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Huh. Nice to see some of what comprises dragons in this universe, and Spike's mother was a pleasant twist. The hints about Twilight being the reincarnation of some ancient unicorn (or alicorn, possibly) are interesting, and I have to wonder if the other Element bearers are the reincarnations of past lives. You wouldn't be the first story to use the idea that the Element bearers reincarnate throughout history as they are needed, the same individuals given new names and faces but retaining the traits that made them heroes.
NOOOOO!
You cant leave it at that!!
Spikes Mom! HIS MOM!
GAH!
*impliment impatience overdrive*
Oh, dear. What did Celestia forget to mention to Sal?
..... Oh well time to wait another week for the fallout from all this. All in all this was more focused on this over-arching plot you've got going involving Twi's destiny, but it was still quite good, and the reveal of Spike's mom definitely came out of nowhere, and now I'm wondering what Celestia forgot to warn Sal about.
Despite, Tia dropping Spike's mother suddenly (which I found awesome ), what I'm more interested in is what Tia forgot to mention.
Crud. This cliffhanger is going to be eating at me until the next update.
Oh, dis gon be good.
Oooooh. Background on the dragons. This should be fun. Sal seems like she will be a great source of entertainment.
Also, the bit about peanut butter and jelly sandwiches while reading books? Priceless.
Great, yet another cliffhanger ending, that's the third fic in a row today........WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!
normally i don't mind a cliffhanger, but this is to much
She forgot to bring her late books.
“Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Salanshandaraen, Spike's mother. Pleased to meet you at last, Twilight Sparkle.”
Wait what?
aww crap celestia! what did you forget to mention THIS time!?
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Your reincarnation theory will have to wait, I'm afraid. Lots to do, and I haven't even touched on what the nobles are up to lately.
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Good to see you again, Leo. Haven't seen you comment since early last story.
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Don't worry. There'll be plenty slices of life in Twilight's herd to satisfy your voyeuristic side.
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Like she said, Celestia didn't have much choice. Sal's like a living lie detector. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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True dat.
...
Ugh, I can't believe I just typed that...
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Mmmaaayyybe.
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Was that not a classic Twilightism?
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Maybe you're a masochist? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Oh, come on. Cliffhangers are how we get you all so eager to come back.
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Just wait until she sees the late fee! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
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Sorry dear, was I mumbling? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_bedroomeyes.png
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Have to come back next time to find out. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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I am shocked good sir at the blatant lack of Plain Sight in recent chapters, shocked and appalled. <Despite my reservations I do like her as a character, I love those mysterious secret agent types. Doesn't help that she's bad ass.>
Is Magical Mystery Cure going to be in the future of this series?
Celestia forgot to tell tell Sal about Twilight's relationship.
Thats what it is, i have a feel.
Woah. I just realized, Twilight she might want foals of her own someday. And her marefriends wouldn't let just one person penis her... She'd have to give them all penises. And then they gang-bang her
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Sometime I truly think Celestia is worse then Discord,
Correct me if I'm wrong, but did that last scene had to do something with the ponified AoE II intro?
Chekhov's magic wossname?
Celestia, what did you forget to do?
Poor Twilight. I am a little surprised she didn't break down when Celestia visited. Guess her herdwives have been good for her.
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Huh?
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That one.
2419079 Nah, Twi will carry Spitfires foal. Wonderbolt and Pregnant doesn't mix.
Uhrg... more and more nonpony "ancient" OC's... waitaminute: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=6ybMZJg8af0#t=260s So Celestia has some kinda deal where she won't tell the eggs who their parents are or what?
2418526 to satisfy your voyeuristic side
Why I have no idea of what you speak?
YOU TROLL ... how dare-eth thee to provide us with such a hanger of cliffs ... thou should for art be asham-ed of thine wretched-ness
looking forward to the next update XD
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If you cause her to suffer anything up to and including, permanent physical crippling, triple-heartbreak, death, zombification, and/or becoming stranded in a pocket dimension by herself, You will be receiving a very strongly worded letter of complaint.
Said letter may or may not contain several harsh judgements of your character, assumptions of the profession of your mother/female role model of choice, the current inebriation level of your father, future job prospects, and/or a highly uninformed opinion on your political views.
Pony history! Why are you exponentially more interesting than regular history?
Great chapter! Things are about to get a whole lot more interesting...
nice!
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I've created a monster.
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Unlikely. It doesn't fit in with the idea I have for who and what the Element bearers are.
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Feels are good. Feels can change. Beliefs are much harder to change.
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That's... a pretty good idea. The penises, I mean. She was always going to bear foals of her own.
