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fantastic. it's nice to see blueblood not be a total dick for once, and suddenly growing a spine to boot. for your efforts
Here's hoping Blueblood finds happiness before his father has him murdered. Also, does this mean the other Element holders get titles too or at least knighted. They seem to deserve. Applejack would look badass in armor.
HA! STUPID FUCKER! THAT'S WHAT YOU FUCKING GET FOR MANIPULATING SOME OF THE MOST IMPORTANT PONIES IN EQUESTRIA!
Huh. They're getting landed, huh? I figured they were just being made Baronesses of the Court. Interesting.
Oh, BTW, you might wanna take a quick pass through the magic lesson again. You spend a few paragraphs shifting between past and present tense. It's kinda distracting.
The title of this chapter only made me think of the song. My high school choir sung it once, good song. It really kind of fits the idea of this chapter, that the girls are being all awesome and ritzy and fighting for the right to be together.
>Twilight ran out of the kitchen yelling, “Spitfire! They're making me think sexy thoughts! Make them stop!”
Never make them stop Wrabbit.
Never make them stop.
Ok, I officially love Blueblood now. This version of him anyway. Awesome chapter all around. Also, suck it Golden Bit! Ol' Blue just threw a wrench into yer plans.
Let us all join in congratulating blue blood for realizing that love is wanting another person to be happy despite your desires. Bravo, bravo. But rarity will still tear into him when they meet so let's see how he act then, hopefully with grace humility and a desire for forgiveness.
Your tense slipped here and...
...here.
We need to get Blueblood some bitches for this show of awesomeness. Classy bitches. All of the classy bitches. And good spirits.
Welp while I'm sad Luna didn't conveniently forget how to keep the moon in orbit long enough for it to accidentally fall on Golden Bit, I'm glad to see he's pretty much lost this one. Props to Blueblood.
As for the rest of this chapter it had probably one of the greatest lines ever written
"Twilight ran out of the kitchen yelling, “Spitfire! They're making me think sexy thoughts! Make them stop!”
2592829 Sexy thoughts forever!
The elements were all knighted after defeating Discord, you see the tail end of the ceremony in the episode.
Well, there's still hope. The House of Commons might be able to shoot down the bill.
Strangely, I now think of Orzammar from Dragon Age. Dwarven women sometimes jump from one caste to another by bearing a higher-caste man's son, while men can do the reverse by bearing a higher-class woman's daughter (although the second is far more rare). A bill like this one would cause problems, especially since noble-hunters are actually rather favored in Orzammar. Bah, I'm rambling.
At any rate, now that Cheerilee, Trixie, and Spitfire are officially Baronesses, it's only a matter of time before news reaches Canterlot and Golden Bit's blood pressure spikes.
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Let me know if you find any discrepancies.
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And they tuned away just as they were going to show more close ups of the rod, too.
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Enh. He was probably out looking for Nuclear wessles. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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Hopefully the next fetish will go down a little easier for the audience.
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Crack: the Addiction has yet to make it's way to Equestria.
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Thank you, Sir! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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I was thinking about that, but didn't want to take the focus away from the herd. Maybe later they'll get theirs.
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Don't hold back. Tell us what you really feel. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png
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Thanks for catching that. I'll take a look at it.
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If I had thought about it, I would have used You Gotta Fight for Your Right (to Party), or even We're Not Gonna Take It. Ah well. This works well too.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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That's the plan, my friend. That's the plan.
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I like giving good reason for bad characters behaving poorly in canon. It's my anti-drug. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
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That's going to be an interesting meeting.
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Heh heh. I'm sure he'd like that.
Another fun chapter. One thing, though. Why does Berry Pinch know Gallopfreyan? Wouldn't that be Dinky's forte?
2593062 Wrabbit could hook him up with Fancy Pants and Fleur de Lis. They could class him up a bit ;)
Great chapter, as always. Though Blueblood needs more screen time with Twilight!
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At least fix Ole Granny's hip.
Always found that hilarious.
Save the country.Still stuck on dirt poor farm with barely enough bits to survive.
Town home to 6 national heroes. Still need rodeo money to afford to fix the town hall.
Woops, missed a few.
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That line was probably one of the few things from this chapter I really liked.
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Oh yeah, forgot about that. Gonna have to rewatch that when I get season 2 on DVD.
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Presuming of course that Golden Bit even knows about the herding-to-be. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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She doesn't. She knows Fancy, and that's only because she comes from a long line of vinters. I probably could have made that more clear, but I wanted the spell to be a surprise.
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Not sure that Fancy or Bluey swing that way.
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But then where would we go for antagonists you love to hate?
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Don't expect too much more from Bluey. We'll see him once, maybe twice more before he's put out to background character pasture.
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Well, with four local nobles now, maybe they'll get some much needed bits? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
2593305 Fancy is awesome. He's also Fancy. He would swing all the ways. He doesn't discriminate.
And I fail to see how Blueblood's opinion matters.
2593305 Honestly, I'm surprised word-of-mouth hasn't reached Canterlot already about the impending herding. I guess nopony in Ponyville thinks it's important enough for other towns to know.
And suddenly a random thought struck me: Rarity teaming up with Edna Mode from The Incredibles to design fashionable, nigh-indestructible wedding dresses.
2593305 Um, that actually made it more confusing. Can you clarify? You can PM if you think it's too spoiler-ish for comments.
