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WHY WON'T YOU MARRY ME!?
Might wanna fix that.
Got an invisible quotation there.
misplaced i in the author's notes!
Now, I wait for more.
i've read these stories 5 times each and they never get old! NEVER! you'r an awesome writer, both the normal writing and the sexual writing.
BECAUSE ALL OF MY YES IS GONE! I SHALL GIVE YOU MY ErmERGawds THIS IS AWESOMES~! TAKE IT ALL!
Trixie needs to learn to not let her mind immediately go to the worst possible options first. She shouldn't have been so hard on them, Cheery's pregers and her libido is gonna be high at points cuz of that.
i was hoping to see more of a physical fight
Hate you? Not yet. Not until you decide to take an unannounced three-month vacation from the story.
By the way you missed the stop italics in the AN.
I was wondering when Trixie's insecurities would come up, didn't know they'd be so soon, now let's hope they'll get sorted out just as quickly. Now I'm just wondering, with the wedding/ceremony-thing coming up, how will Golden Bit's scheming come into play, personally I liked that subplot and I hope it isn't going to be forgotten (plus Blueblood could use some potential redemption).
All in all, this was a fun chapter, though now I'm a might worried about Applejack if Rarity manages to master that spell
Also glad Twi is warming up to Starslayer, it's a legit name
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That depends. Will saying yes get my face eaten off?
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I think you're a bit confused. A Dodecahedron is a solid figure with 12 sides or faces. This relationship is more like a trefoil; a shape composed of three lobes, radiating from a common center. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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Well, she can't really give star beasts away, since they're sentient and sapient beings. Nice idea though. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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Once you have the operation to make you a woman, we'll talk. Until then, you'll just have to pine away for me. Pine! PINE! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy_invert.png
Also, one of these days, I'm going to invest in a proofreader to catch all those mistakes.
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Wow, that's pretty good. I can't even do that with stories I love. I've read the Dragonlance Chronicles so many times that even just picking up the book to pass the time reminds me of everything that goes on in there, and I have to put it down again.
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Ehrmigherds? I'll take those too.
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Trixie is... complicated.
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Well, that still could happen.
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There is no plan for that. I try to inform my readers whenever I'm away for an extended time.
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I agree. We need more ATFN, STAT! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_shh.png
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Working that little plot point in has been harder than I thought. There's gonna be a lot of behind-the-scenes stuff going on that we'll never see, because I find politics too boring to write about it seriously. Don't worry, though. Resolution is coming. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
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heh, i read so many books that they tend to push out details from each-other. i know a little about a LOT of books. and i actually like it this way, it makes it so i can enjoy them over and over and over again.
Commence read.
Rarity has a new spell to learn.
I spy with my little eye... Wrabbit doing some Twilight saga bashing. That was priceless.
Also, Rarity wanting to learn that "spell" is oddly fitting. And I was wondering when things with Trixie would come to a head... I'll tell you what, you're writing her so well I'm actually starting to like seeing her in this story. Also, Trixie's moment with Plain Sight was spot on.
Keep up the updates!
Well, more plates added to air then.
I vote Twilight Serenade. And you kinda messed up with the italics in your authors note.
Poor Trixie, it's hard to get all the love you think you deserve when there's two others out for the same, all from one source.
I'm pretty sure that when Plain Sight heard about Trixie's running away, her thoughts were something like this.
Also, why must she be so mean to Colgate?
I really like these stories you write, they have so much potential! just the fact that it's a 4 way relationship makes it unique, you could do so much with this fic, sorry fangasm here xD
all these OC's are starting to hurt this great story
2342807 seeing your comment made me reread that part and I lol'd for a long time....xD I thank you for that.
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Then my work here is done.
2343195 nuuuuuuuuu! Don't go!
Where will I find my lols now?
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Just wait until the next chapter. Then I'll drop right back into the thick of it, as us Helljumpers are apt to do.
It looks like The plot is thickening.
