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I didn't think it could get better.
Then it did.
They're going to need a huge house...
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I think her point was thoroughly pounded out of her though.
"If anypony wants me, I'll be out with the Crusaders. At least they don't go all weird on me.” said Spike. I really wonder what going on with Spike and the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
Yay for Trix being the center of attention.
She's kinda like RD in the way that she craves attention except hers is more than just self satisfaction since she has a fear of abandonment.
So Trixie's preggers now too?
I am pretty sure that would be incredibly painful. Not to mention DAMAGING.
Also, Twilight is shooting two for two? I guess this time she didn't try to make the spell sterile? Still seems like long odds, and remarkably irresponsible if she didn't, what with getting ready for a new foal as it is. It is starting to feel like 'Can't Get Away With Nuthin'.
Wonder what Celly and Nyx fought over. I wonder if Celly had tried to have somepony else finish Starswirl's spell.....
yes very entertained
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You got Trixie pregnant!
Carry on.
I am satisfied... Ok, done being satisfied, moar please! With some Nyx and stuff!
I'm greatly disliking Celestia's portrayal as the bad guy. That said, I'm glad the girls' relationship is progressing nicely and Trixie's worries made a whole lot of sense to me. So congrats on the romance side of things.
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Man, that goblin king was extra creepy. Neck-beard... ::shudders::
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Thank you kindly.
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Considering how tings are going? We're looking at a rather large spread needed here.
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Indeed, it was.
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She's a lot more like Dash than I care to admit, but with so little canon to go off of, it's easy to write her the way I'd like to see her. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
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Hey, hey! Someone noticed! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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Well, when you consider that an entire baby is supposed to fit through there, it doesn't seem that impossible anymore, does it?//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_smile.png As to why it went down the way it did, explanations are forthcoming. I'll also say this: Celestia and Nyx didn't fight over anything in the show's canon.
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You make it sound like a bad thing.
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MOAR is coming. hold your... um, shirt on, I guess. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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I'm going to have to ask for your trust on this. You've only got a portion of the story (and a rather small one at that). What went down, was for a very good reason, and I like to think that I know the show canon characters well enough to gauge their reactions to certain events which haven't been explained in story yet. Also, thanks for the last bit.
Anyone too dim to have picked up on that plot line is too stupid to have figured out the internet to be reading this. That scene 'came out of nowhere' like 3 'comes out of nowhere' after 2.
2387395 Nah, I trust ya. I'm just voicing my opinion on the latest developments.
I havent read yet. This one better have my sexy times
but i like Plain Sight..... IDEA!!!!!!! what about a side story JUST about Plain Sight? i still like the idea of her joining the herd at some point, but i know that the chance of that is slim to none so i'd settle for a side story. and as for the chapter......YOU FREAKING ROCK AT STORY WRITING!
Now that's what I call a great update! maybe Spike can have a growth spurt . so she can really be a big Brother!
PS. have Twilight run for mayor. no one likes that slut mayor mare as it is. she never dose her own job anyway
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give Trix her cart back too
Even if the other girls don't care Twilight is definitely going to research an alternate spell that allows colts now that Spike has given her the idea. For no other reason than to see if it can be done. Of course once its researched one of the girls will need to volunteer to "test," it.
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Never said impossible, just painful. Which giving birth very much IS. Also, the body goes through certain changes as it prepares to deliver the baby. While technically it's nothing that cannot be done outside of giving birth as well, it requires careful prep work, lest you risk tearing.[1]
That aside, that scene was pretty hot. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire.png
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Still, Twilight needs to stop that if she doesn't want more kids than she can handle. Doing that with Trixie still seems a little more irresponsible than I would have expected from Twilight.
[1] As I furiously pick nits like an amphetamine fueled chimp. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Huh.... I will admit I was a little surprised to see Trixie get pregnant so quickly, normally I would scold Twilight for being irresponsible as it wouldn't be fair to either baby to have the time and attention on each split between them, but this is a different relationship set up with four grown "parents" so to speak and I guess we can just treat it as if they were twins. Plus poor Twilight is gonna have enough on her hooves with TWO foals so the last she needs is me chewing her out. Especially with these immortals all having issues surrounding her life she doesn't even know about.
