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Twilight's day hasn't gone well. Her night is about to get a WHOLE lot worse. Starting with being banished to the Moon...
After a series of unfortunate events conspire to trap Twilight within her own nightmares, Twilight's friends - along with the with aid of Princess Luna - become Twilight's only hope of rescue. Time and Twilight's fears are already against them, but they must also come to terms with how Twilight got there in the first place...
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I'm curious to find out what makes this nightmare so dangerous to poor Twilight...
This looks like its goin to be good. Looking forward to future chapters
Wow great story I
it
AppleRage
DIS GON BE GOOD!!
quick wake her up before Night Mare, Freddy Cougar, and (insert other dream based villain here) team up
Celestia....what in Faust's name did you do now?!
Dayum. Everypony dropped the ball on this one. Too bad that ball was a landmine waiting to go off...
D:
Bad meanie-pant friends :(
Oh my gosh!
This story is one of the only other two stories ever truly inspire these emotions in me:
Despair, sadness (to point where I almost started crying a couple of times), and fear. As in I'm scared for Twilight.
I shall be watching this story from now on, and Twilight, stay with us. We can't lose you.
- Super-Brony12
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Another neat chapter, dood. The weird Freddy Kreuger thing Discord has going for him is odd though.
It's just a bit of a nod really. You'll see. ^^
There's a brownie point for anyone who knows where the 3 fillies with the skipping rope came from (apart from Nightmare on Elm Street).
I love fics like these... keep it up will you
Whoa. That was way too creepy...I LIKE IT!
And poor Fluttershy, jumping at everything she sees.
Keep up the good work man, this story has me on the edge of my seat!
- Super-Brony12
The fillies are from Twi's freakout during 'Lesson Zero'. They were laughing and playing, then she started fantasizing a trio mocking her before Spike snapped her out of it.
2287592 *gives Zocarik a Brownie.* ^^
How do you write so fast? :o
2289597 Ah...well I'm trying out a little system which seems to work for me. I've already worked out and written the outline story and some of the key dialogue - it's written kind of like a screenplay, which helps me see the general structure/idea of the story. What I'm doing now is I'm going through and converting and fleshing it out as I go.
Still takes a few hours of typing for each chapter and there are sections which still aren't really written at all - that mostly dialogue that's not really relative to the major plot (which I'm rubbish at), but it does help me keep track of where everything is. Having a very active imagination helps too, some scenes I can actually picture as it would look if it were animated as a real episode, such as the Prologue.
Discord=epic troll
This is my first Comment on fimfiction EVER and I dedicate it to you good sir. I love this story so far!
When I first heard of fimfiction I also came up with the idea of Twilight getting trapped in her dreams and it being up to her friends and Luna to save her by entering her dreams. however I couldn't come up with a good enough story to make the idea work.
I could never have come up with something this good. You sir have had that same idea and turned it into something truly amazing! I am truly impressed. One last thing however, what ever you do make sure this has a happy ending!
Please keep the updates coming. This is my new favourite story and Ill be reading this until the end.
2306094 Thanks NebulaNyx - and welcome. n.n
May be some more comming later on - depends.
*groan* hello ponies he is in twilights mind he is free because twilight is dreaming that
2306104 sorry for asking but... Depends on what exactly?
New chapter tomorrow? Please?
my only complaint is that now I have to wait a few more days before I find out what happens next.
Loved it, Keep it up!
A Full Military escort? LOL
Loved reading this far! Keep up the good work!
Instead of the Fourth Wall, Pinkie can instead cause the Rule of Funny to coincide with her subconscious...
Meh.
...
We're dead.
Pinkie Pie's tangent of randomness was downright hilarious as well as Dash stressing out trying to understand it!
The thing with the moon was interesting though. Even though you plainly see it in front of you, you have to convince yourself to believe that the moon is not actually there. I always find stuff like this and other mind related things to be interesting and unique. So you have my thumbs up for that one.
Overall, another nice chapter. I would have to agree with 2322537 that my only complaint is that I have to wait another few days to read the next chapter. But I guess can wait, cause it sure is worth it.
- Super-Brony12
Wonder what the Mane 6 will find once they reach the core of Twilight's mind?
George Bailey would be proud of Applejack! Fun imagery in this one... I'm looking forward to more!
I am really looking forward to when the actually find twilight. That is going to be a interesting scene.
EVERYPONY IS A WANKER!
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2323395 Чернобыль with extra rainbows? Or maybe a Cyberdemon...
In any case, this music must fit to what will happen:
Oh yes, the potential is strong in this one! Keep those updates coming, I love this story.
Agreeing with Dat Rainboom- This story is gorgeous!
DON'T STARTLE THE WITCH
Loved reading the story so far! keep it up!
oh my God I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!
I am loving this story! please keep It up!
“Sister...I-” began Luna, but at that moment Twilight suddenly began to struggle and cry out in her sleep.”
cry out in her sleep.”
her sleep.”
Mistake xD but great story :)
2349827 oops - missed that, have corrected rogue speech mark. Thanks.
Damn you Chrysalis!
I DARN YOU TO HECK!
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I have only one thing to say about this development .... Oh crap.
- Super-Brony12
Alright! Look out nightmares and everypony, Zecora is here!
With Zecora at the palace so near, surely this will help Twilight conquer her fears!
I must agree with Zecora, however. When Applejack finds out that Applebloom hid in Zecora's sack, for misbehaving, Applebloom's flank is what she will whack.
...
Dang I just did it again, it's not too often that rhyming comes to me so plain.
(okay that time I meant to do that)
Anyway enough with the rhyming, good chapter and I anticipate the release of the next one with perfect timing.
- Super-Brony12
P.S. Sorry I couldn't resist, it was an opportunity that I wouldn't allow to be missed.
P.P.S Okay, okay. I'm done now.
2362802 XD
Super-Brony, it is very plain,
When it comes to rhyme you can be quite the pain!
But while we depart with sides to nurse,
Beware the perils of the verse.
For it's revenge can be very sweet,
Until the next then - hopefully sometime this week.
Hold on Twilight! Zecora is here!
Loving this story through and through, keep those updates coming!