I detect quite a few errors in the latest chapter, mayhaps you should look for a proofreader in 'The Proofreader's Group'? (I would offer, but I know nothing of Bolo and already have too many commitments.

Cool story bro! MOAR!

This chapter felt like it didn't have a sense of place. You're just sorta shuffling from setting to setting and introducing new characters so quickly I can't quite figure out who's doing what. I can make an educated guess that the asshole died without creating an overriding will that distributed his assets so his family is by and large quibbling over his assets and that some of the family shared his disgusting sexual appetites and the only way the ponies will live well is to move out to this frontier (which I assume is the outside or darn near close to outside of the jurisdiction of the reigning government.

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I was wondering if you had any plans to finish this story?

4897087 5394040 Yes, but the muse for this deserted me. I have an outline and 80% written, but not the end.

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Maybe a Paneuropean Huscarl (Mk. V rip off) rolls over the hill flanked by some Heavies, GEV, and a swarm of Light GEV? Everybody throwing tac nukes, of course.

Sorry. I pulled out OGRE (Designer's edition) and have OGRE on the brain.

Well, this story is tactical grade weird; nonetheless, i am intrigued.

I hope to see this continued someday.