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Clearly, Twilight should just add Blueblood to her herd. I'm sure she and the girls could find uses for a subby little colt. <3
Good guy Blueblood ftw.
Okay blueblood you are redeeming yourself in my eyes in this story...you keep being a revolting -not in the disgusting way that is- son toward your father and all will be well. Take that manipulating bastard down...or at least throw a few spanners into the works.
Blueblood seriously won my respect there!
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Never seen anyone type that before.
Air Stopple...
What you did there, I see it.
Yay, Blueblood's not a complete douchenozzle!
Now what I don't understand is why Celestia doesn't just put her hoof down on the Lineage Act. She knows it's going to do more harm than good, and she's been around since before most of these 'noble' familes existed in the first place. Were I in her position, I'd have torched the bill the moment Golden Bit showed it to me.
i like how you ponified Aristotle's name very clever
1. Ninja parasprites need to happen ASAP
2. Bluey finally stalliony up
2523681 only way it could work without the politics is if Blueblood some how gets disowned and the mares take him in. the first is more likely than the second judging by what he's about to do.
A bondage wedding? Someone's been reading a little too much Shiniez lately.
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with twilight's spell, they could have a 'subby little colt' whenever they want already...
*reads the beginning of the chapter, stops at this point*:
What's that? Is that the sound of a Primary Story Conflict approaching?
ummm.....this is the first time ever that I felt sorry for Blueblood
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2>1
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technically up to 3 is possible with their current configuration... actually now i want to read that
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Enh. Live and learn about sources. I went with wut, because it's less likely to be taken as a typo. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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UMAD? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png By the way, I love your new avatar.
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Wut is a ponification of the term. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
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If you find some, let me know. I'm still trying to get my read later pile to under 100.
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I figured someone would suggest this.
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I try to put a little good and evil into every character. Can you spot Twilight's evil? It's very subtle.
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Heh heh. Revolting.
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I know, right? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png Took me a while (and a dictionary) to come up with that one.
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Celestia has more power than a president, but less than a monarch/diarch. It's kinda beyond her means to just tear up any law that doesn't meet her exacting standards. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Celestia.png
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But in order to draw them out, you'd need their mortal enemy! Pip Pirate to the rescue! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png
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There's more than one way to skin a cat. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Never heard of him. Does he write like Applejinx?
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Very True.
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Nah. Just the sound of Murr'fey sharpening her knives. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_YouDontSay2.png
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Well, there's something you don't hear everyday. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png
Don't you try to muddy the issue with your fancy mathematics.
2524210 Um... how does she have less power than a diarch, when that's what she is?
She and Luna are the diarchs of Equestria, even if they only have the title of 'Princess'. And last I checked, 'Duke' was still further down the list of nobility than 'Princess'.
Now this chapter I liked! it was great and it put the spot light back on the real plot!
great work!
2524210 He's the author and artist of Sunstone, one of the by far best S&M/bondage fetish comics. A bit like Applejinx, yes (don't quote me but I believe Applejinx has cited Shiniez as one of his inspirations).
Shiniez
Just two mistakes, i don't see them pointed out in the comments yet, so yeah.
I think there's too many 'of winter's in this sentence.
I believe this will be good, not god for the residents.
I can sense the shitstorm brewing, and it's lookin to be a pretty short, but nasty one.
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Also, this. Best Buddy Blueblood (BBB) should totally be a ponified Good Guy Greg.
looks like a repeat
also looking forward to more
eh what happened to nightmare night and harths warming at least create a side story or somthing (in the future as i am loving these new developments
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???
isent the spotlight always on twilights plot
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I'm not sure it's possible to read too much Shiniez. Also, Shiniez wedding was bondage free.
Look, we all knew Golden Bit's plan would never work. Celestia and Twilight just had far too many options to get around it for him to plausibly cover them all. No the real danger is and always has been that with his scheme smashed his pride will cause him to do something rash. Blueblood's "betrayal," has just made that a lot more likely. My guess is that he'll try to ruin the herd ceremony somehow. The good news is that he has very little time to plan so covering his tracks will be hard. If he's thinks things through rationally he'll realize the risk of having his reputation destroyed is too high for too little gain. But, again I don't think he'll be thinking rationally. Actually since all of his schemes depend on making a mare who had earned the personal respect of all the Princesses, had been tutored by Celestia her entire life, and proved to be strong minded enough to be instrumental in saving all of Equestria on at least 3 separate occasions that Celestia herself couldn't handle into a pawn through his fop of a son Blueblood, odds are he wasn't thinking too rationally to begin with.
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You don't happen to be related to the Grahf on the K:BDH TVTropes forum do you?
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Nobles are idiots.
...well, fictional nobles are idiots.
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no and K:BDH?
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most real nobles were idiots as well. why else would there be so few?