S-sorry, AJ.
Anyway, that's pretty cool. I was wondering what would happen to those two kids. I do feel Trixie's reaction was a bit... well... extreme. But given her history, I can see where you're coming from. Fear of abandonment, isn't it? Poor Trixie. Will Plain Sight pony up? After slapping Trixie she'd better!
Read you soon!
Twilight Starslayer.
So awsome that even Rainbow Dash would be impressed.
I want to hate you right now Wrabbit, I really do. Celestia damned cliffhangers at every turn. Each chapter written as to answer a few questions and raise a million more! As I said the hate wants to be there but it can't, not with everything written so damn well! Literary gold is what you have here my friend so my only option is to sit and wait til next week like a good boy.
Damn brilliant story tellers making me take the good boy route.
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The downside of being that passionate. Trixie is just as passionate when she freaks out.
Fortunately (I think...) They have Plain Sight on hand to administer the mighty BRIGHTO SURRAPU! (Oh my god I can't believe I just typed that. And that I am actually gonna leave it. I am a horrible, horrible person. )
Not surprising though, as she has had the hardest time accepting not being exclusive with Twilight.
Hmm, I have a feeling Ava won't be too happy when she hears her two youngest members are gonna renounce the group. Good on Limnear getting made interim ambassador. Should be made permanent. Limnear is much better at it than Asshate McGriffon. Yes, AssHATE. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Not gonna lie, I've vastly ignored the OCs that aren't the brilliant Plain Sight.
And Trixie finally reveals her true identity as Dramatrix the empress of drama and emotional distress
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Lucky devil.
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Just wait until she first uses it on Applejack!
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He is good at the dark stuff, isn't he?
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I'm glad to hear you're finally warming up to her. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
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Hopefully, it won't take as much effort to keep them spinning though.
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It doesn't help that she's all but ignoring two other sources of love and affection.
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Pretty much spot on, there. Also, she was just upset that something bad happened to Twilight and she wasn't there to make it all better (even if she couldn't). //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
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All fangasms are appreciated, too.
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Sorry, they just keep jumping into the foreground. My muse is easily distracted, and tries to get me to write about everything going on around the main protagonists. I guess you could say that I take a lot of my writing style from David Weber. It constantly happens in his books, but all his characters are so interesting that it doesn't hurt the story at all.
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You kidding? Dash is gonna be soooo jelly, we're gonna have to spread some peanut butter on her... if Pinkie hasn't already. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png
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Aw shucks, Ma'am. T'weren't nuthin'.
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Sorry, but that's how it's gotta be. Let me know if you have the operation, though.
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For some reason, that BRIGHTO SURRAPU made me think of Rainbow Bright, now I have this image in my head of her slapping all the bad guys on her show (whatever they were, I think there was a furball of some kind, a drain clog, maybe?). //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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I swear, every compliment towards her is one step closer to a side story featuring her...
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It does seem like she's got some llama blood, doesn't it?
Poor Trixie. I hope everything gets solved quickly.
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Rainbow Bright?
The Bright Slap (Had enough Engrish from me. ) is a Gundam ref.
Your mental image is kinda awesome though.
Oh all my YES! Take them Now I have nothing else to give for other chapters I love all your subtle plots going on and I fear a war is brewing in the background. I'm also scared if Rarity does get that spell I think you are hinting on a rarejack relationship which is cool but then AJ may get pregnant How are all of Twi's freinds going to get all those baby showers going I mean 1st Cheerilee, Then AJ (Possible), Trixie, Plain Sight (big maybe), last Spitfire. Spitfire has to be last because Starslayer as a name can't be topped so the best is always has to be saved for last I can't wait for MOAR If you could please
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2346008 Hinting at Rarijack? He wrote a clop scene for them back in the first story.
Which town was Trixie talking about? She's not from Ponyville, right?
Also, this sentence conflicts with Trixie's memories from the first chapter of "The Teacher, the Sorceress, and the Wonderbolt":
And then they f- Wait what? What happened? Nooooooooo!
