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Wow. I'm starting to really really really hate Golden Bit. Oh, and I hope nothing happens to Spitfire... I don't even want to see her maimed!
2943300 She's a main character, she'll be fine. I'm more worried about the admiral and her guards, background ponies never make it through these things well.
He doesn't seem to understand how most people work, does he? He's so wrapped up in the concept of power and money that he doesn't understand the concept of love.
Seriously, if she wanted power and fortune, she wouldn't have married a primary school teacher and a wandering entertainer.
I can just imagine Spike's look on his face during that scene, I do enjoy SpikexCMC ships.
Getting scared for Spits. Hope she ends up okay... Or at the very least, alive.
2917713 This!
“That's my little sister. Say hello, Sunny Days.”
This line made me happy in soooo many ways, I look forward to more BBBFF Spike (I wonder if Shining Armor and Spike like have an actual relationship sometimes).
So it seems Golden Bit has completely gone off the deep end.....and Spitfire's fate is getting bleaker each chapter, we'll just have to see where it goes.
Finally, Celestia continues to make any attempts at Twilight (and us the of course) figuring out just what the crap is going on more difficult. Why do you hate us Celestia? Have we displeased you in some way?
Looks like Sunny's getting pretty popular with the fillies already! And Spike's getting pretty deep there. Look out loverboy!
I always love to see when another author uses the same headcanon as me. Cutie marks being a psychological erogenous zone is exactly how I describe it. Somepony that pays attention to it is paying attention to something connected to the very essence of your being, which has got to be quite the turn on.
Spike apparently forgot to turn off his swag on the way to Sugarcube Corner and managed to get three cherry pies (we need better CMC emoticons) for himself during the trip.
Is it wrong that I kind of want Spike to fuck Twist so hard that she stops lisping? Not because I think it'd be hot, but because I hate her lisp and I'd laugh my ass right out of my chair if it happened.
I feel kinda bad for those griffon mercenaries. They are going to get their asses straight up handed to them. Going up against the top wing of Wonderbolts and the protection detail headed by the most awesome griffon in Equestria... I hope they play with them before utterly crushing them.
Looks like Twilight's ascension is confirmed now since Nyx talked about Celly's attempts at apotheosis. Now we just have to figure out her exact reasoning behind not telling Twilight... man that's gonna be one huge fight if she doesn't have a damn good excuse.
2943419 Nah, Plot Armor is spread thin when there are this many characters filling the same or similar roles. Spitfire was placed in a very good spot to be martyred out or at least severely mutilated. With Plain Sight set up to confess to Twilight that could play on Trixies jealousy issues. The set up has already been done for twilight to go ballistic, all we need is a reason for Cheerilee to be torn away from Twilight and we have one super powered pony bomb.
Though don't take that as they are all going to leave. That would lessen the impact of Spitfires death.
It's totally acceptable. Great chapter!
I foresee Spike asking Twi where babies come from in the near future.
That conversation will be glorious XD
I'm willing to admit that one of the reasons I like TwiLee is the Teacher/Schoolgirl fetish.
This chapter certainly delivered on that.
Only way it could possible be better would be if Miss Cheerilee's new "students" were to ask Rarity to make them some appropriate outfits.
Plaid skirts, white shirts, ties, that sort of thing.
The suggestion that you'd potentially cover the nursing kink in the future is certainly interesting.
Its not one I've looked into much, but it's certainly not one that at first suggestion I find "icky"
It has a certain underlying tenderness to it that I find somewhat endearing.
Golden Bit has....lost it....
I'm starting to have serious concerns that once his latest hairbrained scheme fails he's going to be stripped of his title and wind up killing himself in disgrace....
2943300 If spit fire ios hurt I only have one word. 'Extermination'.
Golden Bit needs to get a life. But seeing as he's gonna try doing something as stupid as what he's planning he won't have much of a life in a while.
Anger toward Celestia nearing critical mass. Seriously.
I agree completely with Backtalk here, Golden. Bit has lost his tiny mind. I hope that whole group pays for it. Dearly.
I am also really disappointed in Nyx for agreeing to help Celestia hide shit from Twilight. I thought she was better than that. Still waiting on some solid reasons why Two and the others need to be kept in the dark...
I am full of HNNNNNNNNNNG and worry.
If Spitfire dies I will end you, please don't do this ajognagnat ;_;
Noooooo! Sexy teacher teachings! My one true weakness.
Blueys dad seems to be seriously loosing it and Twilight is pushing for answers... when it hits the fan, it will be freaking glorious.
A lot of happenings this chapter. Golden bit has totally lost it, Celestia and Nyx trying to keep Twilight from finding out the truth. Foreshadowing of spike being a dad (or at least doing the deed to be one ) and possible harm coming to Spitfire (that better not happen
also that kinky teacher play
Hmmm, I'm not positive but I'm thinking Golden Bit needs to be on the receiving end of a severe ass kicking. Soon. As for Sunny Days I am thanking the good lord that I remembered my insulin beforehand, of course even if I do suffer the dawwwwwwwws are totally worth it.
