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Okay, this chapter threw me for a loop, mainly because I completely forgot about the other pairings and their coming foals.
Um, when did Rarity and Rainbow get knocked up?
I smell side-story potential!!
Curse my speedy reading skills...
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well Twi did make those candy gems for the penis spell
Feh. Angry with Twilight? The only thing that would've annoyed me is adding Plain Sight to the roster of Twilight's paramours.
3166563 If you'll recall Rarity asked Twilight to teach her the magi-dong spell a bunch of chapters ago.
Dammit, Wrabbit,
stop making me draw things I don't have that much experience in!On second thought, keep doing this. Push me!First it's Luna and Starry, now you've got me wanting to draw Sunny in the snow. Damn you. I can only regenerate these limbs so fast.
3166743 Giggity.
Looks like it's missing a sorry.
Honestly, she had about as good a reaction to it as anypony would have been able too.
Wow, all starting their families. Still seems like they are too young, but then again, between the fact that ponies mature quickly, and the fact the mane 6 have quite clearly found who they will spend their lives with, it really does make sense. Still, I think it may be that this story cycle as a whole is coming up on it's end, now that everypony is settling down. A good end, but I can't see this really continuing, at least in the manner it has been. Though their are certainly plenty of side stories to tell.
And side story smut.
Fuck Golden Bit.
3166884 Eh. They're in their twenties. Between 20-30 is about normal for kids.
Nooooo!!
Now I'll never hear the end of this from my friend.
It's not fair, it started off as PinkieDash, how come Fluttershy gets to knock Dashie up?!
Man I kind of really want to see pregnant Dash now, she sounds adorable.
Which of course would horrify her, but who cares, my d'awws must be satisfied!
3167440 Lol no you will not. I will never let you forget this
Hey look Fluttershy got Dash pregnant..................
CALLED IT!!!!!!!
So yeah anyway sucks to be Plain Sight, babies are cute, Sunny's a mess, News Flash needs some more sex, and Angel finally met his diabolical match.......
Oh man I just want to see the FlutterDash baby, the chosen savior, the one destined to battle the children of TwiHarem for control of Equestria.
Great!
Can't believe I forgot about the others and their upcoming bundles of joy. I wonder if they'll have a side story? .....Anyway, here's hoping Plain feels better soon. But I betting Lim'll get right on that.
Best. Sentence. Ever.
"Breaking news from the town of ponyville: EVERYONE IS PREGNANT!!!"
Poor Rainbow, either she got super unlucky, was on the receiving end of a poorly thought out prank, or lost a big bet to end up carrying a foal.
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Usually around mid to late 20s, early 30s. But, they do mature faster, so it stands to reason that the "normal" age might be bumped back some. I think I am just being pedantic.
Jeez, it's a foal boom in Ponyville. Six foals in about three years.
3168320 *shrug* I've seen plenty of folks married and having babies at 18 or 19 too. And fifty years ago that was almost expected.
A hundred or so years ago we could drop that number to 15 or 16.
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If you're referring to Nausicaaa, then yes, it was a manga before it was a movie, and yes, the manga far surpassed the movie in brilliance.
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It happens when you leave a story for a bit then come back to it.
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Offscreen, during the six months of the last time jump.
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That's one of the reasons I'm glad I never took speed reading courses.
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They've reached an equilibrium. Adding a new pony to the mix now would just be odd. It would be different if I had made it more of an open relationship, but this isn't a "ship Twilight with everything" story.
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Heh. Sunny snow.
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Woops. Guess I should be glad if that's the only mistake I left.
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One pegasus against all those fillies? It's more likely that she'll hook up with one or more of them.
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Thank you kindly.
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Indeed...
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I figured it was something Twilight would say.
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Well, not literally everyone, but still...
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Let's just say, "things got out of hoof."
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For a town that size? Yeah, it kinda is. Now imagine what it'll be like when Twilight starts handing out futa candy to the other mare couples in town.
3169444 honestly I wouldn't care if it was, I just don't really like Plain Sight very much.
There, I said it. I await my downvotes.