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You'll have to stick around and see.
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Ah. Never watched much Gundam. 08th series, Wing, and Stardust Memories are about the only ones I'm familiar with.
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Yeah, Rarijack has been there pretty much from the beginning. I even made a prequel side story about it.
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Hmm... forgot about that. Gonna have to change it. The newer chapter is more correct. I suppose I better write down a few of these kinds of facts so I don't mess up like this again. Thanks for catching that. Have some delicious cake. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
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Did I throw you off? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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8th and Stardust are in the same continuity at least. And I am not exactly a Gundam expert, but I decided to watch the original series a little while back just because it is one of those anime classics.
The slap in question:
Right at the beginning. I can't find a shorter vid that doesn't use SSBM sounds or repeat the slap 70 times. It takes a while for the slap to sink in, but Amuro does eventually turn into a badass.
I should probably stop now. Eh heh.
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Yeap I read the Prequel a very good short story
Every time... EVERY GODDAMN TIME
You just dont want me reading clop, do you? You sabotage my sexy times on purpose, specifically me!
wow ... I'm speechless not in a bad way but in a good way like 'its so good i cant form a proper response without gushing'. sure hope that twi can patch things up with trixi though. Now I play the waiting game
This chapter has been in my favorites box awhile. Been busy.
So, we finally get to the real conflict of the story. While the trio may have agreed to the "herd solution," intellectually they still haven't fully processed it emotionally. Trixie is having her issues revealed first but I wouldn't be surprised if Cheerilee and Spitfire are repressing missgivings for Twilight's sake.
The only real solution is to take the time to think things through and talk it out. Unfortunately time is in short supply. If they want to avoid Scandal worse than the Herd Ceremony by itself is already going to cause they need to perform it before Cheerilee starts to show.
On a different note. Wrabbit. At some point could we get a side-story exploring Luna and Fluttershy's relationship? Its a ship that's done a lot but often has no more depth than "Let's pair up Equestria's quietest most easily frightened pony with its loudest scariest pony cause Opposites Attract. LOL." I'd like to see your take on it.
Please
If you skip the smexytimes again...
I'M GOING TO TEACH YOU HOW IT FEELS TO HAVE A SALT SHAKER SHOVED UP WHERE THE SUN DOES NOT SHINE!
I'd like to apologize to everyone first for the lateness of the update. Some family unexpectedly dropped by, throwing off my routine, delaying the writing. Sorry everyone. I should have the new chappie up by the end of day Saturday. Anywho, on to the comments!
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Hey man, no biggie. We all have our passions.
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Thank you kindly.
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Damn, you found me out! Maybe if you're good, there'll be something in chapter 5?
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You don't think that Twilight's gonna let her get away that easily, do you?
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Well, I could do that side story, but you may not like the results. In fact, everyone here who's been rooting for that ship may hate me when all is said and done.
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I think that I'll keep that a Noodle Incident. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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No one said that laws had to make sense. In the U.S., you can be fined up to $1,000,000 for partaking in the act of genocide.
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I'm sensing some hostility towards me about the lack of clop... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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There better be...
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Oh boy I can hardly wait
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The delay works out for me. Now I don't have to wait until after work!
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EDIT: I just now noticed that Twi pulls a HELL of a turn there at the start.
I agree with Trixie with this, for different reasons it seems. They made a f promise, yet those 2 go runt in secret, letting the other 2 out of the game. I call that BS. Both should be punished and if they need to buck then agree to remove the promise and be done with it.
Well, kinda blew up a bit there, eh Trixie? What this story could have used (in my opinion) are the short recaps of events in past books. They help keep the reader's mind up to speed in all of it. Considering it's been... 28 weeks.
~SolidFire
And then Dinky used her knowledge to demonstrate her Sharingan (which she inherited from her mother) and everyone thought it was just the cutest thing. YAY DINKY!