epic story updates. Because it's actually a really great story to read and I like it a lot honestly.
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Sorry, my company has had me move several times recently. Packing, unpacking and house hunting takes a lot of time.
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It's all good and quite understandable, RL takes precedence over Online to say the least. Take care of yourself and everything in your life first. Like I said, I'm patient and I'm sure your other fans are patient as well. I'm just glad that you haven't abandoned this, Hope your house hunting goes well and here's hoping that your company doesn't make you move again.
This story is going good or should I say was going good. I don't know if the author will finish this or not I hope he will.