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Ruby Revenge


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Princess Twilight Sparkle is living every little foals dream, something even she used to only dream of. Becoming a princess was wonderful, and feeling the love of those close to her made her feel ever so special inside. But as she begins to realize that she will need to start living a life without her friends, the very ponies who made her dream come true, she starts to fall into a sort of depression. The very thing a certain somepony has been waiting for.

(Teen for some Language) (Cover Art done by DoctorXFizzle)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

I actually just had a similar idea rattling in my noggin just the other day. Congrats. Seems well written and lighter so far than what I had planned. It's not often I can say that sort of thing about some one's first fan fic.

A lovely introduction in my opinion, and I simply can not wait for more. I can only wonder as to what scenes shall come from your creativity, as well as how much I'll enjoy each and every one:heart::heart::heart:!

please donĀ“t let us hanging with this to long i want to know what happens next^^

I give this all my loves!!

Oh snap! This is getting good!

Wooooo!!!! More write some more!!! :)

Damnit, Twilight. Why must you be so Genre Blind?

i like it, but a little slow paced

Please ooh please add another chapter. I really like your story so far I want to read moreeeeee. :fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttercry:

vaguely eerily familiar voice trying to make a deal with you?


I'd probably try to put it to my advantage at the very least, and decline at the very most.

Oh! Your story look so good! :pinkiehappy:

I just want to tell you kindness, that I would be a group which could be put on such an awesome story.

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*reads the end of the chapter* Pfft... snerk.. HA HA HA HA HA HA!

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