Sigh, Blueblood I know you're trying to do the right thing and I know you're new at this, but you do not let a schemer know that you're trying to thwart him until it is far too late for him to do anything about it. Golden Bit may be shortsighted about this but he didn't become the most influential pony in the House of Nobles without the ability to improvise and adapt and his resources and connections are considerable. Wait until Twilight is safely married off then have your cathartic confrontation.
Is there going to be a thing between Luna and Fluttershy?
Finally caught up with this series and I eagerly await the next chapter
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That would probably be the coolest thing ever.
What you got planned there Blue?
Golden Bit just got metaphorically bitch slapped! Blue Blood, for once, you're not as much of SOB as I thought you were. Also, loved that bit with Trixie and Cheerilee
Nice chapter. Nothing too spectacular, but I really enjoyed seeing the progress of all the magic students.
I'm liking where Limnear is going in the story.
It was good to see Blueblood actually stand up to his father. I'm liking this newly enjoyable version of him now
That just sent a neat little shiver down my back thinking of it said in just the right voice with the threat dripping from a honeyed tone.
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Well, now that he's not intentionally trying to drive her away to save himself for Twilight, Rarity might be in for quite the surprise upon their next meeting.
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It's great to see that side by side with Star Wars.
2593891 True, the part I mean is how Celestia puts her horn on Twi's shoulders like a sword during a knighting, thus hey they're knights now!
That son of a bitch. I bet he's a communist... Damn commies
2593305 A) the Blueblood bit, Awesome! B) 'Braw great'....seems very close to being redundant my friend. Braw means showy, flashy, bold, strong etc.
And the bold great, the flashy great, the strong great and the showy great just sound off. My advice? Keep the 'braw' tae go wi' the brogue an' drop th'wee 'great' layin' 'roun' in tha' sentence.
I have seen many people comment about this line,
but it's just too great a line not to say anything.
Keep up this most awesome piece of work but please, don't hurt your brain too much to entertain us. I'd rather have golden lines like above every couple of months if need be
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Nothing is indestructible when Ponyville is concerned.
The very fabric of time and space are playthings to its inhabitants.
2594496 Why do you think I said 'nigh-indestructible'?
Well I liked it apart from some changing between past and present tense.
Here's and example...
Golden bit watched his son leave, wondering how he can salvage the situation.
"Watched" is past tense, where as "can" is present tense. You could use the word "could" instead of "can".
There were a few more I think and if you wanted I could go and have a look through for you.
blueblood is a god damn idiot. you dont give your enemy info into wich to plot another actuon. you FOOL!!
That was a great chapter That line "Spitfire! They're making me think sexy thoughts! Make them stop!" priceless I do like Blueblood having some balls for once but he is still stupid Never tell your opponent your plans until you are sure they can't do anything about it I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you
(P.S. Is Luna and Fluttershy seeing each other in the background, because I think that would be sweet if it was happening )
2593891 Still, from the point where rarity sees him top the point of revelation will be a wild ride.
Commence read.
And then they all fucked (after Spits cleaned up). The end
I never thought I'd say this, and I feel really dirty doing it, but...
You go, Blueblood. You go.
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Well, as has been hinted at in past chapters, they're keeping this on the down low so as to ruffle as few feathers as possible until it's too late to do anything about it.
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Okay, see the thing is, the book that Berry got was in Fancy. Since she already knew it, she brought that to Twilight's attention and switched with Snips... and I just realized that snips was reading Gallopfreyan. Excuse me while I make a teeny tiny correction to the story.
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Give the poor colt a break. It's his first solo secret plot.
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Not sayin'.
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Welcome to the madness that is Twilight's life. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Just thwarting his father's plans for the last decade and a half. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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Strange Cravings, man. That's all I got to say. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
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Well, they were in public, so an overt threat would be bad, so he went a little more veiled once he caught himself. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png
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They're everywhere! Quick! Check under your bed! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png
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Since you sound like you know what you're talking about, I'll take your advice and drop the extra bit.
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Don't say that! My muse will take it as leave to get all fat and lazy!
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Just ask the worst perpetrator of that offense.
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I think I corrected them all now, but if you like, feel free. I'm always up for using the backspace key.
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Much WUB was given this day. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
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Not far from the truth. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Yes... come to the characterization side... We have Bluebloods and Trixies! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
“Spitfire! They're making me think sexy thoughts! Make them stop!” Best line so far right there.
Now comes the question, just what did Blueblood do?
2596025 Ah. I realize that the girls and the princesses would be doing so, but I wasn't sure about the general populace. Then again, with the horror stories from the Gala, the townsponies are probably keen on keeping things from the ponies who wronged several upstanding members of their town.
This translates to: "Guided by the sun in the sky, Celestia... Hey am reading a Reiñol!"
It should be: "El sol es guiado a través del cielo por Celestia— Ay! Estoy leyendo en Reiñol!"
Since it appears you were going for formal Spanish, this should read: "Snips, lea la primera línea de su libro, por favor."
(Now, I'll continue reading...)
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ah, we can't have that can we?
troll.me/images/thumbs-up-jesus-says/jesus-says-get-ur-a-back-to-work.jpg buddy christ can get anyone back to work
Gallopfrey REALLY!
Dalek: Target Acquired! Designated: BAD PUN!!!!!!!! EXTERMINATE EXTERMINATE
Blueblood is awesome. (three words I never thought i'd type)
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guys, Stalin is under my bed, and he wants me to call him him Joe. What do I do?
Guys, help
That's supposed to be an 'an'.
Still hate Blueblood, but it's nice to see Twi and co. getting what they want. Yay, sexy fun herd tiems!