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Can you tell me what about mine you didn't like? It may be a problem I need to address in mine. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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She's only immortal; not infallible.
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I had never seen that before, so no. But thanks for showing it to me. That was awesome. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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I had to look it up, but was that a reference to the librarian in Discworld? I never read the series, so I'm not sure. The first thing that popped up was the TVTropes page on Guards, Guards!, and the Chekhov's gun entry mentioned it.
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Would it be better if I threw in some ancient pony OC's? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png
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Methinks thy olde Equish needeth some polish. A fair to middling first attempt howe'er. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
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So noted. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Because it's always about what you want to hear.
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Thank you kindly.
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You mean "wossname"?
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The whole line:
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Ah. Yeah, it is specifically a Chekhov's Gun. I was going to be clever and replace gun with the...arcaneficarum, then realized I couldn't remember how to spell it, or pronounce it //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png , so I just put wossname, which I DID get from Pratchett. A bit of english slang I am fond of.
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Wow. Nice.
I had no idea. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Commence read.
So Twilight wishes to be the Dragonborn?
THOOM! ....was read as THUME :p
Oh myyyyy
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I have many good ideas. This was just one of the few that were actually relevant to anything
That was totally Awesome But we need some Plain Sight please I miss her Now what did Tia forget to say to poor Sal Also what is in stake for Twi I mean after all spike now knows that he is the son of the most ancient Dragon in Equestria It may go to the little one's head just a bit how DARE YOU MAKE IT A CLIFFHANGER I WANT MOAR! If that is alright please
"Unlikely. It doesn't fit in with the idea I have for who and what the Element bearers are."
Thanks Wrabbit that was the last puzzle piece that made everything click for me.
The Elements of Harmony are an arcaneficarum that Twilight's previous incarnation sacrificed herself to create.
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I'll try to make sure it goes somewhere good.
Arcaneficarum (ar - kayn - uh - fuh - kair - uhm) //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Ah, I see.
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Never played Skyrim, so beyond any tired "arrow to the knee" jokes, it pretty much all goes over my head.
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Thank you kindly.
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George Takei wants a word with you about stealing his catch phrase. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
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Now that the bee is in her bonnet, she will likely do so, but don't count on it being used. She and her mares are happy just having fillies.
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What a coincidence. I'm working on a scene with Plain Sight right now. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png
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Welcome back.
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It's true. Saving the world will only get you so far when you butt heads with others' sensibilities.
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Not sure on the spelling...but I think the Thume were basically the Shouts...or something along the language of Dragons.
Yet another superb chapter! I doff my hat to you good sir
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You'll have to wait and see.
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Yeah, I think I'll change that bit. I'm fairly certain that the story won't lose anything by it's deletion. I'm glad you liked the rest of it, though.
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Thank you kindly, good-er sir.
Silly rabbit, Trix are for Twilight.
standing
walked
A tor is simply an outcropping of rock left at the top of a hill after the surrounding earth has eroded away. It's not a specific shape, and they're quite obviously not on a hill.
This was an interesting chapter. Sure it's filled with exposition but it's well done and you let Twilight get plenty of adorkable moments inbetween shoving info down our mind holes. Not to mention her moments were librarian moments which we almost never get to see so thank you.
Onyx must be a really small breed to be so old yet only be as large as an Ursa Minor. The other dragons we've seen in the show looked to easily be two to three times that size, and even Spike grew to double the size of an Ursa Minor when he became greedy.
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I'm glad it was brought up that having a baby just to mean something in a relationship is a very bad thing. Not that I don't understand Trixie's motives, but...that's a really bad reason to bring a child into a relationship. I realize that Twi's relationship is solid and none of the mares would ever let their own problems fall upon the shoulders of their foals, but in general it's a bad practice.
2489802 I think Trixie realized this and felt very sorry that she got pregnant for that reason. That is not to say she regrets getting pregnant, she obviously loves Twilight and doesn't regret carrying her baby.
Um...Twilight was downstairs examining the arcaneficarum, then she's suddenly up in the main area to snatch Spike from Sal and learn she's Spike's mother.
Interesting chapter to say the least. I bet Spike is pretty happy that he gets to meet a friendly dragon for once. And snap, now we meet Spike's real mother.
~SolidFire
all hail the DOVAKIN
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I had to go back and read that multiple times, because "sorry, what??"
But... spike... And Nyx.... and Sal.... twi is.... STOP PLAYING WITH MY FEELS!
I love the way you describe all these epic and ancient things. I keep reading and hearing about them in various stories and only wish I could come up with anything half as dramatic.