Also forget a house, at the rate she's going Twilight is gonna need an effin' ranch
well i for one think that spitfire would be a great mom for a colt. i kinda want them to have a colt you know... it just doesn't seem blanced withought it...
besides you wouldn't do that to spike would you
... lol spike might have his own herd a few years down the road with the crusaders though
We are very entertained, very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very entertained.
Another great chapter :) Super looking forward to there being foals about, I have to admit
Obvious
I'm not quite sure what you were going for here
log rod. lol Supposed to be long?
Hinting at possible Spike The WORST. POSSIBLE. THING.
Anyhooves, now Trixie gets the D and has her itty bitty coming and Twilight hints at 'shut up Spike, all we're having is girls'? Good stuff.
Can't wait to see Twilight's parents reaction to this one
And also: Little Spark
I'm sorry, but I had to name give a name for Trixe's foal right here, right now.
2386688 But she has her showcart.
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In the eyes of her ponies, she is good (banishing NMM, etc). In the eyes of the other immortals- the ones that will practically become your friends (if not best) because you share immortality- she had banished Luna, destroyed Onyx's home city (don't get it yet; not enough info), and (possibly) did something that resulted in the death of a (if not the only other generation of the EoH bearers) bearer of the Element of Magic- who Nyx took a great shine too because of her drive for learning (much like Twilight).
It's not so much being the bad guy as it is hurting your friends for the right reasons (say, protecting an entire planet of mortals from eternal night). And even then, it isn't something you want to do but are forced to anyways, resulting in broken friendships. Mortals are blessed in that we don't have to carry hurts for as long as they do and I pity them for that reason.
That all said and off my chest, please continue this story with in a story while telling a story
I also agree with Luna and shudder at the thought of 'last one out' when it comes to immortals. they could still live for several hundred thousand years before they left
Well, let me as a scientist who has spend quite a bit of time(on government dime no less) on the problem tell you: It's theoretically possible ( thus practically with Magic) to create a Y Chromosome out of an X Chromosome. It does however involve going through 19,599 lines of code and rewrite them. This is also extremely dangerous and a mistake would mean a disabled or stillborn foal. So the best way would be to take one of their fathers or Shiny and copy his Y for the foal.
Now about Trixie becoming Preggers: WTF? I thought she already had a perfectly viable non impregnating configuration. Why would she cast it with life ammunition? If you wanted it this way why didn't you bring her insecurities and jealousy for Cheer's foal into this and have it a calculated risk? If you rely on pulling out you are deliberately making a foal. Twilight is too smart not to know that.
Also: Spitfire can have a foal right away too. After all there's still a free place for it to grow. Just find Spit's father(really without a donor of a known vial template(it's vial if the template was alive and healthy at some point.) it's just irresponsible) or one of her brothers(it's exactly the same anyway, or they would be her sisters).
>Their tongues vied for dominance over the other as Twilight slowly withdrew her cock until just the tip remained inside.
>withdrew her cock until just the tip remained inside.
>just the tip
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To be perfectly honest, don't care for sex in the slightest and the moment it starts I just quickly skim it to make sure the plot isn't going anywhere and skip past it.
But that's ok, I didn't come for the sex and I'm not staying for the sex.
As long as it isn't ending up as a P.W.P
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The show itself is really inconsistent when it comes to transmutation magic. Twilight treats changing mice into "horses," as a casual spell no harder than any other, changing apples to oranges as a major test of her abilities that requires her full concentration, and considers a gender changing spell nigh impossible.
You'd think changing one chromosome of a subject would be easier than changing their entire species but apparently not.
Since cannon is all over the place on any precedent Wrabbit might use for the "colt from two mother's," spell he can make it as easy or as hard as he likes with no one able to call bull$%! on the choice.
2390100 Yeah, sorry. That bit was kinda for me. I've been bugging him about it.
That was a really well done Chapter Yay! for Spitfire being last to get pregnant, like I said before Starslayer is to great of a name to not be the last one. I feel bad for them though Twilight needs to rain that in or it could get worse I WANT MOAR If that is ok with you
Oh spike, you hang out with three girls and don't think they're gonna go girly girl on you? You innocent little dragon you.
