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Starslayer. It must be so!
-Mis
Is what I thought when I read that part, dood.
Still looking good, but I don't like how this court business is going down,dood... It'll be bad news bears for Twilight and her herd.
Names always give me grief. To many things to choose from.
Noisy mares... Never can let a stallion get some well earned rest. And makes them wet the bed, but with something sticky.
Can't wait for more!
I could see this law backfiring badly on the nobles. Can't marry who I want to Then I renounce my title
Twilight already knows that she's going to cause a big social upheaval with the herd thing she might as well go for broke.
If Celestia doesn't decide to crucify them in the court of public opinion first. What just recently saved all of Equestria? The True Love of Candance and Shining Armor repelling the Changelings. A love this new law wouldn't have allowed. If Celestia is half as good at spin as I think she is she could easily portray this among the common pony as the nobility putting their titles over the good of Equestria.
Actually I can see so many ways that Golden Bit's machinations can be just flat out shut down that its hard for me to take this potential conflict seriously. Oooh, maybe having the rug pulled out from under his arrogance causes him to do something foolish, rash and direct?
What about the name Andromeda?
MOAR!
starslayer, i love it! you could use it as a branch off for later stories that focus on starslayer and all of HER adventures! she could even follow in her mommy's footsteps and form a herd at some point on her adventures with the companions she picks up along the way! it's PERFECT! she could live up to and surpass twilights fame and become the greatest unicorn wanderer that ever lived! she could travel all over equestria and maybe beyond, helping stop villains and find lost artifacts of power and all sorts os awesome crap like that. and as she traveled, she could pick up companions along the way and form a herd at some point. wow, i'm rambling. still, i'd love to know what people think. i'd write it myself, but i suck. plus, it's your storyline.
Commence read.
Blueblood. No.
I foresee Trixie's lost parents to be nobles of one of the two fallen houses to kill that onerous subplot...
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you expect her to outdo this?
A name huh? How about... Cheery Smiles? or perhaps... Light Thoughts? ...Thinking on this, I could do this all night
Great chapter and I can see Twilight quickening the disappearance of noble lines as soon as she hears about this and puts 2 and 2 together
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It's more like she was surprised that Twilight broke in (even if she had every right to be there). //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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The bunny works better when you set the font to 1.2 (that little drop-down menu on the far right of the story bar). //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png
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Hopefully, I'll be able to restore your faith in me again.
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Well, that's one in favor.
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That's where I got the phrase. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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Names can be difficult if you don't have a theme in mind.
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Well, Celestia has had a few thousand years to fight things like this. Doubtless she has a few tricks up her, uh... sleeve? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
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That's something Twilight might be able to get behind, even if it does go against pony naming conventions. Maybe for Trixie's? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
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MOAR incoming. Try not to go soopah sayin on me in the meantime.
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Wow, not even conceived yet, and you already have a series planned around her!
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Fuck yeah, Sparkle, Sparkle, Sparkle! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
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Got to be the most hated character from the show. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
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::twiddles thumbs and whistles innocently:://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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They better hope she doesn't, then. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy_invert.png
.2272744Shab, I have officially read too many fics, I'm getting to good at seeing the hidden twists coming...
2272744 In some stories he's okay.
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You have to remember that the nobles are retarded when it comes to emotions.
Not sure if this was mentioned, but I think it's spelled irresistible. Anyways, hope you continue! Love the series.
EDIT: I think either Firestar or Starstorm would make good names for Twilight and Spitfire's filly :)
Definately Starslayer. All of my yes. And I'll be damned if these nobles are going to meddle in things they have no right meddling in without me having a say so in the matter. Need to pass a law that only allows marriages between those of noble blood indeed. In mine own opinion, blood means absolutely nothing. It is the actions of a person (or pony) that matter. Nothing more, nothing less.
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actually, i came up with it as soon as i read the name. i may not be a good artist or writer, but i'm probably the most mentally creative person you'll ever meet. and no, that is NOT a challenge to find someone more creative, i get enough of that shit from my brother. anyways, i'd still like to know if the idea was at least a good one, even you don't plan to use it.
oh, and i forgot to mention this. your stories are fucking amazing and i hope you never stop writing!
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Somehow, it only hit me now that each of Twi's marefriends represents a different race of pony.
I dunno. I think Luna might take offence to a foal named Starslayer.
2272764 That's Starkiller, it was Luke's original surname in the rough drafts for Star Wars.
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I felt the same way when I saw the twists in Dune coming.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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Like in The Return of Princess Nightmare Moon? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_bedroomeyes.png
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Wouldn't know. Never played it. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
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That's what I get for typing without checking my own work.
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Meritocracy is the way to go. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Oh, it's good, but perhaps a bit too soon to be planning the kids' adventures at the moment. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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I know NUTINK! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
2272935Perhaps. Or she might take it as a challenge and take the foal under her wing. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
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maybe, but i say always plan ahead.
2273020 Honestly, it help that I've seen the same twist in like three Twixie fics, I'd link but I forgot the names....700+ Favs'll do that...
Not that I think you stole it, it's a clever twist so several clever authors have used it, you're just the latest I've seen.
