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Cheating whorse!
So much respect lost here. So much.
Spike, you Casanova you!
I'm beginning to think that the Elements are the fragments of their sister, and each of the current bearers contains a portion of their lost sister, of which Twilight is the 'dominant' personality of them all. It almost sounds like either one, or all of them, would basically have to be sacrificed in some manner to bring back the sister.
Also, this border conflict where Spitfire is being deployed to, I cannot see it ending well.
Really HATE the fact that Luna/Celestia are keeping them in the dark. Fucking hate that Luna is being such a god damned sheep and deferring to Celestia when it sounds like this shit is life shattering, and very much important. Fucking retarded.
Hmmm, these puzzle pieces fit together somehow but I'm not entirely sure which piece goes where yet. You certainly spin an interesting story.
Initial reaction to the dream sequence description:
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Off to Luna then? This could be interesting (Or in Fluttershy's case, slightly awkward). Unfortunately, from the looks of things I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out if I'm right.
Looks like I was wrong. Nonetheless, I'm calling shenanigans here:
You know something's up Luna, but you're too chicken to spill the beans, and the mane 6 have to remain in the dark that much longer. Hmph.
Called it.
All the while they can't sleep, and methinks they dreams will get worse regardless, possibly evolving into waking hallucinations. The elements want their bearers to do something, and you know that Celestia. You also probably know what that something is and all you're doing is fighting a holding action. Also, I suspect this has little or nothing to do with their happiness and more to do with the fact that you don't want to risk loosing them to whatever this is.
So Twilight is the reincarnation of your sister eh? Okay, but that still doesn't explain the other mane 5.
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Cool chapter.
You should have a Spin-Off fic.
The CMC harem is absolutely adorable!
The nightmares seem to me to be some shared memory like what spacecowboy suggested, but if so I can't imagine why Celestia would hide that from the bearers...
And I have to say... That's the best old equish accent I've ever read
So Spitfire continues to raise more death flags..... it was nice knowing her, and now it seems all the Elements of Harmony are having these vague dreams and unfortunately the return of this mysterious sister probably means our favorite ponies might not benefit too much from this.
Oh well, still got moments of Sunny being cute (and developing remarkably fast) and the Spike/CMC shenanigans
2829710 isn't it obvious?! All 6 elements are each a part of their sister with Twilight being the biggest part. When Celestia's sister is reborn they will all be combined into a Alicorn aka DIE.
I've strong guesses as to what will happen, obviously some variant of the Season 3 ending, but I probably shouldn't say it here, just to potentially spoilerize it for everyone else.
Suffice to say, I think you dropped a bit more than you expected too this chapter.
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I disagree. It's subtle, but look how Celestia's focus has been Twilight first, and then the rest of them.
Also, look at earlier in the story. Celestia mentioned to Luna somewhere in a previous chapter about how she didn't want Twilight to think she and Luna were "vultures, waiting around for [Twilight] to die."
The entirety of the story has been focused on Twilight (insofar as the mane six are concerned)
You could be easily be right, though, we'll just have to wait and see. *shrug*
If this goes where it sounds like it is, I think I might forget this fic exists in favor of thinking it ended with the previous story. It might be very dark and disturbed of me, but if they do what it sounds like: I hope Celestia and Luna are haunted for all eternity by the betrayed looks of those good, heroic, innocent, trusting mares they murdered to get their sister back.
POSSIBLE SPOILERS
I believe that somehow the princess' sister died and parts of her have reincarnated into the mane six
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO WANT'S TO BEAT CELESTIA BLOODY OVER THE "withholding destiny info" SHIT. give them a damn riddle or something.
The mystical shield of ignorance doesn't help anyone you fucking pain in the ass.
I could start predicting, you know. Don't taunt me, I'll do it ;)
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I knew this would displease you. However, I gotta write what my muse tells me if I ever want her to work with me again, and she likes the idea of Spike and the Cutie Mark Crusaders getting all kissy-face. She finds it adorable (okay, so do I, but let's face it, she's the one in the driver's seat creatively speaking). //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_chair.png
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//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
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To my knowledge, I don't think I've read any of them. They any good?
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Well, they've stated their reasons for doing it, so it's up to you to judge if they're doing the right thing or not. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Thank you kindly.
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For which character? I've had so many people clamoring for spin-offs, it's not even funny.
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Thanks. It's actually taking a lot of work to maintain Luna's accent as time goes on. I keep wanting to modernize it, if only for simplicity's sake. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
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I'm glad someone noticed that. Sunny is only a couple of weeks old, and is already saying simple words. She's going to develop faaassst.
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No, I think this is about where it needs to be. And even if it's not, the cat's out of the bag now. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Trust me. If there's no dark tag, there won't be dark happenings in my story. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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I think there's a spoiler thing on this site. Lemme try something...
spoilerspoilerspoiler.
There we go. try putting the word spoiler within the bb tags, and it'll work better. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
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I think you missed the point of not telling them anything. Giving them a riddle to solve will only reveal the information they want kept secret. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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Wow, a lot of Celestia hate going around. Definitely not what I had intended.
