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Winter Eclipse
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New reading material, I shall follow this because I now curious as to how this shall turn out.
ME: *USES THE ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE* THEY DARE KILL HER!!! HEARSAY I CALL EXTERMINATUS ON THESE HERETICS FOR THE EMPERAH!!
I hope this Sole Survivor is an Automatron build. I have a lovely vision of dual gatling-laser and mini-nuke armed sentry bots on the parapets guarding Canterlot, and caribou formations being stalked through the woods by cloaked, skull-faced assaultrons.
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Nah, just the bare bones. I unfortunately live in a area with limited internet access, so I don't have any of the dlcs.
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Your missing a good game then.
9091553
4 is a lot better game
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Nah, not right now, but if I do I will let you know.
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Thats....yikes
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Vhat?
Okay the story is good so far, but you do know that Fall of Equestria stories are normally Anthro right, also did you really have to kill of Celestia like that, shouldn't she just be badly wounded instead and kept under Caribou watch?
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I've never been one to follow whats been established. Thats what I call boring.
Interesting concept you have here. I believe I'll track this. I do agree with Dusk on the anthro bit, but meh. If it works, it works.
Hun, so theirs 1/4 of free settlements hun. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS!!!!
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I love this idea for a story, but I've seen enough of stories with great ideas but crash down in a ball of fire. But I would of tried 2 stop it, but I may of not known now to great an account at the time. So if you want 2 I can give some advice.
Ok 1. Not sure if ur gonna read this bc it's fucking 6 am right now.
2. At the beginning there was about to be a fight. Try to describing it next time, I think I and some other readers would of loved to hear how he fought that out.
3. Its a minor detail but I can't get it out of my head. After the fight u said the the dog had a face that said 'I should of not come'. Try making the dog's head turn sideways and have a questioning look.
4. Not sure if your gonna have romance or make this a long story, but try to follow the 25 rule. Its when a character and another character have a full functional relationship until chapter 25 or higher, and start making hints of the relationship 10 chapters before. If this story going to be shorts than that, the 15 rule also helps, the relationship is functional on chapter 15 or higher, and add hints of a relationship 5 chapters before. This way the romance is not rushed.
And finally 5. One important redeeming quality, the thing that motivates him, his son. If in a fight, try to make him think about his son. If he's fighting to protect helpless mares, have him think of them as his son. If he's having trouble making a choice, what would his son do? You catch my drift?
Ps. Make sure there anthro, all of FoE stories are anthro.
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As far as the fight, I don't believe that it would have added to the story. For the romance part, I never plan out my stories. I've always pretty much put down what popped into my head, but I keep in mind what I had written previous. And as far as the anthro deal. I had replied to another commenter that I've always been one to break the mold, besides I do know of one FOE story that isn't anthro that I know of. I just can't remember the name of it.
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Ok, I just thought it could add 2 the story more. Heads up on the rule 25 or 15, it's useful... if you have any romantic relationships for the story in the future anyway. Make sure your character has 3 redeeming quality's, ex: he's motivated because of his son, he's a bad ass, and at times he's a smart ass... I do love the word ass. I don't mind no anthro, I'm just not used 2 it. Oh, question, does he take his companions with him or is he gonna be sucked in without them, and have an emotional melt down?
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One man army thing and no meltdown. As far as I know on my play through, he never had a meltdown. He just accepts what's happening and goes on. It could lead to something later, but he had already been thrown into a totally different world than his own. For his motivation, it's what is right that he fights for. For his son to have a normal life, for the Commonwealth to be free of another's control, ya know that kind of right. That's why he destroyed both the BOS and the Institute. They wanted to control the fate of everyone in the Commonwealth and hearing of a kingdom being enslaved pisses him off. Oh and he basically is a somewhat smartass, fights for what is right as stated before and is somewhat vulnerable when he meets someone that reminds him of a friend or family member.
Ok, I can not wait till the next chapters is done. If u need any editors I'm up 4 the job.
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That is utterly beyond my artistic ability, or I totally would.
Bye bye Equestria.
It's Fallout four so there's no sweet Mothership Zeta laser pistol, but if they've been to Nuka World they might have the endless laser. Mmm, lasery demise for the Caribou.
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Nah, up close and personal with a super sledge is how I go, though I did find a combat shotgun I really like.
hmmmm will he have lerbity prime with him. THAT would differently even the odds
That is pretty much what I have now. With the perks and such I go toe to toe with Deathclaws and Behemoths all the time. It's a melee build.
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(says its a melee build but (I See) no melee weapons)
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I use a super sledge.
Yup
I approve also wondering if he can get celestias halbeard
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Or something a little bigger.
I'd recommend swapping out the super sledge for Kremvh's Tooth, and bringing Sergeant Ash. Flamer with the Crippling effect is OP to the point that legendary deathclaws aren't a challenge.
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Actually in the creation club they have the Alien Atomizer and the Alien Disintegrator..
Tactical please continue incoming
Quite Right, Better Genocide then what the Fucking Caribou would do to this world. It may sound cold, but the Caribou are the Nazi's with an Extreme Slave Fetish and a Male only Society.
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The Caribou aren't even comparable to the Nazis.
They are much worst in every way.
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True, but I lacked a real way to describe them or a more appropriate comparison at the time.
Right when it was getting good to.
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It's not dead, between writers block and life considerations I haven't had much time to work. The story I published the other day was a attempt to get over the block so I'm hoping it helped but I'll get back to Fall(out) soon I hope
One doesn't march into battle without a sound plan, even then the unexpected can happen so one should have a plan that allows flexibility.
Does anyone recall any specific message(s) that directly link Vault-Tec to the Enclave and how much control they had over the government?
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No plan survives first enemy contact
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True.
The fun begins....soon.
Why isn't there an anthro tag?
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Because it's not anthro.
You're back :D
Writers block and life.