2387092 Clearly Tia leveled both Ponyville and the Everfree when Twilight died. Duh.
Commence read.
Spike, left to the foreboding naivete.
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Doesn't make it any less disturbing to look at.
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Well, I like to cover my bases. I have had plot points get past some of my readers before.
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Awesome possum.
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Then, read on, McDuff.
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Thank you kindly.
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I think Twilight has enough on her plate at the moment.
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Not saying it will happen, not saying it won't.
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Not being female nor a doctor, I can't say either way. I suppose I have reading too much hentai to blame for that, though. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Well, Twilight (and Trixie) are going to have some explaining to do within the next couple of chapters, so you'll find out why it happened like this. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
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Would I do that to Spike? Hmmm... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
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That's a lot of Pinkies. In they go to my collection.
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The foals may be some time down the road. I'm going to have to do a time jump if I want this to happen any time soon.
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Thanks for those catches. Incidentally,
It was supposed to be a pun. Taste Bed = test bed. Sorry, I'll take my PUNishment now. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Little Spark, eh? Not bad. Not bad at all. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png
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Indeed. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png
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You're close; very close. As for the rest of your post, you're on the button. Being in a position of responsibility means doing things that you may not want to do. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
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That's right, just the tip. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_rape.png
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Hey, that's cool too. As long as you are entertained. And don't worry. There will always be plot... of both kinds. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_bedroomeyes.png
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I rely on this rather heavily sometimes. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Of course you may have MOAR. Fluttershy may always have more. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
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2393604 I have a hundred more on stand by, its handy when you have your own personal mirror pool and a willing pinkie pie.
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too bad this isn't horseshoes or hand grenades...
was it something I missed in what you wrote? how close was I? do I at least score a point?
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Seconded. That sex act would result in pain-screaming and internal bleeding.
The impregnation was a result of Trixie and Cherilee being affected by that mind altering spell a few chapters previous.
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Twilight already fixed the magic-induced estrus. I don't think that would have affected Trixie. Which actually makes me wonder about how estrus works in this story. If a horse (or pony) is not in heat, is it unable to get preggers IRL?
In addition, Twilight specifically said that the first time she used the spell, there was a sperm count of 0, so even with magic-heat, Cheerilee shouldn't have gotten pregnant. HOWEVER, Wrabbit has already stated that there will be an explanation for that oddity. I am just being nit-picky.
After all, no pony is particularly upset at the thought of another foal, and realistically, Twilight and her little herd are going to be more than capable of providing. Although the thought of Twilight living anywhere outside her library just seems wrong to me.
I want to reiterate, I am just being really nit-picky on the details. That does not mean I do not still love this story.
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Stopped the spell, sure, but their hormone levels would take a while to get back to normal.
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Perhaps. It's been a little over a week though.
looks like this story has a bigger... Plot
anyway good job where can i find some dog treats around here.
but seriously, where are those dog treats
okay enough shenanigans, LOVE YOU...
I mean your dog
or you waifu
and your story... < well that was a wierd one never expected that. I was expecting a buttmonkey or a buttstallion
bah never mind
knowing that you'llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
probably see me as that weird guy who hangs around that corner of metaphoricalalacy
in space.
allow me to comfir- I mean allay your fearssssah
I in fact hide behind that tall man with tentacles and no face who lives in your basement or your shed or under your bed.
on fire.
so that is now impossibru therfore I don't exist and this comment is rendered non existant therfore you'll never see me comming when I kidnap you and make you write more stories for the amusement of my buttstallion
look at the bottom most comment of comments I have made it will all become clear mr. FREEMAN
That update was amazing. I REALLY liked how they patched things up between the four of them. The great compromise but I like many wonder what is going on between spike and the CMC . Once again another glorious chapter and I await your next chapter
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I may have revealed too much, but I will say this: You got the who wrong on one part of that sentence. I'll leave the rest to your imagination.
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By all means, nitpick away. It will only help me to fill in the plot holes. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
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Ummm... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
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The Tall Man? I loved Phantasm! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Thank you kindly.
2395426 actually I intetionally made it out to be slenderman
BUTT that works too