Family tradition is going to happen. At least one the kids has to be Twilight something.
Masterful as always, and so much info too! Not to mention all the hints about future info you've been dropping, Trixie, Velvet, and Plain Sight. I'll be eagerly waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
Being the daughter of Spitfire and Twilight would be enough weight put on a kids shoulders as it is. Why not go for something like..... Nova. it fits with what Spitfire wants by being epic sounding while not putting expectations on the kid. Plus it's e a name either a unicorn or pegasus foal can use. Just an idea.
The other easy solution I can see besides Twilight renouncing a title she never cared about to begin with is that Celestia and Luna can presumably grant noble titles as a reward for great service to Equestria, and it just so happens that all of Twilight's marefriends were involved in the final defeat of The Nightmare in the last story.
Starslayer just makes me think of Starscream. And I just can't see any of the parent's telling that foal that is has failed them again
2273310 BRB, building a robo-pony and naming it Neighgatron. Do as it commands.
Silly nobles, you're just asking for it, now.
ehh ou could always name Cherilee's and Twilight's foal Twilight Blossom or something like that... I have no idea where that came from either I was literally just thinking up names and that came up.
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All Hail Neighgatron!
I still like classic 'Midnight' for Twilight's foal name. Good stories, good memories...
As for the marriage bill, I think Celestia can knight Cherry, Trixie and Spitfire for their role in defense of Equestria.
Second to last scene in the chapter:
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Would Nova Blast be too much? (Tho it sounds a little androgynous)
2272744 Lol! I'll try not to.... :D
Twilight Starslayer has a nice ring to it.
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Always a good idea. Just ask a certain purple OCD uinicorn.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Thank you kindly.
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I'm not going to rule it out.
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Hmmm... Nova, eh? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire.png
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A possible solution, provided the nobles don't amend the bill before voting. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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Elder sister, then?
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Me, Grimlock say all nobles puny! Me, Grimlock king! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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Not bad. I'll put it on the list of consideration. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
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Not familiar with that story; which was it?
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No more so than Starslayer.
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That... is pretty cool, actually; by 20% at least. Consider it on the list. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
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If it isn't Blueblood it's gotta be a family member huh? Oh well, can't wait to watch this backfire on silly nobles.
Hehe, Twilight Twinkle for Trixie's kid. Keeps with the traditions, names the kid, fits Trixie for some reason.
For Cheerilee? No clue.
Spitfire! StarSlayer why not.
Alright, there's my two cents, sleep time.
I think they should name her "Places". Because then when she's leaving somewhere, ponies will say "going, Places?". And considering she's the daughter of a insanely powerful unicorn and a teacher, and will be raised with the captain of the wonderbolts and a defensive and loyal showmare, she is definitely going places.
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Midnight was a child of Twilight and Trixie and Luna in Out in the Cold. The story itself explores the circumstances leading to her birth, while various sequel fics focus on Midnight herself. I highly recommend all stories in the series, if you haven't read them already.
Just got another name idea! What about 'Clover'? It's a reference to both Clover the Clever and four leaf clover - symbol of luck. The latter one is fitting, given that the filly has four mothers.
I just thought of something that would be quiet Hilarious. Ok immagine this. Somehow this law gets put through so twilight now can't be with those 3... so She drops all Titles and becomes a commoner then gets together with them in whatever form of permanent relationship there is. THEN season 3 ending happens oh look now not only does she get her titles+ back she also gets to keep her 3 mares and gets to laugh VERY hard in bluebloods face. maybe followed by a banishment to the moon for 2 or 3 days. or just to ponyville.... OH GOD BANISH BLUEBLOOD TO PONYVILLE!!!!
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HA!
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Oooh, I hadn't considered siblings. That could certainly work. I'm starting to like this name more and more...
yay!
... can I just say how perfect this chapter was? It's like I got everything I ever wanted: Twi's mom having feelings about Celestia and Twi's relationship I hope she and Cheerilee get to talk some more), Twi's family being all around great (Cadance and Night Light in particular), Plain Sight is always fun to see, and of course cute baby preparations!
BTW Starslayer is so over-the-top that it works perfectly
Wrabbit, I'm sorry but you derped again. It's irresistible, not irresitible.
EDIT: I derped too! Dang iPad spell check.
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Oh, it will. It will.
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That would be cute, but pure torture for her.
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I thought I had read that going by the cover image, but none of the chapters were marked as read. I guess it's been used by other stories. Thanks for the link, I'll look into it. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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What I have planned for Twilight would simply not work with the final episode of season 3, sadly. However, that banishment sounds nifty, though I wouldn't inflict Blueblood on to Ponyville. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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Glad to hear I'm living up to expectations. I'm always nervous when I release a chapter.
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If I do, it will be far from now. Also, I think that might be territory already covered. Might be worth a search.
Missing a capital 'A', there.
Also, the chapter's title on fimfiction is misspelled, even though it isn't in the actual chapter text.
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I honestly like the side story, subplot, whatever, you got going on with Plain Sight. She adds an air of mystery to the story, keep doing what you're doing
I'd also like to place my bed in for Starslayer
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Fixed. Thanks.
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Glad you're enjoying her scenes. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png