As for sexy classroom fantasy funtimes can there ever truly be enough? Great update bud, I love finishing draft every Friday and coming home to this story.
My suspicion radar has been tweaked. I don't want to post a possible spoiler, but I really wonder if you're leading us down the garden path and have a surprise plot twist coming in regards to the whole Spitfire Segment.
Well I have to say Golden Bit is gone I think he will be dead in two chapters most likely by "suicide" Yeah cause if something happens to spits it will disappoint Twilight, that in turn will upset Plain Sight. I'm sure she could trace it back to Golden Bit and she is covert ops she could make his death seem like anything Oh and on top of that I'm sure Twilight would go ballistic as well and she would find out it was Golden Bit. Probably from Blue Blood and it would be a race on who gets him first Twilight or Plain Sight. I WANT MOAR NOW If that is alright with you
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It's not that big a deal, but thanks for the ego boost.
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Very true. Very, very true.
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Trollestia needs to eat, too.
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That would actually be less efficient since you'd have four mares laid up with bulging bellies, and that's something nopony wants to see...
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Thanks for catching those. It seems like I always miss a few...
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Interesting idea, but I doubt Celestia would use a living being like that.
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Quite. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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You're not the only one.
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Only time will tell.
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Berry Punch said much the same thing waaayyy back in the early chapters of TSW.
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It is a cute ship, isn't it?
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Yes, she is. She's been showing for about a month now. I forgot to put in the pregnancy counter this chapter. I'll remedy that now.
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Of course you haven't displeased her. But there is a good reason for it, hinted at in this chapter.
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I'm glad someone noticed that.
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I have to agree with you on that. It's like paying special attention to a pianist's hands during foreplay. As to your second point, I'd like to see it too, but because it'd be hot; though not with Spike, but maybe another filly. In fact, that sounds like an awesome one-shot.
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Damn... you guys keep on with the great ideas...Plot armor... I like that.
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Thank you kindly.
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Pleated skirts and loose socks... Excuse me while I wipe up the drool.
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Uh, oh. There's a Dalek in the audience...
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Let's just say that all my villains get their just desserts.
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There is a good reason for all the cloak and dagger behind Twilight's back. It's even hinted at in this chapter.
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I can make no promises. If I did, the suspense would be gone.
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Wow. It really feels good to be the high point of someone's day. Thank you.
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That means I'm doing it right. Thank you.
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You really don't want to see PS in avenging angel mode.
2946304 The Time of the Dalek has come. Prepare to be Exterminated.
anyway Rage Twi is a real problem especially if she goes alicorn durng the rage scene. then we'll have some real problems for Celestia to explain.
Lets just hope Twi doesn't Goes nightmare during the Transformation. Otherwise the world really is screwed and no amount fo harmony will be able to save it.
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Based on the inspiration for the Admiral, I wouldn't worry too much about her. The redshirts, on the other hand...
Careful there, Golden Bit. North Hollow couldn't pull this one off and live, and I doubt you'll do near as well.
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I don't care who does it to her, just so long as she stops lisping.
I forgot to say fk Golden bit last chapter!!
Better make up for it here.
FK HIM WITH A RUSTY POLAXE! That is covered in tetanus! If I am giving Plain Sight any ideas....GOOD
More teasing with Twilight's particular destiny. SOON?
You know, if something happens to Spits (And something will. It just might not be death. My current hypothesis is that she will be forced to fake her death.) Blueblood may decide to do something about his father. That might be interesting. I bet he is getting pretty tired of GB committing atrocities to "help" his son.
I love the CMC+Spike stuff you've been putting in. It's one of my favorite ships, but (almost) nobody seems to actually write it.
Also, since nobody else posted it, I suppose I have to:
First. Sunny sneaking a kiss from twist was great(a messy kiss? PDO do have some consequences you guys) also I can see Sunny becoming the only nonalicorn 'love' god in equestrian. raised by 4 mares who are overly affectionate with each other is a recipe for a person who views physical love as normal and something to be shared with as meany as possible. Cloud Kicker would be proud.
Second. 'I would fight a dragon for that many jewels'. that could be arranged. Say they make a move on Spits but don't hurt/kill her. Twi finds out and almost loses it. Tia stops her but spikes asks his mom to keep an Eye on spits. the next time they attack they face one of the strongest dragons on the planet. gg
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Karma is always in the works.
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Ol' Bluey won't like being used like this, even if it is ostensibly for his own benefit.
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Cloudkicker would indeed, be proud.
I swear, if any of them lay a claw on Spitfire, the least of their worries will be all of her guards. That... I already forgot his name , is such a terrible pony. Doing all that he does in the pursuit of power. He's going to get what he's got coming to him, I can feel it. Finishing this up tomor- today!
~SolidFire
Commence read.
All the hnngs and whatnot.
Twilight with the education.
This clop needs drawn. Pusspuss, preferably.
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Personally, I'd like to see Atryl or Foxinshadows do it, though Pusspuss is pretty good, too.
Thanks again. It's actually curious how few scenes like this I've found on this site, but this is easily one of the best.