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........the only way to broker peace is through love........we will accept this. Plus Dash I doubt is gonna let Twilight beat her in the having kids department so I foresee more Dash/Pinks/Shy kids
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I'd actually really love to hear your headcanon for how it happened.
Im still psyched about the name "Starslyer". It's just too ridiculous.
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Unfortunately, I've spotted a few more sneakers.
A missing space
and an extra caps. Not bad for a chapter this size.
Now I do have to ask, what is the source of the black magics you use to produce work of such quality as rapidly as you do? If at all possible, could you send some of it my way? I could really use the boost to help keep my muse nailed down.
And I loved Twilight's rant against herself! I took me a second to realize what you did, but when it hit me I just couldn't stop laughing for a while! Ah, fun times.
And why would I be angry at Twilight for not going for a OC ship.
I actually feel really bad for Sunny cause she 8 months old and is at the same physical and mental level of the Twist and the CMC. She's growing so fast shes not really going to have a childhood really, it makes me sad
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I certainly won't downvote anyone for expressing a negative opinion about a character, not even one of my own. Honestly, I'm surprised that she's been received as positively as she has, what with her ah, strong opinions.
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That would be the most awesome and cutest arms race ever.
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Well, I'm gonna leave it thus for the moment, in case I do ever write it out. It's unlikely at this point, but possible. Of course, should someone else want to write it (and asks permission first) I would not object.
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Isn't it just?
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I'll correct those when I can. Thanks for the heads-up. As to your question, you first must locate an orphan, and then... no wait. That's how to create a dream machine that puts you in your idea of a perfect world. Really, it's my muse who has an iron grip on me, not the other way around. She is a cruel and terrible taskmistress, yet she does deliver when I can keep her focused on one thing instead of the usual twenty or so.
I would suggest working on one project at a time, no matter what inspiration strikes. When unrelated inspiration does strike, keep a small notebook handy to jot down ideas. Often, you'll find that what seemed like a good idea at the time is actually very silly and unworkable when you come back to it later, but it may also provide a jumping off point for something even better.
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I try to avoid that as well, unless it's the focus of the story. That being said, Spitfire in this story was for all intents and purposes, an OC, because at the time I wrote TSW, she had about three lines in the show, total.
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I'm surprised that you're the first to mention that. She's not quite at the CMC's level of maturity, but she will have an incredibly short childhood.
3186833 I just figured the PS fans would tear me apart for saying anything bad about her.
That WAS AWESOME Rainbow Pregnant is so funny I want ta hug the fluffy Rainbow. As for Sunny I can't wait to see her grow and still has Celestia taught her the spell to hide the other thing yet Yes I still remember that Sunny is a hermaphrodite Though I think this story is slowly coming to an end and I do hope you do create some spin offs I think it is beautiful family dynamics and I could see a whole world created around this trilogy of yours, like the Winningverse I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you
(P.S. I want pregnancy meters for the other two added please, must know how long before the cute army of Equestria is made )
You friggin made me almost cry with that Plain Sight scene! Even I wanted to jump through the screen and give her a hug...
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MANLY TEARS
ok I am now caught up and you are painting a wonderful story, I happily look forward to further chapters
Hm, well that's an interesting development with PS. Though I'm still not convinced that she loves Lim more than Twilight. She's like an extreme case of Trixie where she doesn't think she deserves Twilight, Lim might keep her grounded for now, but I doubt that it will last. Her affection for Lim, as I see it, is that she sees someone who's like herself; in PS's own words "Tainted". Lim provides a kind of outlet for PS's pent up emotions and PS won't push her away like she would others because to her they are so similar, both have gone so deep into the darkness that it feels natural for her to accept Lim as it was her own path down there in the first place, instead of fearing that she is dragging others in the light, or at least those who haven't gone into the darkness as far as her, deeper with her. Although her confession was done the right way, it was done at the wrong time; even if her confession was a little less than honest, to herself as well as to Twilight and Lim. One thing that struck me the most, and what I remember from the first part of this series that has a good connection here, is that to love is to know and respect the pony, one cannot love without knowing the pony in question. Which is why it's no surprise that Twilight reacted the way she did, she barely knows this pony who had suddenly come into her home and confessing her love as well as being her protector in the shadows since she was a filly, it's a lot to take in.
