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loves been a bit HARD ON me
yay!
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face, meet hoof, i have a feeling you will be getting to know each other quite well.
in other words...
i happen to LIKE Plain Sight. what i can't figure out is if she's IN LOVE with twilight, or if she's just ultra mega dedicated to her. i would LOVE it if she winds up joining twilights herd, but that's just me. OH! and excellent chapter, as always!
2305064 I take a very long time to process some things
Thanks alot for updating this! Now I'm likely to dream about these four! XD Loving the story still. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
Personally I love having Plain Sight as a major background character with her own story. No need for an entirely new fic, in my opinion (though I wouldn't really object to one).
It wont be that easy... it can't be that easy.
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I am really enjoying this story and I actually have a suggestion for your dilemma with Plain Sight.... if you are interested in hearing it message me
Only 22? In our world it was pretty common as little as 50 - 60 years ago (and still is in much of the developing world) for a single pairing of husband and wife to have over a dozen children and 20+ wasn't unheard of. Of course a lot of that had to do with high infant mortality and needing a lot of bodies to work farm fields with Unicorn healing magic and Earth Ponies innate talents enabling them to do the equivalent of a dozen or more human workers single-hoofedly Equestria probably never had the historical need.
Yes, I asked and answered my own question. What you gonna do about it?
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Sirius and Procyon acted more like servants because canids seek out a structured hierarchy, and they recognize that Luna is way beyond them in terms of power. As for Starslayer, it more like Spitfire falling in love with a name, not really thinking about what it might mean. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png
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I absolutely loved Dictated, Not Read. It's a real shame some douchecanoes forced him into writing anonymously through other's accounts. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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Firestar? That's one of my favorite redheaded superheroes! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
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Well, if you simply must. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
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Plain Sight is pretty... complicated. Yeah, that's definitely the word to describe her. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Well at least someone gets to dream about them. I rarely get those.
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To what do you refer?
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Always interested in hearing ideas for my stories. PM away.
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I'll tell you what I'll do. I'll correct it respectfully. Actually, the year in my fic's time is 1003PT. PT stands for Post Tantibus, which translates to After Nightmare. What this means that it's been 1003 years since Nightmare Moon was sealed away in the moon. So 864PT was actually 139 years ago; long enough for most of Equestria to forget about it. Now, what are you gonna do about it? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
this is that kind of story that pisses me off when I finish the current chapter.
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could you be more specific? or would that give away to much? sorry if i'm being nosy, i just really like these kinds of stories and i don't want to see a character that's literally been there from the beginning get dropped or something.
It's hard being the one on the side lines Isn't it, plain sight. I know that feel well.
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No you misunderstand. I was incredulous that 22 foals would be considered "prolific," with 5 potential mothers when 20+ children from one mother was hardly unheard of in the equivalent time period for humans. I then concluded that ponies had less pressure to have large families because of their innate magical "force multipliers," meant they could accomplish more with fewer necessary bodies.
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I hope you meant that in a good way. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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Actually, that was probably the most apt description of Plain Sight I can make without giving too much away. But don't worry. It's highly doubtful that she's going to be dropped from the story anytime soon. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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It's worse when you put yourself there. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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Oh, I see what you meant. Sorry about that. While 22 wasn't all that much when there's five mothers, there's one factor that wasn't mentioned in the story: Gains Bond's herd wasn't in the farming business, nor in any business that would require large numbers within the family. For someone who was essentially "making foals for fun, not profit" it would probably be seen as excessive. Also, by the time he formed his herd, there wasn't as big a need for warm bodies to fill jobs as there was previous generations. Wow, never thought I'd be talking about the pros and cons of breeding ponies on the internet before... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
On a different note I thought of an potential obstacle that might come up. Twilight Sparkle is the Element of Magic and Savior of Equestria and hence is a role-model to young ponies. She got Cheeriee beloved teacher of Ponyville's youth Pregnant Before Marriage. Idiot Nobles are one thing, but I get the feeling that Morally Outraged Parents Groups could be much scarier.
2305568 in the very best of ways.
Yeah, remember how in TSW I used to think that Cheerilee was being a tad bit creepy? Not having a bit of back story with Plain Sight is starting to revive those old feelings. Something about what was said during the Night Light scene struck me as a bit... off.
Now, don't get me wrong, I like stories with a few sub-plots, and the Plain Sight plot <hehehe> is interesting. And maybe I just forgot a few hints/reveals in the last stories and between chapters on top of all the other things I've done/read, so just saying.
<I don't like saying things like that, makes me feel like an ass. >
Commence read.
Think an s for happens?
Twilight's parents have an interesting background.
Celestia and Plain Sight both want to ride the Twilight Express...
How long has Plain been Twi's guard? Is everyone that was chasing Twi a complete romantic coward?
Regardless I'm sure there's room for two more.
When Spike finally gets the Birds and Bees talk, please don't just gloss over it, there is so much potential for Cringe Comedy here.
I was also wondering if this was going to catch up to canon and Twilight becomes Twilicorn at some point? It'd certainly give a large hurdle of a plot conflict.
Loving the world building here, with Twilight's parents. I've never read a story that uses them much, let alone give them back stories and whatnot. Well done. And yay, more Plain Sight! Giving her her own story is fine and all, but I'm still rooting for her to join the harem.
Also, I am anticipating the nobles to crash Twilight's little herd forming ceremony. I can hear them now: "You would dare form a herd with these commoners, further diluting noble blood? Blasphemy! You will marry Blueblood to preserve the noble bloodlines in accordance to Equestrian laws!"
: "You mean the laws that the Princesses are very much against but you seem to be convinced are still passed and in effect? Don't think so!"
Also like how the nobles seem to forget that in your Universe, Twilight was a commoner until her brother's marriage made it otherwise.