2829533 what's wrong with kids making out with other kids?
Can't imagine how this must be torturing Tia. She loves Twi like a daughter, but she desperately wants her sister back. No matter what she does she loses and she's trying to put this off as long as possible to spare them the pain of the foreknowledge of their fate. I'm not sure how many could handle something like that..
Good
CMC + Spike = all of my yes!
And more pieces fall into place.
Building off my comments 2488807 and 2660945, my new wild theory.
The Elements of Harmony are actually portions of Luna and Celestia's sister, an alicorn named Harmony. The Elements of her being. Her kindness, generosity, laughter, honesty, loyalty and finally her magic. And having found suitable ponies that embody those elements, the six of them are going to become Harmony. Hence why Celestia's been so conflicted. Death of her almost daughter figure, rebirth of her sister.
The dreams that they're having is the last memory of Harmony before she died, doing battle with a dragon threat that she couldn't win, hence the feelings of dread and despair. Possibly even against Discord himself (He's rather serpentine in figure). Would make sense in a duo nature of gods kinda way. Celestia Sun/Luna Moon, Harmony Order/Discord Chaos. Possibly she herself would survive being an alicorn, but her ponies would not. The last straw before deciding to take the last resort was the murdering of a group of foals. Likely, she sacrificed herself to become the Elements of Harmony to defeat them.
Harmony was Nyx's lover before her sacrifice. The magic wasn't responding to Twilight, but was responding to Harmony's magic
When this change is going to occur, it could be soon. Nyx's prophecy Born between two worlds, bearer of power cosmic, thy time approacheth. Thy travails endeth, with the setting of thy sun, and gift of thy mark. Where Sun and Moon meet, when ends and beginnings join, the cycle will break. Implies that it's going to occur soon, though 'Soon' could be years, or even decades in the timescale we're talking about here. Only thing I'm not sure on here is what 'cycle' it's talking about. Possibly that Harmony's resurrection has tried time and time again thoughout the ages, but not all of the elements were present when the time came. This might be the first time everything has lined up, so it ends the 'cycle'? Long shot that one.
Or the Alicorns name was just Twilight, and I'm wrong on the Harmony thing. Heck, maybe Discord is the shell that remained behind when she sacrificed herself... That would actually be a cool prompt for a story.
Don't want to actually spoil the big ending, so just delete this comment Mr. Author if you'd rather it not be here. Spoiler tags because I think I might be right.
Dare I say it? Yes. Yes I do.
Guys, my sensors are detecting high levels of pony lesbian sex with a twist thrown in during the next chapter. Just thought you all should know.
After the Cheerilee Rescue a fiction ago, the whole set-up with the Grif-Mino-Equine war in the background is starting to sound, like Der_Fur_Shur mentioned earlier, there may be a permanent alteration to the cast numbers.
I sincerely hope this isn't the direction you're taking this story.
Main character death has a time and place and given the tone and context of this story, seems unneeded and inconsistent.
That is unless this entire Nightmare and Twi's Past Life or Namesake plot happens to head where I think it is, in which case any character death would need to be handled very carefully .
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By the bye, I do really like the updated Newspaper (circa Chapter 15), The structure is right and it reads like an actual article now.
2830955 Fuck me
That makes way to much sense for me to even consider it wrong.
Heart attack in a can right there.
This all starting to seem really ominous. REALLY ominous. I'm actually pretty scared about what lies ahead for the characters that I've come to love. Please, just tell me that there's a sequel to this or something, at least then I can assume that while things will get sad, something will turn out ok. I'm literally terrified.
..........They are her sister split, divided into peaces to protect the whole, till it can be made whole once again. All I have to say is this....you...fucking...brilliant...bastard.......
the last element of magic was an alicorn who went into battle against dragons, I believe twilight will become an alicorn and get her memories, or twilight will help bring her back, which also goes with nyx's last riddle, but apart from all this confusion I am loving the story, keep it up, cant wait for the next chapter.
2830685 Nah, I can't read it anymore. I can ignore Blueblood, because he's not being shipped with any of the real main ponies. I can tolerate the Pinkie thing. I cannot tolerate Spike being shipped, even as a childish little kissy thing, at all. That is where I will draw the line.
2830697 Nothing when it doesn't involve Spike and ponies.
Can you translate that into modern English?
Yay! Spike's herd is awesome ! Great story, and I can't wait for the Mane 6 to get Alicornified, or at the very least see what happens with the 'Tia's other sister. Will you take her the Nyx route, Split her power amongst the Mane 6 [kind of like a bigger version of the Perticulture series / Ascension], or will Twilight become the physical reincarnation of her? Rather than just the reincarnation of her soul.
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brings a very good point. but you missed something..