I hope that the drama and angst for PS won't end here. PS has invested way way too much into Twilight to leave enough space for Lim. PS herself doesn't seem to know it, but once her heart settles down a bit and most of her emotions are in check, to me it seems that her heart will still belong to Twilight and Lim will be her companion keeping her grounded and helping her along, though it doesn't help that Lim has the hots for PS. Hm, I wonder if Twilight will ask her BBBFF about PS so she can get to know more about her. Twilight's curiosity will get the better of her sooner or later.
Whew, now that's out of my system I can get to my overall take on this story.
This has been one of the best series of stories that I've read in a while. The first being a kind of Romantic Comedy, the next being and Action Adventure Romance with dark tones, and this having lighter tones though it's still heavier. I really liked the transitions you've made in this. Your style is amazing and I really hope that I can get as good as you in the future. I had to stop reading several times the past few chapters to keep my heart from exploding with cuteness from all the little fillies(Although Sunny Day's crush on Twist kinda almost made me wanna puke and NOT in the good way). I really loved how all your OCs came to a life of their own it really made this story something else. I love the interactions between everyone and the mystery you're adding behind this. I think I already figured out most of what's gonna happen next, but I do hope that your muse will be able to think of something that will definitely surprise me. I won't say anything here as to not spoil anyone's expectations and suspicions. One of the things that I really love is how much more depth you added to all of the main cast and side characters from the show. The princesses are wonderful examples, you showed them to be much more than just the near perfect rulers of Equestria. Bringing up their insecurities, fears, passions, and worry due to their immortality. I also liked the small bits of Blueblood and how you made it seem that there was a reason for him to act the way he did and it wasn't something he could really control and even though it happened in behind the scenes he made a lot of growth. I could honestly say that any of your OCs and modified cast deserve their own story. You really have a way for making these characters come to life and I really admire that, again I hope to be able to do that in the future. Your ability to convey emotions are almost on par with another fanfic I read in the past and that is more than simple praise I'm giving you.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
p.s. Hope your Muse is treating you well and will help you get that chapter out soon. My own is giving me a hard time and isn't being helpful by encouraging my laziness, even though we both know we have readers to cater to.
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Nah. I'd never be so lucky as to have fans that fanatically loyal to one of my creations.
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But that way, she gets to be fresh and recovered in time for the next season of shows they perform.
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Dash seemed so miserable that she needs a hug, doesn't she?
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Whoa! I got a manly tears! That's going in the collection!
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Glad you liked it.
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That's some pretty good insight, especially about PS. I'm glad to hear about the OC's, because the next story in the series is going to be a prequel with all OC's (except the Princesses, but they won't play into it all that much). It gives me hope and pride that characters crafted entirely by me are so loved.
Sweet flaming Celestia's flanks, you're killing me with the nonstop cute. Killing me! Yes, there was some sucker-punch feels in the kitchen but otherwise...
Awww, poor Plain Sight. I feel legitimately bad for her. Isn't it winter? How are two reptiles coping out there? Things are winding down a bit. Final two chapters to read and then I shall be at peace.
~SolidFire
Commence read.
Rainbow shall have to figure out the right speeds after giving birth.
The "Yes Dance" lives on.
I'm a little disappointed in the confession scene, I was expecting more feelings.
I found it completely flat. She makes her confession like if it was nothing even though she is supposed to be uncertain, troubled, she must feel betrayed by Limear.
But no, she just evade Twilight and looks at a wall....
Well, she cries afterward, but it's still flat, she should be upset to Limear, then understand she missed her chance once for all (even if it's not really the case) and then, cry. (It's only a simple way, but it was something like that I was expecting).
It's the same problem with Twilight.
'I was just being confessed (somewhat ?), I'm a little troubled for my other wives, but well, dinner is served and I'm hungry! What's for dinner?"
On side-note, it's a good thing you published your blog, it gave me the motivation I was lacking to continue reading this story.
Is this Behind Blue Eyes by The Who or Limp Bizkit?
Looks like they may take after Applejack more than you Rarity