I think there's supposed to be a not in there somewhere.
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that's cool, just was curious was all. thanks anyway! oh and i never told you how AWESOME the cover art is! for all three of the stories, although this ones is my favorite.
2276845 you might have read Out in the Cold via EqD, it has Google Docs links if I remember right
Heh great chapter as usual, White Rabbit - thanks.
Looks like Twilight and friends may be getting a little frustrated with all the interruptions at just the wrong moment. They'd probably have better luck at the castle, particularly if they borrow some quiet, disused dungeon from Celestia or Luna. Ah we'll - looking forward to the next one.
Oh man, Plain Sight having her own story would be super awesome Though at this rate you're going to end up with an expanded universe going based on your story line
Good god more gold, you just keep impressing. The wedding dress bit was a nice touch, really just felt right. Again you drop more hints that lead to infinite questions and I both loathe and love you for it. As for a Plain Sight side story or just adding more of her to this storyline I'd say vehemently yes.
Also
I see what you did there, and I like it.
Gosh, I wonder what kind of life
JamGaines Bond led to get all those mares.am i the only One who noticed that One of the last herdmares was called Honeycrisp APPLE?
Missed a quote.
Now I shall sit here and fume until the next chapter comes out.
So. Linnear. Related to the jackass.
Probably not important.
I ship Plain Sight/Linnear.
NOOOOOOOO! Don't leave the Library! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/eenope.png
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Pretty sure Celestia would find tapping dat to be rather awkward. Somewhat surprisingly, I don't think Luna is interested either. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
And Cadance just settled for Twi's older brother.
Let the herding... Commence!
It'd be cool to see Plain Sight in a story focused on her. She's a good character. Also, the dress scene was spot on.
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We'll just have to see if they can keep that on the down low.
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Well, that's a relief. I'd hate for your scary avatar to eat me. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
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Like I told you in TSW; don't be ashamed for feeling the way you do. It is, what it is. I can take a little criticism, as long as it's not malicious.
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Thank you kindly.
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A romance story that ends in death? Doesn't leave much hope for the couples' future, does it?
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Someday, I'm not going to need my readers to spot my errors for me... someday.
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Plain Sight is 6 years older than her charge, and has been her hidden bodyguard since Twilight was ten. In this story series, Twilight is turning 20; so she's been guarding her for quite a while now. Oooo... giving Spike "the talk"... gonna have to add that to my plot point cheat sheet. As for your final question, I have slightly different plans for Twilight than that. I'll continue to add canon episodes where they fit in, but consider this series to be mostly "season 2 compliant". //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
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Trust me, you haven't heard the last of the nobles. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
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I'm actually on the last chapter of that story right now, and no, it's all new to me. I rarely go to EqD since I'm not allowed to post my stories there. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png
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Oddly, I don't have a huge problem with an expanded universe. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Glad to see someone got that reference. I was worried that I was being too heavyhanded with it.
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Just a minor thing, but her name is Limnear, not Linnear. Also, I think you're going to be surprised why they won't tap that. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
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Yeah I know, still get that feeling however.
And your comment to Lavender cleared up a few points, so there's that.
2307081 It's okay.
Need... more... going into... shock from withdrawal...
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Okay, so thats not going to make the next chapter come any faster. Seriously though, I LOVE THIS FIC! So... Twilight... nothing stands in the way of you forming a herd, ay? It would be a shame if somepony were to be... igNOBLE... and change that
Awesome chapter can`t wait for the next one!
I so freaking hard when Spike walked in on them! That's what Spike needs, to see his mother/sister figure in bed with her three lovers, ha ha!
I could concur about Plain Sight getting her own story, it would be interesting to see what the Spy/Ninja mare was up to behind the scenes.
nooo don't stop giving Plain Sight the spotlight, I absolutely love that OC
Ok first order of business, what Twi's parents did before she was born in the "Diplomatic Corps" I like their form of "diplomacy." Second please keep Plain Sight I like her very much I think you could do intermissions/ small chapters with her just to offset the action going on with twilight though it would have to be done right like I think Green does well with that. Also I would like it if she does eventually goes to the herd but again it would have to be done exceptionally right or you could loose some readers Third I now understand why Applejack has such a big family love what you did there NOW I WANT MOAR!!! soon if it is alright by you
DAMMIT! All of my sexxy times get interrupted! Y U do dis?
All this time with Twilight's family has gotten me thinking. Trixie's an orphan and doesn't know her extended family if she has any. Cheerilee's mother and sister have met Twilight and approve of her. But Spitfire's family is one big question mark.
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Sorta like asking "What could go wrong?" huh?
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Thank you kindly.
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He'll either be scarred for life, or develop an unhealthy interest in them all.
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Well, she'll never go away entirely, but showing up in every chapter like this when she isn't the focus of the story is not good. I just have to cut back on her scenes a bit and quit depending on her so much. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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I kinda doubt I'd do little side chapters featuring her, since it would be even more distracting than cutting to her every chapter. Like I said, maybe a side story with her, but I like to do one story at a time, since my muse is so easily distracted that if I did another story at the same time as this one, I'm afraid this would never get finished. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
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Because it makes for good comedy when done right? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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That'll be coming up soonish, actually. They're mention in the next upcoming chapter. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_lazy.png
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you think this is a fucking game?
Awesome, yet more drama from one of my favorite Love Dodecahedrons on the site . I think I'll parrot everypony else who has mentioned this, but I rather like Plain Sight and don't really find her sidestory to be very distracting, mostly because it's now been made clear that she herself is dealing with complicated feeling directed towards Twilight too.
I swear, that unicorn gets all the mares .
i actually love having plain sight in there, and really hope she confesses her feelings
I agree that plain sight should have her own story