Where Sun and Moon meet,.
i would guess that is inferring an eclipse of some sort. and in turn. twilight. i think maybe the author is trying to spin a different way of twilight getting upgraded to alicorn rank. it would kind of make sense. twilight massive power.. nyx referring to twilight as "magic" when they first meet. twilight could be a low power reincarnation of there sister. because twilight is the time between night and day. that's why tia was so interested in her from the start.
i don't think the author would merge or kill off any one pony.
"drops mic"
PEACE!!
2831790 man, what'd spike ever do to you? Dragons need lovin' too.
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1. For that, you'd have to reread chapter one or two, where Twilight introduces her herd to her parents.
2. That's a little more subtle. She was afraid of interfering with the filly's normal development, and the possible scandal that would result from a filly alicorn being born from her.
3. Side projects have a way of taking over my Muse's attention to the point where I tend to drop my current project if the new idea is engrossing enough. I just can't write more than one story at a time without running the risk of completely dropping the previous one.
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He just doesn't like males in stories, that's all.
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Got it in one.
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Sounds interesting. I'll have to look into it.
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Thank you kindly.
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I call this ship... Cutie Spike Crusaders! www.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png www.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png www.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png
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I appreciate the use of the spoiler tags. Have a plot in thanks. www.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
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::whistles innocently::
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I will only say this about that: I haven't put in the sad, tragedy, or dark tags. www.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_chair.png
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www.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_shh.png
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I'm sorry you won't stick around for the ending, especially over such a minor plot element that will more than likely be only mentioned in passing, or shown in a minor scene.
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She's telling Celestia to not get so worked up about it that she drives herself crazy. She's there to share the burden. www.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
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Interesting Ideas.
2832432 Thats all i needed to hear
Spike taking after Twilight, this I like. And yet again, another cryptic piece to the puzzle. You're a damn tease, you know that right!?
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Ah! Ks. Thanks for the explanation.
2832432 that's confusing and strange
That was a great Chapter what I think might happen is that the elements of Harmony will be come living artifacts. I'm sure if Twilight, the sister of Luna and Celestia, would not want anything happen to the ponies she cares for just like Celestia. The only reason I think they are getting the dreams is because the elements power is seeping into them. Once all conditions are met I think Twilight the Alicorn sister will come out from the elements and the rest of the mane six will live like normal ponies though they will probably be a lot weaker from that point on. Of course this is only my opinion and is subject to the whims of the Author and Muse I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
Yay update! But get thy grammar right, Luna sounds like a complete idiot.
“Thou” is second person singular. There’s no such thing as “two of thee”.
Secondly the forms with (-s)t are only used in concection with this second person singular pronoun, no “We shalt bid thee”.
Third point: past tense verbs are inflected with “thou”. It’s “As thou predictedst”.
And lastly there used be the same rule for my/mine–thy/thine as it is today with a/an, the form with n is used before a spoken vowel, “thine agitation”.
Dang it! Now i need to find me a Spike CMC Harem fic to read ...
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Huh.
And if that IS true....
Wrabbit you little genius you.
CMC is best harem.
.....Wait.....
2829998 Well duh.
2830955 The story you were referencing to is something along the lines of "The Mystic And The Mundane." Although it doesn't say that's how Cadence became an alicorn, it does explain how Luna, Celestia, Twilight, and another I won't name did.
This chapter man, heavy potential foreshadowing there. And Canterlot has a water park?!
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No problemo.
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To each, his own. I'm gonna miss his comments. He caught a lot of missed mistakes, and it was always fun to hear what he said.
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My muse is a terrible taskmistress.
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Now that was helpful! I've found a couple of sites that explain how to use those forms, but they lack detail. They give a basic use, but I find them sometimes difficult to undestand. Thank you very much.
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Good luck with that. Let me know if you have any luck with it.
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Too many OTH''s (One True Herding)?
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A very small one. It's at the bottom of the waterfall.
2844993 Honestly I think there's a point at which "to each his own" really dips into "whiny bitch."
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Nah, just the word harem and CMC in the same sentence.
2844993 Thank you, I allways found this guide very usefull. Allthough it’s somewhat easier for me being German because the final verb forms and the usage of this pronoun are the same in my language.
D'awww Spike is an awesome brother, and he turns on the swagger with the CMC.
So many little pieces, I always enjoy being surprised by the big reveals so I'm kinda glad that you're not putting out too much info so it will remain a surprise for me when it comes.
I can understand the Celestia hate you've been seeing. Keeping someone in the dark is only useful when they don't know anything and aren't likely to be effected by their lack of knowledge. Celestia seems to want to allow Twilight as much time as possible before telling her, but at this point whatever is happening is starting to have profound repercussions on them all and a lack of knowledge is more likely to scare them further rather than keep them in blissful ignorance.
EDIT: I think this needing to sleep while touching calls for a big ol Twi/Spits/Trix/Cheer/Dash/Pinkie/Flutters orgy. Sex, the cause of and solution to all problems.
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Sorry for late reply, but alright I shall remain silent
Well... it seems my previous assumptions may be a smidgen off. And the CMC getting all lovey dovey with Spike?! *Shudder* I'll pretend I didn't see that.
~SolidFire