I love it when a story plays Blueblood as a good guy (or at least a douche for good reasons)
Glad to see the time is skipping forward a bit, otherwise we'd be here forever waiting on those babies to be born. As for Blueblood, glad to see him making the right choice hopefully it seems. Also Spitfire might just be the horniest mare in Equestria.... man if her and Rainbow Dash ever did manage to have that three way.
Wow, forcing me to not hate Blueblood? Only second story to ever manage that.... and the other one lost it in the sequel. YOU BETTER NOT TIME SKIP BLUEBLOOD'S SCHEMING WITH CELESTIA!!
So Celestia lets the nobles pass an ad-hoc law, then preempts its immediate purpose. Afterwards, when the nobles realise it was a bad idea in the first place, she'll help them repeal it and they'll owe her a favor.
Is the unsubtle nod to the Preservation of Marriage Act intentional?
Well damn. First time Blueblood was ever written in a way that made me like him. Whatever happens with our favorite foursome I hope ol' Bluey get's a happy ending too.
Well well well giving some backbone and a sense of honor to Blueblood eh? Can't say I disapprove, it just seems to fit with everything else you've done. Nice to see Celestia isn't letting Golden Bit get the best of her and Twilight either. Very good update.
That was very well done How dare you force me to like Blueblood The way he treated Rarity was horrid I do hope he does something about that than I won't feel forced to like him I do like the fact he is plotting against his father but I don't think he knows the truth of Twilights relationship and why he was put aside. If he ever found the truth I'm interested on how he would react, he is assuming she is marrying a stallion. I still have a feeling the house of commons and the house of nobles will start a civil war of subtlety I hope Luna and Celestia can protect all the normal ponies. I look forward to the next chapter. I WANT MOAR SOON! If it is alright with you
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The way it works in my fanon, the Equestrian government leans a little more towards the British Parliamentary system than a true monarchy/diarchy. She still has more autocratic power than the U.S. president, but not so much that she can just smash a bill like it was a rebellion without facing consequences. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Celestia.png
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Thank you kindly. Glad you liked it.
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Perhaps I'll look it up, if only to get some pointers and ideas for the story.
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Thanks for catching those. I'll fix them now.
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I'm saving those for when the fillies are born and old enough to appreciate them.
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In this story? Yes! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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Let's just say that his father won't be too happy with him when he finds out.
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But are they fictionally idiotic, or is it genuine?
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Shouldn't you be out looking for the Zohar?
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Acting like a douche so that you can save yourself for Twilight? Totally reasonable.
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Perhaps, but Spitfire is horny for her mares. Rainbow Dash's fangirlism still creeps her out a bit. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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Don't worry. You may not be present to hear just what is said, but you'll see the effects of that conversation. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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It's hardly ad-hoc. It's going through the process of being approved within the House of Lords. Golden Bit is just waiting for the right time to spring his trap. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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Feels good to know that I've redeemed two characters in some readers' eyes. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
2526401 Ah... Let me guess. In your fanon, the whole Nightmare Moon thing was what caused this kind of shift, correct? I'm guessing it used to be a true diarchy, but Luna's temper tantrum caused Celestia to rethink the political system?
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Yes, he may just rethink his decision to let her go, especially since three other mares would be thrown in as well.
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Very much so. Celestia suffered some credibility loss as well from the incident, but not so much that she would be reduced to just a figurehead. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Not a problem.
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My mind does not appreciate you enganging in intercourse with it.
Bluey? Best nickname ever!
All these new characters with different stories going on behind them. Will we see more of them?
Missing an apostrophe there.
kind of
outer
I'll be god for the Ponyvilleans
Otherwise, I still hate how you portray Blueblood, because I am unable to see him as anything other than a giant cock-sleeve, but at least the rest of the story is great.
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no, I already found it, and I sacrificed myself to protect my current incarnation so he could save his Elly, seeing as he was the only being strong enough to defeat Deus and Krelian.
SOOOO I realized something, and kinda have to ask the writer, Since Lyra's family is nobility, is she in a relationship with Bonbon? And if they are, are they already married or no? Cause that law is gonna cause some troubles
2524003 sorry for what that he's being used or that he won't have twi
Um..... well fuck. I can't think of anything witty to say.
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I never got a notification for that response.
The. Worst. Possible. THING!
Anyway.
Also, thx about the avatar. Having a sister who is an artist is quite handy. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Never enuff Twilight/Momlestia.
Go Blueblood! Become AWESOME!
OH! Random Fact of the day.
Murphy's Law is not "Anything that can go wrong will go wrong." That is Finangle's Law.
Murphy's Law is "If there is more than one way to do a thing, and at least one of them will end in disaster, then someone WILL do that."
Why? Because I am obnoxious. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Commence read.
Seems like good things ahead.